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To Live Without You (Chapter 17)
“Thank you Miss Mar, there you have it, one half of the unstoppable undefeated doubles team. Good luck today Victoria and with ESPN I’m Chuck Hill signing off.”
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Victoria stepped into the locker room where Dana was getting dressed, it was obvious the double’s partner was more than pissed and the athlete really did want to deal with it now.
“I know you’re going to give me so much shit about not showing up to rehab but I can’t deal with it right now so can we wait until after the match. I already have a fuckload on my mind I don’t need that too.” Dana said, her eyes were red and burning, against her better judgment she’d taken a couple of pain pills to help her through the match and now she was regretting it. Every time Dana took the medication she felt different, at first it was good, there was no pain and she was even mildly happy. But lately with every instance she felt worse, less balanced, Alice hadn’t called and it had been two days. The athlete also hadn’t called Victoria, too wrapped in her own situation; Dana hadn’t even trained the day before.
The athlete continued to prepare for the match not looking at Victoria, only concentrating on wrapping her ankle. The double’s partner grabbed her bag and did the same, obviously getting more upset by the second, Victoria finally blew her gasket standing up and throwing her bag across the locker room. Yelling at the athlete as loudly as she could,
“Fuck what you need Dana, you only care about what you need. I just did an interview with Chuck Hill; I could have used your support. Every one is always there for you, where are you when those same people need you huh? You use me and I stick around because I think that maybe you’ll realize what you have. I give you everything and you can’t even give me an excuse…and don’t think I don’t know about your pill popping because I do. You’ve used me lied to me and ignored me, but I’m not going to do this anymore…I told you I was in love with you, and you don’t even acknowledge it either way…Fuck you Dane.” The athlete only looked with a surprised expression on her face as Victoria threw on plain clothes and began walking out of the locker room. Dana yelled to her double’s partner just as Victoria made it to the door.
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(31 votes, average: 3.61 out of 5)
I do feel bad for Cliff bless him, but come on, it’s Dana and Alice, they gotta end up together! Great chapter, can’t wait for the next post!
You know I love this story and the fact that you’re writing it makes me smile so big. Whoever demanded the story must be very lucky, lol. I was worried with Cliff’s words to Alice cause they were so heartfelt and I can see her being a pushover. I know she cares about him but there is only one person she is really meant to be with. Go Victoria.. I love her backbone! It was about time to kick Dana to the curb for her bad behavior and to give her that wakeup call. I guess Alice is quick to forgive Shane.. although I’m not sure I could be the same way. I don’t have to tell you how much I enjoyed the Gena/Vic moment… it was steamy, lol. I hope you have more planned for them. And I hope Alice and Dana are going to have a hell of a reunion… or is that me wishing too hard? I’ll hope for the best cause I trust you, CD.. and hope is all I have right now. I’ll be waiting patiently for the next chapter… but if you make me wait too long I’ll be on you, lol.
It’s nice to see Dana with a friend unrelated to the group. Cliff seems too good to be true. I hope he doesn’t blow up.
sooooooooooo glad your back on the writting wagon! That’s great becuase you write them so well. This chap was so great so emotional i kinda feel bad for clif lol BUT poor Dana! plzzz post soon! :)
Hey, it was good to see an update. This story is going along really well, congratulations. As for Soul Singing, I’m trying my hardest to get the next chapter finished.
I absolutely love this story, so glad to see that you posted again soon. I think you’re an amazing writer and i can’t wait to continue the story! Thanks for the update, Go Danish!
*sigh* I’m content until you update again. I freaking LOVE this story! I feel bad for Cliff, but I mean please, Danish are just meant to be! :-) Great job, and I’m glad that you’re updating more frequently. Writers block sucks, I know, so I hope it’s leaving you alone!
Hi, im really lovin this story, very emotional. Glad shane is with alice right now, she needs a friend and poor cliff and dana. keep it up and hopefully no more writers block hey. thanks.
Another really good chapter ClosetDana.I really can’t wait to read what happens next. =)
Whoo-freaking-hoo! I love this story. It’s one of my favorites. It went by so fast though! LOL Keep it up and post soon. Glad to hear that your writers block is getting better :D Seriously, great chapter!
Like I said before, I thought the conversation with Cliff was realistic. An I loved the remark Victoria made. :D And I agree with you, the conversation with Shane needed to be a funny one. There will be enough to think and talk about for Alice and Dana. I’m glad Gena convinced Victoria to be there for Dana. Dana can really use a good friend right now. Will Alice find out that Dana has a drugproblem? I wonder how she will react… But I’m still praying for a happy ending (Victora is already out of the picture as a love interest, Cliff will be next…and then only one thing can happen). :D