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    The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty

    Story written on July 4, 2005 by dreiser.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=55203
    Author Notes:

    Alice has a meeting with her bosses, Dana experiences her first beer and bubble bath celebration, and Howie has help coming out.

    Continuing her conversation with Howie, Dana entered her bathroom,
    faced the mirror and pulled out her ponytail holder to let her hair
    fall against her shoulders, laughing at whatever smart ***** comment her
    brother made. Her mouth open and ready to respond only to have all
    words escape her as she looked at what was in her large and very
    spacious bath tub.

    There lay Alice, a languid smile playing on her lips, beer bottle in
    hand, and her body frustratingly hidden from view by a huge pile of
    bubbles. Her smile turned mischievous and she scooped up a handful and
    playfully blew them at Dana.

    “Join me?” drawled Alice in a delicious invite.

    “I’ll talk to you later, How,” Dana said, abruptly ending the call and
    turning off her phone for good measure. Her eyes fixed forward, unable
    to think of looking somewhere other than at Alice, she put her phone
    down on the sink. “Beer and a bubble bath? What’s the occasion?”

    “There has to be an occasion?” teased Alice, taking a slow drink of her
    beer and grinning around it. “I personally think beer and bubble baths
    go hand in hand.”

    “Right,” said Dana sardonically, lowering the toilet lid and sitting
    down. Peering up while she untied her shoes quickly and efficiently,
    the athlete smiled and said, “I know you, Al. Something good happened
    to bring on the beer and bubbles and I want to know what.”

    Unable to hold in her excitement, Alice sank her beer into the bucket
    by the tub filled with ice and other bottles of alcohol. Facing Dana
    and watching the tennis player remove her shirt and bra while she
    spoke. “You know how I was doing all those KCRW promotions during *****
    Pride? Well, they were using them as auditions or a test or something.
    Long story short?” Alice beamed at Dana who met their eyes as she
    paused in shimmying out of her jogging shorts. “You’re looking at the
    new KCRW late night DJ!”

    “Al! That’s great!” Trying to kick her shorts completely off, Dana
    hopped over to Alice, stumbling in the process. She stopped at the edge
    of the tub and the blonde slid upwards out of the water to lightly hold
    Dana’s hips steady, helping her regain her balance.

    “Don’t hurt yourself,” Alice laughed, pushing aside locks of brown hair
    that had fallen into the tennis player’s eyes thanks to her near
    falling incident. She tenderly cupped Dana’s cheek then moved up for a
    kiss as she said, “I have plans for us that require you to be in
    perfect health.”

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    1. This was a great piece of writing. Everything fell into place. I adored the conversation between Al and D’s mommy in the end…*sighs* That was so sweet.

    2. loved it! love the relationship between Alice and Sharon – you can see Sharon needing that kind of kick in the ass… and her appreciating alice for it.
      oh and “I never wanted David Lee out of Van Halen but sometimes shit happens,” lmao – possibly the funniest line i have read yet!

    3. I know I said this before, but I totally loved that you commented on Gabby’s wardrobe. And I loved the interaction between Gabby and Alice because there was affection and suspicion and all that in there and it was really dead-on. And you already know I loved what you did with Sharon and Alice.

      And that suit Howie wore is kick ass hot.

    6. Well, I’m sure the whole chapter is wonderful as always, but for now I can’t seem to get past this:

      “There lay Alice, a languid smile playing on her lips, beer bottle in hand, and her body frustratingly hidden from view by a huge pile of bubbles. Her smile turned mischievous and she scooped up a handful and playfully blew them at Dana.

      “Join me?” drawled Alice in a delicious invite.”

      Thanks for the image, Dreiser. I really have to stop reading this stuff!

    7. that was a gr8 chapter i love the interaction alice has with danas mother bless….. i cnt wait 2 c where u take the characters nxt…

    8. First, loved the bathtub scene. Second, The Alice and Sharon scene was great as well. It really brough a depth to Sharon that I always wanted to see. Dana’s parents always reminded me so much of my own.

    9. great chapter. love how they’re long and very detailed. (bathtub scene-nice) and alice and sharon… so cool. oh and alice coming clean w/ the gabby thing and dana trusting alice. love it!

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