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The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty Two
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The pattern of going back to Gabby was undeniable and though she knew
Alice loved her part of Dana couldn’t help being desperately afraid the
pattern would emerge yet again and take the blonde away from her. And
if that happened then she would be taken away for good because no
matter what both of them wanted to believe, Dana knew a break between
them romantically would be a break in their relationship as a whole.
Because for so long the athlete had dealt with the pain caused from
playing the role of only being Alice’s friend when she was in love with
her and now that she had the blonde as she always wanted? To even try
to go back to pretending that she wasn’t in love with the writer was
too much to take.
She was an athlete, she knew how to deal with the pain caused from
relentless hard work, from pushing yourself as far as you could go but
there was only so far that Dana could go mentally and emotionally.
Losing Alice after having her in the way she had, after being loved by
her and loving her in return wasn’t something she had confidence she
could survive.
That’s why she couldn’t go into The Planet anymore. She couldn’t go in
there and see Gabby giving her that look and playing her games and know
what she was doing but be unable to tell Alice for fear of losing her.
Somehow that hurt the most though. The fact that while she gained Alice
as a lover, something she had always wanted and dreamed about, she lost
her as a best friend. Because you can’t be best friends with your
lover you just can’t. There are things you tell your best friend you
can’t tell the person you’re in love with because of the hurt you know
it would cause. It was why Dana couldn’t talk to Alice about the look
because she knew it would only upset the blonde and she wouldn’t
understand. She would think Dana was being irrationally jealous and
while the tennis player could admit her jealousy could be considered
irrational it came from a valid place.
But Alice wouldn’t see it that way.
And so, for the first time since their romance began Dana was keeping a
secret from Alice. It was since their romance and not since their
friendship began because almost from the very start of their friendship
Dana had kept her feelings for Alice as a secret from her. But once
they fell in love and started dating that all changed. Alice knew
everything there was to know about Dana, which granted, wasn’t that
difficult as Dana tended to despise hiding things. She didn’t have the
patience for mind games and deception. What you saw was very much what
you got with Dana Fairbanks and that was a rare thing in this world.
There were few people who possessed that simple earnest nature and it
was part of why Alice loved her.
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ahh – formatting fun!
Congrats on the award, well deserved!
Ok – a few things cause this is possibly your best chapter –
Gabby fucking Deveaux – loved it! especially when Shane spit it out with the same disdain!
Alice in leather on riding a motorcycle – need I say more? Women on a bike – always hot, alice in leather on a bike, damn! very nice visual….
Your shane is just awesome!
“White chocolate is oppressed,” lmao.
oh – and the whole big gesture vs paying attention and doing something that fit Alice, great detail – and it is so great when you realize someone truly hears what you say.
ok – i could go on and on – cause this really was a great chapter – but I’ll leave it with nice switch with sex scene. Well done on the scene in general, but the switch, nice. All around, well done!
Dude, this was such a funny chapter. You balanced it very well!!!! And the sex scenes are just so perfectly apt for these two. ( I prbably have to watch some of these lez movies and chuck in my opinion of them…lol)
Great as always. Congratulations for the award, even I don’t understand the category (?), anyway you deserve it, as much as Sulkygeek deserve other (ok I don’t mind in wich one).
Now I’m officially confused, I always tought that the worst lez movie was Bar Girls (even scribegrrrl wrote something once), and I already watched it and it’s really bad. Now I’m curious and I have to get Claire of the Moon to see wich is worst, lol. Thanks.
Wonderful as usual. The visuals in this chapter were very clear and intriguing. The shouter in the next room will be greatly dissapointed with the amount of stamina that Dana and Alice have… very amusing. I had that last scene play out in my head very clearly complete with sexy noises and funny shouting.
Don’t be sad, maybe someday these movies become classics, you know like every bad movie that really deserve that title in this world, lol. I have to confess I have a weakness for those, haha, I’m a fan of series B movies (I don’t know how you call them in english, so sorry) and Ed Wood works, even I have his novels :P . Ok, better I left before I confess more odd things. Thanks for share your talent.
Claire of the Moon is only the worst lesbian movie in my opinion and the opinion of most of my friends. That subject is highly up for debate. Bar Girls is just as bad though. God… why are so many lesbian movies crappy? It makes me sad inside. lol.