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To Live Without You (Chapter 17)
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“You kissed Dana? Your best friend Dana?” Alice sucked in a breath and closed her eyes,
“No, I kissed my ex-girlfriend Dana.” Cliff looked down for a moment then put both hands on his head slowly pressing hard against his skull. He shut his eyes tight hoping this was some kind of joke or dream or hallucination. Cliff took a deep breath and his eyes popped open looking over to Alice,
“Okay, ok you kissed her…am I overreacting? Is this a heat of the moment, relive the memories fluke? Or is this the beginning of your break up speech.” Cliff said, he was surprisingly calm, but the more Alice thought about it the more it made sense. Why would the most perfect man in the universe scream and yell at you when you cheat on him? No the most perfect man in the universe would turn to you and say.
“Alice before you even go into your speech that I’m sure you pre-recorded for me; let me say this. I love you and I don’t want to loose you because I’d be lost in a world that didn’t have you in it. I can’t make you love me and I don’t know whether or not you’re in love with Dana but I know that there was a reason you broke up. And there was a reason we met, and I wish you’d give me a chance.” Cliff said holding Alice’s hands and staring in her eyes, the intensity of his gaze made it difficult to think or even remember what the writer was going to say.
Alice stood up quickly, running her hands through her hair and letting out a frustrated sigh.
“You know this bullshit with Dana has been going on for months…Everyone is pulling me in a different direction but no one is asking me what I want—“ Alice said as Cliff stood up capturing her gaze,
“What do you want Alice?” Cliff’s voice stayed calm as he asked although he was loosing his patience with this situation. Alice closed her eyes and shook her head quickly, trying to block out the sound. She needed time to think, time to sort this shit out by herself. The writer took a step back from Cliff as he tried to take Alice into his arms,
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I do feel bad for Cliff bless him, but come on, it’s Dana and Alice, they gotta end up together! Great chapter, can’t wait for the next post!
You know I love this story and the fact that you’re writing it makes me smile so big. Whoever demanded the story must be very lucky, lol. I was worried with Cliff’s words to Alice cause they were so heartfelt and I can see her being a pushover. I know she cares about him but there is only one person she is really meant to be with. Go Victoria.. I love her backbone! It was about time to kick Dana to the curb for her bad behavior and to give her that wakeup call. I guess Alice is quick to forgive Shane.. although I’m not sure I could be the same way. I don’t have to tell you how much I enjoyed the Gena/Vic moment… it was steamy, lol. I hope you have more planned for them. And I hope Alice and Dana are going to have a hell of a reunion… or is that me wishing too hard? I’ll hope for the best cause I trust you, CD.. and hope is all I have right now. I’ll be waiting patiently for the next chapter… but if you make me wait too long I’ll be on you, lol.
It’s nice to see Dana with a friend unrelated to the group. Cliff seems too good to be true. I hope he doesn’t blow up.
sooooooooooo glad your back on the writting wagon! That’s great becuase you write them so well. This chap was so great so emotional i kinda feel bad for clif lol BUT poor Dana! plzzz post soon! :)
Hey, it was good to see an update. This story is going along really well, congratulations. As for Soul Singing, I’m trying my hardest to get the next chapter finished.
I absolutely love this story, so glad to see that you posted again soon. I think you’re an amazing writer and i can’t wait to continue the story! Thanks for the update, Go Danish!
*sigh* I’m content until you update again. I freaking LOVE this story! I feel bad for Cliff, but I mean please, Danish are just meant to be! :-) Great job, and I’m glad that you’re updating more frequently. Writers block sucks, I know, so I hope it’s leaving you alone!
Hi, im really lovin this story, very emotional. Glad shane is with alice right now, she needs a friend and poor cliff and dana. keep it up and hopefully no more writers block hey. thanks.
Another really good chapter ClosetDana.I really can’t wait to read what happens next. =)
Whoo-freaking-hoo! I love this story. It’s one of my favorites. It went by so fast though! LOL Keep it up and post soon. Glad to hear that your writers block is getting better :D Seriously, great chapter!
Like I said before, I thought the conversation with Cliff was realistic. An I loved the remark Victoria made. :D And I agree with you, the conversation with Shane needed to be a funny one. There will be enough to think and talk about for Alice and Dana. I’m glad Gena convinced Victoria to be there for Dana. Dana can really use a good friend right now. Will Alice find out that Dana has a drugproblem? I wonder how she will react… But I’m still praying for a happy ending (Victora is already out of the picture as a love interest, Cliff will be next…and then only one thing can happen). :D