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The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty Two
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Perching on the couch, Dana looked around the house and noted how
different it looked from the last time she had seen it. There were
little signs of Carmen all over, from her DJ equipment to her cds and
even a shirt hanging over a nearby recliner that she had seen the
latina wearing at one time. Smiling softly, she was happy to discover
this because for so many years it had always been just the three of
them.
They were the three musketeers Alice, Shane, and Dana. Lately it
seemed like they split up but Dana didn’t see that as true at all
because the bond of friendship remained wholly in tact. They were still
friends and they were still close. The only break that occurred was the
three of them spending less time together because they had finally
found love and wanted to use that time to be with the person they found
love with. During all those years of dating, women had come and gone
romantically but their friendship lasted. It was the most important
thing to all three of them because they didn’t have that love they
wanted, the all encompassing and powerful love of someone who knew you
inside and out and loved you anyway.
Only now they had that, all three of them. Alice and Dana had found it
with each other and Shane had found it with Carmen. And while this did
break up the three musketeers in many real ways she felt it was for
good reason or a greater cause as it were. Though it was wrong to say
romantic love was more important than friendship even Dana had to
admit that romantic love took far more effort and time and pain. So of
course they devoted more of their time to their new romance than
their old friendship. But it didn’t matter, that feeling never
left. They were Alice, Shane, and Dana and they still loved
each other.
“Dane,” Shane rumbled her name in greeting, her voice and expression
all smiles and she drew the athlete into a hug once she stood up. When
she pulled back, she studied Dana for a long moment with a solemn look
then declared softly, “You’re freaked over something.”
“Yeah,” said Dana wryly, laughing and rubbing the back of her head.
Though she should have long since gotten used to Shane’s uncanny
ability to read people as she had seen it happen so many times over the
years, it tended to disconcert her anyway. Just like it did now.
Plopping down on the
couch, she sighed deeply then looked to Shane as the hair stylist
smoothly sat next to her. “You know how Gabby Deveaux is always at The
Planet lately because of how she’s dating Lara?”
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ahh – formatting fun!
Congrats on the award, well deserved!
Ok – a few things cause this is possibly your best chapter –
Gabby fucking Deveaux – loved it! especially when Shane spit it out with the same disdain!
Alice in leather on riding a motorcycle – need I say more? Women on a bike – always hot, alice in leather on a bike, damn! very nice visual….
Your shane is just awesome!
“White chocolate is oppressed,” lmao.
oh – and the whole big gesture vs paying attention and doing something that fit Alice, great detail – and it is so great when you realize someone truly hears what you say.
ok – i could go on and on – cause this really was a great chapter – but I’ll leave it with nice switch with sex scene. Well done on the scene in general, but the switch, nice. All around, well done!
Dude, this was such a funny chapter. You balanced it very well!!!! And the sex scenes are just so perfectly apt for these two. ( I prbably have to watch some of these lez movies and chuck in my opinion of them…lol)
Great as always. Congratulations for the award, even I don’t understand the category (?), anyway you deserve it, as much as Sulkygeek deserve other (ok I don’t mind in wich one).
Now I’m officially confused, I always tought that the worst lez movie was Bar Girls (even scribegrrrl wrote something once), and I already watched it and it’s really bad. Now I’m curious and I have to get Claire of the Moon to see wich is worst, lol. Thanks.
Wonderful as usual. The visuals in this chapter were very clear and intriguing. The shouter in the next room will be greatly dissapointed with the amount of stamina that Dana and Alice have… very amusing. I had that last scene play out in my head very clearly complete with sexy noises and funny shouting.
Don’t be sad, maybe someday these movies become classics, you know like every bad movie that really deserve that title in this world, lol. I have to confess I have a weakness for those, haha, I’m a fan of series B movies (I don’t know how you call them in english, so sorry) and Ed Wood works, even I have his novels :P . Ok, better I left before I confess more odd things. Thanks for share your talent.
Claire of the Moon is only the worst lesbian movie in my opinion and the opinion of most of my friends. That subject is highly up for debate. Bar Girls is just as bad though. God… why are so many lesbian movies crappy? It makes me sad inside. lol.