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    what if you’re stuck in that place? part 7

    Story written on February 16, 2008 by adicttosharmen.
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    Words: 2505
    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=68663
    Author Notes:

    I’m out…

     

    “Fine, Fine, fine” she said getting my bag and opening the door and throwing it outside “You want to go? GO!”

     

    “Carmen c’mon don’t be like this” I went towards her and she pushed me

     

    “Get out NOW. GO!” she said pointing outside.

     

    “Fine” I said going out of the room and she shut the room so laud then when I was waiting for the elevator, I saw people getting out of the rooms alarmed, looking at where the sound came from. I cant believe she just threw me out… she’s crazy… it hurt leaving her like that… but I came here for  a reason and that’s the contest… I would give it up for her but not because she just wants it… its only 5 days…. Its only 5 days… that’s all I have to think about. Beth put alt of money on me so I cant let her down. When I get to the loby I see all this paramedics and police mans running to the elevator… something was happenieng… and I had this feeling… Carmen…. Fuck… I took the next elevator to our floor again and when I get there everyone was there.. someone was in the floor of the corridor. I pushed people put of the was and a police man won let me thru and thats when I see Carmen unconscious in the floor.

     

    “You can’t go any further lady”

     

    “That’s Carmen”

     

    “Yea everyone knows that”

     

    “She’s my girlfriend” I said punching him and passing by, another police man grabbed me.

     

    “hey hey you I know you know her, but the paramedics are doing their work ok” I god, o god , o god… that was all I was thinking about. They got her breathing again but had to took her to the hospital.

     

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    3 hours later I was in her room in the hospital waiting for her to wake up ans did her manager and 2 other guys… 

     

    “um…” she said waking up

     

    “Carmen!” her manager said

     

    “Where am I?”

     

    “Where do you think huh?” her manager was mad. She laughed “You are making this really hard on us Carmen. How he fuck do you think this is going to make you win I mean you know what we went thru to-”

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    2. Damn, Carmen wuz a bitch and a half mane . . . and you aint gettin off dat eazy babez ;p, you gotta post more mane . . . you can’t get us all rilled up like this and then jus pull out by sayin ‘the end’ . . . . So, come on chicka, put wateva you doin right now down and get to typin, lol . . . but on da real, you doin an amazin job so plz continue ~puppy pout~ Like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;p . . . Stank, da’ one and only, chicka =D Holla!!!

    4. nooooooooooooo this is tooooooooooo bad!!!!! its heartbreaking!!!!!!!carmen cant be such a bitch! she couldnt have all this planned from the beginning. I mean she is craqzy and quite shelfish but to have this all planned would be tooo much!!!! plus fromthe flash back you wrote inthe las chapter i didnt get that that person was her girlfriend, maybe it was somebody else who died……..i think that carmen has feelings for Shane i dont think that she is just using her!oh god……man you write too good!the begining was sooo sweet , i could just imagine shane staying with carmen for 3 weeks and taking care of ehr and then…..all this shit! SIGH , i want this to be fixed…please please please please please……………..

    8. [chanting] Sequel, sequel, sequel! C’mon, if “What if You’re Stuck in that Place?” ends here, then a sequel is in order. Yes? Pleeease? Or maybe it won’t be the end after all? (wishful thinking)

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