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The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty Two
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“All right,” said Dana, releasing a wavering breath. She pulled back
and rubbed at her eyes with her right hand that was bunched in a fist.
The motion reminded Shane fondly of a small child and she added it on
her list as yet another thing she found endearing about one of her
oldest friends. “What should I do?”
“Hmm,” Shane rumbled thoughtfully, sinking into the couch cushions and
tapping on her chin. She grinned impishly and looked at Dana with
sparkling green eyes. “You wait it out.”
“Wait it out,” repeated Dana with a good deal of skepticism. She scowled slightly and demanded, “Wait what out exactly?”
“Gabby ***** Deveaux’s plan,” said Shane, rolling her eyes and her
grin growing wider. “She’s smart but she’s sure as ***** not patient.
You definitely got that over on her, Dane.” Dana’s scowl increased much
like Shane’s grin, making the hair stylist chuckle before she went on,
“You wait it out for her to get impatient and sloppy and that’s when
you point out to Alice what you’ve been noticing. Or you just wait it
out for Gabby to get bored of Al, yet again, and that leaves her with
you. Because Dane,” she paused to look at her friend with an utterly
serious expression that was clearly heartfelt. “You gotta know you’re
the one for Al. She loves you, she wants to be with you, and Gabby
doesn’t have ***** on that. All you have to do is to just keep it up.
Keep being there for Al and just loving her, you know? You just be
yourself, Dane,” Shane advised, grinning and chuckling softly as she
flicked her friend on the tip of her nose lightly. “That’s all it’s
going to take. I promise.”
Rubbing her nose and scowling still, Dana mumbled, “If you say so.”
“I do say so,” Shane rumbled, grinning and embracing Dana in a one
armed hug before pointing a finger at her. “Listen to me you must
because Yoda I am and know all Yoda does.”
“Yoda needs grammar lessons,” Dana teased before bumping the other woman gently.
While it was true the Alice, Shane, and Dana friendship was different
than before and it had been tested it had never been broken. When
friendship was this strong it couldn’t ever really break. That was a
lesson that Dana had learned for herself today.
—
There were a few rare people in Alice’s life who understood and shared
her love of bad movies. Tina was one and Gabby was another. With Tina
moving into the later stages of pregnancy and not really enjoying it
all that much, Alice had one other choice when it came to seeing a
certain bad movie as it played at an noon showing at a local theater
well known for showing the fruits of ***** and ***** cinema.
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ahh – formatting fun!
Congrats on the award, well deserved!
Ok – a few things cause this is possibly your best chapter –
Gabby fucking Deveaux – loved it! especially when Shane spit it out with the same disdain!
Alice in leather on riding a motorcycle – need I say more? Women on a bike – always hot, alice in leather on a bike, damn! very nice visual….
Your shane is just awesome!
“White chocolate is oppressed,” lmao.
oh – and the whole big gesture vs paying attention and doing something that fit Alice, great detail – and it is so great when you realize someone truly hears what you say.
ok – i could go on and on – cause this really was a great chapter – but I’ll leave it with nice switch with sex scene. Well done on the scene in general, but the switch, nice. All around, well done!
Dude, this was such a funny chapter. You balanced it very well!!!! And the sex scenes are just so perfectly apt for these two. ( I prbably have to watch some of these lez movies and chuck in my opinion of them…lol)
Great as always. Congratulations for the award, even I don’t understand the category (?), anyway you deserve it, as much as Sulkygeek deserve other (ok I don’t mind in wich one).
Now I’m officially confused, I always tought that the worst lez movie was Bar Girls (even scribegrrrl wrote something once), and I already watched it and it’s really bad. Now I’m curious and I have to get Claire of the Moon to see wich is worst, lol. Thanks.
Wonderful as usual. The visuals in this chapter were very clear and intriguing. The shouter in the next room will be greatly dissapointed with the amount of stamina that Dana and Alice have… very amusing. I had that last scene play out in my head very clearly complete with sexy noises and funny shouting.
Don’t be sad, maybe someday these movies become classics, you know like every bad movie that really deserve that title in this world, lol. I have to confess I have a weakness for those, haha, I’m a fan of series B movies (I don’t know how you call them in english, so sorry) and Ed Wood works, even I have his novels :P . Ok, better I left before I confess more odd things. Thanks for share your talent.
Claire of the Moon is only the worst lesbian movie in my opinion and the opinion of most of my friends. That subject is highly up for debate. Bar Girls is just as bad though. God… why are so many lesbian movies crappy? It makes me sad inside. lol.