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    What Matters C.14 – Health

    Story written on February 26, 2006 by Bigprisc.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=59740
    Author Notes:

    The trip to the hospital.

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    “Roddy is such a. Carmen? Carmen, are you okay?” Anna was in the midst of complaining when she noticed Carmen looked unwell. She rushed over to hold her sister, and made it just in time to prevent Carmen from falling over.

     

    Mercedes and Roddy were by her side in no time with Mercedes taking over support of her daughter and Roddy didn’t know what else to do but shuffle his feet.

     

    “Roddy, stop standing there like an idiot and call the hospital!” Anna ordered as she ran to get some water.

     

    Panic ran thru Roddy’s veins as he fumbled with the buttons on the phone

     

    “Forget it, we will drive Carmen to the hospital.”

     

    “No no hospital momma Just Shane” Carmen managed before blacking out again.

     

    “Roddy, call Shane. We are bringing her to the hospital.” Mercedes ordered.

     

    After they loaded Carmen into the car and Anna pulled out of the driveway, Roddy searched for Shane’s number shakily on Carmen’s cell phone. As it was connecting, Roddy looked worriedly his mother who was holding Carmen close in her lap.

     

    When the phone connected a crisp, “Hey, peach.” came across.

     

    “Hi, I’m er.. Rodrigo, Carmen’s brother, I just wanna say”

     

    “Calm down, Rodrigo, what’s wrong, something happened to Carmen?” Roddy could hear the panic in Shane’s voice, mirroring the tone of his own, making him even more tongue-tied.

     

     

    “Give me that,” Mercedes shifted a hand out from under Carmen and snatched the phone impatiently, “Hi Shane, I am Carmen’s mother, Carmen blacked out and we are sending her to the hospital now.”

     

    “Oh my god! Is she okay?” Shane called out in a high pitched cry.

     

    “We are pulling into the hospital soon. You come as soon as you can make it, now I know you are working, so you finish whatever you are doing, we will take care of her. Don’t you worry.”

     

    “I will be there as soon as I can!”

     

    “Momma? Shane?” Carmen murmured. She opened her eyes brieftly before slipping back into unconsciousness.

     

    Mercedes hugged her daughter nearer to her. Tears dripping silently as she tried to stay strong for her baby. Her hopeless son was panicking enough for the both of them as they zipped through traffic in break-neck speed.

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    1. LOL that’s at least the 2nd time in a row I’ve wanted to yell at the cpu screen: “You can’t leave us hanging like this!” Great update! :D I wonder if the door-sound Carmen heard might have been Carmen’s mother closing the door after having seen them together on the bed. :P And then she comes in later…or it ooh is is Carmen’s sister who’s on her way into the room. Awesoem that they called Shane lol, and Shane rushing to the hospital, and awww Sharmen. Okay, I’m a sap, I admit it. But they’re so cute together, and it’s also sad with Carmen sick, so yeah, cute, but sad. And heehee the tension of thinking they’ll get caught by Carmen’s family any time now. O.O Two thumbs up! :D

    2. okay…..good job. Nice cliffhanger. I think Carmen will do way much better when her mother knows. (Even if I think her mother already knows).And hey you don´t have to vindicate yourself. It´s your story.

    3. You did NOT just do that BP! You did not just leave us hanging like that! haha, but of course the fact that you updated makes up for this torturous cliff-hanger. You evil bitch, you :) I’m worried about Carmen, and hope her Mom meeting Shane won’t get ugly.

    4. Big, I love ya’ . . . but damn, what’s up with the cliffhangers . . . This story has had me hooked from day one . . . I too think that Carmen will be much, much better off going ahead and telling her mother, that by itself will take away some of that uncall for stress . . . I kinda’ think she has some clue though ;-D This story is some fye and you really need to continue . . . I think you got us hooked for life so go ahead and post your lil’ heart out, LOL ;-D Anyways . . . LYLAS, and post soon . . . please . . . see what you done did to me . . . you got me beggin’ and I usually don’t break all the way down to the point of where I have to beg . . . LOL TWO THUMBS UP :-)

    6. Damn! That was Great! I was so nervous while I was reading, I swore they would get caught. Loved the update. Mercedes in your story seems like an understanding mom, hope she is for Carmen’s sake. Glad Shane is remaining by Carmen’s side despite the fact that they’ll be found out (but I wouldn’t expext any less from Shane anyway). Post soon, plz.

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