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    what if you’re stuck in that place? part 7

    Story written on February 16, 2008 by adicttosharmen.
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    Number of Comments: 9
    Words: 2505
    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=68663
    Author Notes:

    I’m out…

     

    “No”

     

     

    “Carm I have to… its for the contest”

     

    “Then I’m going with you” she said picking her own clothes

     

    “Baby no, you have to stay here and do your photo shoot”

     

    “No I don’t care about that shit, I want to be with you” she said with her eyes full of tears

     

    “Carmen… it’s only for 5 days, I’ll be back before you know it”  picking my clothes

     

    “NO, you’re suppose to take care of me, you said you wouldn’t leave me… what if I star doing drugs again?”

     

    “You are still using…”

     

    “OK but not that much Shane… only so that I can be ok”

     

    “Look the drug problem we will solve it later on, when you don’t have to be pretty all the time” I said putting my clothes in my bag and grabbing my wallet and ipod

     

    “Stay”

     

    “I cant Carmen, you’re being childish”

     

    “I don’t care, I can’t to this without you” She started crying and my heart melted at the sight. I went towards her and hugged her. She was crying loudly and holding to me like if her life depended on it. When she calmed down and my shirt was all wet

     

    “I have to go” letting her go and grabbing my bag and going to the door

     

    “NO NO NOOO!” she grabbed my bag and puts it, on her bed again

     

    “Carmen” I said getting frustrated… I have to do this… she has to do things on her own. And maybe being apart for a while, will do us good… don’t get me wrong I don’t want to go but…

     

    “I need you” she said, face all red from the crying

     

    “You don’t need me, you need to get yourself together” she needs to know that she can’t control me all the time

     

    “I need you” I hugged her again

     

    “You’ll be alright”

     

    “NO…. I love you Shane” she said still crying and from my shoulder… I cant believe she said that… and NOW!

     

    “….I love you too….. But I have to go” I got back. I looked her in the eyes and she stopped crying and her face turned mad.

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    2. Damn, Carmen wuz a bitch and a half mane . . . and you aint gettin off dat eazy babez ;p, you gotta post more mane . . . you can’t get us all rilled up like this and then jus pull out by sayin ‘the end’ . . . . So, come on chicka, put wateva you doin right now down and get to typin, lol . . . but on da real, you doin an amazin job so plz continue ~puppy pout~ Like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;p . . . Stank, da’ one and only, chicka =D Holla!!!

    4. nooooooooooooo this is tooooooooooo bad!!!!! its heartbreaking!!!!!!!carmen cant be such a bitch! she couldnt have all this planned from the beginning. I mean she is craqzy and quite shelfish but to have this all planned would be tooo much!!!! plus fromthe flash back you wrote inthe las chapter i didnt get that that person was her girlfriend, maybe it was somebody else who died……..i think that carmen has feelings for Shane i dont think that she is just using her!oh god……man you write too good!the begining was sooo sweet , i could just imagine shane staying with carmen for 3 weeks and taking care of ehr and then…..all this shit! SIGH , i want this to be fixed…please please please please please……………..

    8. [chanting] Sequel, sequel, sequel! C’mon, if “What if You’re Stuck in that Place?” ends here, then a sequel is in order. Yes? Pleeease? Or maybe it won’t be the end after all? (wishful thinking)

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