Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of NC-17. Age verification is required to proceed.
The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty Two
Login to add story to favorites
(16 votes, average: 4.50 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
“I hate Gabby ***** Deveaux,” said Shane, making a noise of disgust.
“Me too,” Dana laughed, rolling her eyes and taking a deep breath. She
nibbled on her bottom lip and curled then uncurled her fingers as her
hand bunched into fists, resting on her jean covered knees. “I couldn’t
talk to Al about this because it would only upset her and I don’t want
to do that plus I mean, I could just be acting paranoid or stupid
and–”
“Dane,” interrupted Shane kindly, touching one of the bunched up hands
and forming a small accepting smile. “Just tell me. It’ll be okay, I
swear it.”
“I think Gabby is only pretending to be Al’s friend again, and
she’s using that and her relationship with Lara to, you know, work her
way back into Al’s life so she can wait for the right time to get back
with her,” the words quickly spilled from Dana’s lips and she darted
her eyes nervously over to Shane who wore a blank expression for
several moments. When no response came, she murmured hesitantly,
“Shane?”
“Gabby Deveaux is such a *****,” stated Shane plainly, meeting Dana’s
gaze. “I don’t think you’re wrong, Dane I think you’re right but it
sucks because you’re totally right, you know?”
“Huh?” Dana blinked in confusion.
Waving her hands in a small circle, Shane leaned back into the couch
and explained, “You’re totally right about not telling Al. I mean, I
don’t think she’d see it like we do.” Forming a sad but wry expression,
Shane continued, “Al’s always had a notorious weakness when it came to
seeing how ***** Gabby really is and I doubt that’s changed. Even if
she’s head over heels in love with you, Dane, I don’t think she’d want
to believe what Gabby is really up to.”
“Al sees the good in people,” said Dana, a sad but affectionate smile
tugging on her lips. She looked at Shane and chuckled. “It’s
part of why I love her but it can also be a pain in the ***** at
times.”
“Especially about Gabby Deveaux,” Shane agreed with a nod. She frowned
deeply then tilted her to rest on the couch cushion and maintain eye
contact with Dana. “She’s too ***** smart to give anything away if
that’s her plan. I hate her but even I have to admit she’s smart as
*****. There’s no way for her to be stupid and get out of the amount of
***** she has over the years.”
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
ahh – formatting fun!
Congrats on the award, well deserved!
Ok – a few things cause this is possibly your best chapter –
Gabby fucking Deveaux – loved it! especially when Shane spit it out with the same disdain!
Alice in leather on riding a motorcycle – need I say more? Women on a bike – always hot, alice in leather on a bike, damn! very nice visual….
Your shane is just awesome!
“White chocolate is oppressed,” lmao.
oh – and the whole big gesture vs paying attention and doing something that fit Alice, great detail – and it is so great when you realize someone truly hears what you say.
ok – i could go on and on – cause this really was a great chapter – but I’ll leave it with nice switch with sex scene. Well done on the scene in general, but the switch, nice. All around, well done!
Dude, this was such a funny chapter. You balanced it very well!!!! And the sex scenes are just so perfectly apt for these two. ( I prbably have to watch some of these lez movies and chuck in my opinion of them…lol)
Great as always. Congratulations for the award, even I don’t understand the category (?), anyway you deserve it, as much as Sulkygeek deserve other (ok I don’t mind in wich one).
Now I’m officially confused, I always tought that the worst lez movie was Bar Girls (even scribegrrrl wrote something once), and I already watched it and it’s really bad. Now I’m curious and I have to get Claire of the Moon to see wich is worst, lol. Thanks.
Wonderful as usual. The visuals in this chapter were very clear and intriguing. The shouter in the next room will be greatly dissapointed with the amount of stamina that Dana and Alice have… very amusing. I had that last scene play out in my head very clearly complete with sexy noises and funny shouting.
Don’t be sad, maybe someday these movies become classics, you know like every bad movie that really deserve that title in this world, lol. I have to confess I have a weakness for those, haha, I’m a fan of series B movies (I don’t know how you call them in english, so sorry) and Ed Wood works, even I have his novels :P . Ok, better I left before I confess more odd things. Thanks for share your talent.
Claire of the Moon is only the worst lesbian movie in my opinion and the opinion of most of my friends. That subject is highly up for debate. Bar Girls is just as bad though. God… why are so many lesbian movies crappy? It makes me sad inside. lol.