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The Reluctant (chapter 10)
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“That’s not true! I have a very high alcohol tolerance. It would take at least 15 minutes for me to get trashed.” She closed her eyes and rubbed her forehead.
“Alice…” I spotted dark brown hair and a skinny figure approaching, and spun on my heels to run back inside.
“Shit! Bye!” Shane grabbed me by the shoulders and pulled me back away from the door.
“Oh, no you don’t. Talk to her, Al. She wants to make up with you.” I refused to look at Dana, and kept my eyes on my shoes.
“Bullshit she does. She just wants to make sure that I’m not on the verge of suicide so she can feel better about herself.” She tilted her head back, giving me a sympathetic look as I met her eyes.
“That’s not true and you know it. Please, just try and talk to her?” I crossed my arms again, trying to make myself appear small.
“Hey Alice.” Dana said hesitantly as she walked up to me and Shane. I just nodded in response. “Glad to see you actually outside.” She let a small grin play on her face, and I almost broke down.
“What, you think just because you broke my heart into a thousand, no, make that a million little pieces that I would lock myself in that stupid little closet of a room and not come out for the entire trip just to avoid you? Fuck that.” She seemed taken aback, and kind of hurt. I instantly regretted saying it. Wait, no. No I didn’t.
“Alice, I’m so sorry that-“ Her glance caught something in the distance and her expression changed from sorrow to…what was that? Fear? “Fuck! I’ve got to go.” She mumbled, making a beeline for the door and rushing inside. I watched her leave.
“Al, that was a bit harsh.” Shane sad warningly. I glared up at her.
“What?! She needed to hear it! She can’t just act like nothing happened, like she didn’t completely ruin my life. I’m not just another mouth in lipstick vogue, ya know?”
“Are you quoting Costello?”
“There you two are!” That high pitched squealing voice. Great. I looked over at Tonya, expressionless. “Have either of you seen Dana?”
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I just wanted to turn off my pc and go to bed, but I had to check this site and saw you posted and I had to read it (I’m so going to regret this tomorrow morning when my alarm goes off way to early…;)). I couldn’t get to comment on your last chapter but Alice, Shane and Jenny did really terrorize Dana and Tonya in that one. :D lol @ Alice picking up her on phone in french. Dana ofcourse wouldn’t recognize her voice at all. :P I’m glad Dana broke up with Tonya. But does Dana really want to be just friends with Alice right now?!
Another awesome update. Your story rocks so far. Hope you post again soon!
awww damn..poor alice. how the fuck would i console someone who I loved so dearly who broke my heart..breaking up with someone else. oh wait..I have..lol Anyways, great update, i can’t wait to read what happens next. Bring Danish together!
I second everything that Poopy says – friends indeed!!!
awwww dork, that was adorable. Sorry i couldn’t post late time, but the last chapter was hilarious and awesome too. You know, i love this fic, because even though there is still drama and angst, you still make it funny. Alice’s heart is broken, but she’s not medicated or depressed. I love that about this fic. And the fact that shane and al are so tight and what not. Oh and i especially like how dana and alice don’t think they can be friends again, but they can be. They were fine at the end of the chapter, except for the fact they still love eachother. I dunno, but well done dork. I’m loving it like Mcdonalds haha. anywhoooo post soon!
Another great chapter. So Dana broke up with Tonya huh? Yeah, like our girls will stay “just friends” now. Psshhh. When hell freezes over maybe. I am right, right? Right? :-/
oh my precious little dana…so blind of the love…but i see the love! lol, atleast we are workign towards a happy allice and thats somthing!
Great chapter, i liked the crazy teenage girl after alice! Glad to see alice and dana getting friendly again! Keep up the good work!
First off, sorry that I couldn’t review the last chapter ,which was fuckin hilarious btw, but I’ve been moving things out of my old apartment and I finally set my computer back up. Anyways, this chapter made my night, since Dana finally broke up with Satan. Oh, sorry I meant that she broke up with Tonya:) I just hope that the just friends phase with Danish will be over soon. Great chap and I’ll just have to wait impatiently for the next:)