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    what if you’re stuck in that place? part 7

    Story written on February 16, 2008 by adicttosharmen.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=68663
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    I’m out…

    And I never did leave her. For 3 weeks I staid with her. Only going to my room when I needed cloths… which I never did, because I wore hers… baggy is a very good look on me. Always stay in her room, always, unless it was a photo shoot or something for the contest… and we went together. Talked to Alice and Dana sometimes, the only reason we got out of the room one night because she practically begged us to come to the movies with her and Dana… and they kissed… they think I didn’t see anything… but I did. 

     

    In the contest we are down too 10 models… pretty good huh?… at this point I don’t care who wins anymore… I just know I found great friends and a great… I don’t think we are girl friends… love? I don’t know… I mean I know but I just don’t want to say it… even if it is to my self…  but life is good… and that’s all that matters

     

    Right now I’m in her room just reading the paper while Carmen is on the shower…

     

    ‘RiNg rInG’ my cell.

     

    “Yea?”

     

    “Shane get dressed you’ve got to go to Monaco for 5 days” Beth

     

    “What? Why?”

     

    “The contest Shane each were given different locations for a shoot…”

     

    “Oh um, what about Carmen?”

     

    “That bitch gets to stay here Shane… that means she’s winning, and she takes better photos so you better nail this one” I don’t care that she’s winning… I mean, I care but I’m not sad about it…. Then Carmen got out of the bathroom wearing just a towel and with her cell phone on her ear and she was crying

     

    “NO!” She said to the person on the other line “I don’t care…. fuck you” she hanged up

     

    “I’ll call you back”

     

    “No, Shane you have to be on the lobby in 30 minutes” I hanged up. Carmen was looking at me with tears

     

    “What’s wrong?” I asked

     

    “You have to go?” I started picking up my clothes that were everywhere in the room looking at her

     

    “Only for 5 days” I said putting the clothes on the bed and going towards her

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    2. Damn, Carmen wuz a bitch and a half mane . . . and you aint gettin off dat eazy babez ;p, you gotta post more mane . . . you can’t get us all rilled up like this and then jus pull out by sayin ‘the end’ . . . . So, come on chicka, put wateva you doin right now down and get to typin, lol . . . but on da real, you doin an amazin job so plz continue ~puppy pout~ Like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;p . . . Stank, da’ one and only, chicka =D Holla!!!

    4. nooooooooooooo this is tooooooooooo bad!!!!! its heartbreaking!!!!!!!carmen cant be such a bitch! she couldnt have all this planned from the beginning. I mean she is craqzy and quite shelfish but to have this all planned would be tooo much!!!! plus fromthe flash back you wrote inthe las chapter i didnt get that that person was her girlfriend, maybe it was somebody else who died……..i think that carmen has feelings for Shane i dont think that she is just using her!oh god……man you write too good!the begining was sooo sweet , i could just imagine shane staying with carmen for 3 weeks and taking care of ehr and then…..all this shit! SIGH , i want this to be fixed…please please please please please……………..

    8. [chanting] Sequel, sequel, sequel! C’mon, if “What if You’re Stuck in that Place?” ends here, then a sequel is in order. Yes? Pleeease? Or maybe it won’t be the end after all? (wishful thinking)

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