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    The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty

    Story written on July 4, 2005 by dreiser.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=55203
    Author Notes:

    Alice has a meeting with her bosses, Dana experiences her first beer and bubble bath celebration, and Howie has help coming out.

    Sitting
    next to Rich on uncomfortable plastic chairs and staring at the closed
    door to the largest conference room at KCRW, Alice had a flashback to
    Elementary School. Countless times she sat just like this, waiting for
    Principal Henley to emerge from behind the door ready with stern word
    and detention slips or clean up duty as punishment. Shuddering in
    disgust upon recalling the stinky mop she had to use many a time on the
    gymnasium floors, Alice hoped her fate today wouldn’t be anything
    remotely similar.

    Though she had no idea why the bigwigs in charge of running the radio
    station would want her to mop anything. That didn’t seem like most
    productive form of punishment. Firing her was more their alley and
    that’s what Alice was really worried about. Especially considering all
    the things that had gone wrong in regards the nonstop KCRW promotions
    she did at ***** Pride.

    “Do you think we’re in trouble?” asked Rich ominously, peering around
    her to stare at the closed conference room doors. “Because I feel like
    we’re in trouble. In fact, I feel like I’m going to get spanked pretty
    soon. And not the fun sort of spanking.”

    “I feel the same way,” replied Alice and Rich started to form a
    somewhat perverted grin. Which is why she added drolly, “Minus the
    spanking part.”

    “Why must people always minus the spanking?” Rich pondered to no one in particular. “It makes the spanking depressed.”

    Chuckling at this, Alice started her joking come back but stopped on
    seeing the conference doors open at one of their coworkers emerge with
    a look of quiet resignation. They made no moves to talk to him as he
    was obviously lost in his own thoughts and because Mimi soon emerged
    from the room after him.

    “Alice?” said Mimi with a smile. “Would you join us please?”

    “Sure, you know me, I’m all for the joining,” said Alice nervously,
    rising to her feet and unconsciously adjusting her button up shirt as
    she did so. She paused and looked back at a perplexed Rich who sat on
    the edge of his plastic chair ready to stand at any moment. Then
    looking to Mimi who wore an expectant expression, she asked, “What
    about Rich?”

    “We’ll be talking to Rich separately,” Mimi assured, smiling still and
    pushing back the door for Alice. She nodded to the inside of the room
    and said, “Join us please?”

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    1. This was a great piece of writing. Everything fell into place. I adored the conversation between Al and D’s mommy in the end…*sighs* That was so sweet.

    2. loved it! love the relationship between Alice and Sharon – you can see Sharon needing that kind of kick in the ass… and her appreciating alice for it.
      oh and “I never wanted David Lee out of Van Halen but sometimes shit happens,” lmao – possibly the funniest line i have read yet!

    3. I know I said this before, but I totally loved that you commented on Gabby’s wardrobe. And I loved the interaction between Gabby and Alice because there was affection and suspicion and all that in there and it was really dead-on. And you already know I loved what you did with Sharon and Alice.

      And that suit Howie wore is kick ass hot.

    6. Well, I’m sure the whole chapter is wonderful as always, but for now I can’t seem to get past this:

      “There lay Alice, a languid smile playing on her lips, beer bottle in hand, and her body frustratingly hidden from view by a huge pile of bubbles. Her smile turned mischievous and she scooped up a handful and playfully blew them at Dana.

      “Join me?” drawled Alice in a delicious invite.”

      Thanks for the image, Dreiser. I really have to stop reading this stuff!

    7. that was a gr8 chapter i love the interaction alice has with danas mother bless….. i cnt wait 2 c where u take the characters nxt…

    8. First, loved the bathtub scene. Second, The Alice and Sharon scene was great as well. It really brough a depth to Sharon that I always wanted to see. Dana’s parents always reminded me so much of my own.

    9. great chapter. love how they’re long and very detailed. (bathtub scene-nice) and alice and sharon… so cool. oh and alice coming clean w/ the gabby thing and dana trusting alice. love it!

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