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    The Promise – Short Story

    Story written on April 27, 2010 by GrindRight.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=75549
    Author Notes:

    A sequel to “The Night Has Been Unkind.”

    Hearing the truth in Bette’s words, Tina looked back up to her. "You hurt me … so badly. You broke my heart Bette, and I can’t pretend it never happened … I trusted you."

    "T, you can trust me. I swear. It’s still me. It’s still Bette. I’m still the woman you’ve loved all your life. You’re still the woman … I’ve always loved," Bette sobbed, "I know we can fix this." Trying to blink them back only forced the tears down her cheeks, collecting near her chin. Her watery vision was distracting, but she wouldn’t let up. "I made the WORST mistake I could have ever made, and neither of us will every forget it."

    Tina was sniffling quietly, trying to keep from crying.

    "I know that. But I also know that this isn’t over," she whispered, shifting so she was sitting in front of Tina who had her back to the headboard. "T. I’ll do anything to prove how much you mean to me. Anything." It almost sounded like a question, but she continued on. "Just give me a chance … to prove that I will never … ever hurt you again."

    Tina looked away, trying to collect herself, but closed her eyes when she felt Bette’s hand against her cheek. It was so comforting.

    "I don’t blame you if you wanna run," Bette said as calmly as she could, her voice cracking at random intervals, "… But just know that I’ll never give up loving you. I’ll be some old crazy woman …" Bette started with a little chuckle, hearing the same small laughter from Tina, "… Waving her cane around, interrogating anyone I can find … just to see you one more time. One last time."

    Tina tried not to smile, wiping her tears on the shoulder of her shirt. And just as she thought about how sad that last statement was, she realized that she wouldn’t want to spend her last moments with anyone else.

    "You need me," Bette sobbed, putting her head down in shame, "You need me so badly … and you don’t even trust me enough to hold you." She couldn’t stop crying, trying to remind herself to finish her explanation, but she just didn’t have the strength. She kept trying to take deeper breaths, but it didn’t seem to be much use. 
    Until Tina freed one of her hands and placed it over Bette’s.

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    11. Hi GR, That was extraordinary.I love how Bette and Tina talked things through before they make hot sexy love.The transferring between scenes brought up so some delicious and dramatic images.Bette and Tina needed this to happen before they could start on the long road to rebuild their relationship.Bette had to take ownership of her affair and prove to Tina that Tina is the only one who holds her heart.Tina had to hear this.Just perfect.More wonderful writing from a favorite author.Thank you so much for sharing.Your Loyal Fan.

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