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The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty Two
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There was no evidence behind the look, it was just that. Just a look
and a look couldn’t be recorded down as evidence for the type of
thoughts Dana was having. Mainly thoughts about Gabby ***** Deveaux
trying to scheme her way back into Alice’s life by way of friendship
was yet another route for her to try and get back with the blonde
romantically.
Which wasn’t something Dana would allow. Normally she didn’t like to
think that way her parents had forever harped to her about what they
would allow. When they initially rejected her due to her sexual
orientation she had countless conversations involving what they would
or wouldn’t allow being associated with the all important Fairbanks
family name. Allow wasn’t a word Dana had much affection for. Not at
all.
But she had to use it when it came to Gabby ***** Deveaux trying her
best to worm her way back into Alice’s life just because she felt that
strongly about it. Though the truth was, she only felt adamant enough
to use the usually disdained word of allow because she was scared.
Countless times she had seen it happen. Alice was with someone who was
good to her, someone sweet and kind and intelligent and good looking,
just someone good and then like clockwork, Gabby would appear. And that
good sweet kind person? Oh, they were gone the very next day. Alice
would toss them aside and run to Gabby and each time she’d laugh wryly
to Dana and say that she knew she was probably being stupid but there
was something about Gabby that she couldn’t forget and let go of.
She knew Alice loved her, there was no doubt when it came to that. Dana
knew it well and she knew it by heart. Alice loves Dana was probably
imprinted on her heart, in fact. Along with Dana loves Alice. Which
although cheesy, the thought always made her smile. Anyway, she knew
Alice loved her but that wasn’t what this was about. It was about Alice and her feelings for Gabby.
Or rather the fact the feelings never seemed to go away. How Alice
could take Gabby back time and time again always baffled Dana and the
puzzlement never went away because the blonde didn’t understand it
either. She had tried so many times to explain why it happened but each
time Alice would look at her so lost and hurt then say she had no idea.
And Dana would forget her questions of why and hold the writer to her,
trying to soothe that hurt and cursing Gabby ***** Deveaux yet again.
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ahh – formatting fun!
Congrats on the award, well deserved!
Ok – a few things cause this is possibly your best chapter –
Gabby fucking Deveaux – loved it! especially when Shane spit it out with the same disdain!
Alice in leather on riding a motorcycle – need I say more? Women on a bike – always hot, alice in leather on a bike, damn! very nice visual….
Your shane is just awesome!
“White chocolate is oppressed,” lmao.
oh – and the whole big gesture vs paying attention and doing something that fit Alice, great detail – and it is so great when you realize someone truly hears what you say.
ok – i could go on and on – cause this really was a great chapter – but I’ll leave it with nice switch with sex scene. Well done on the scene in general, but the switch, nice. All around, well done!
Dude, this was such a funny chapter. You balanced it very well!!!! And the sex scenes are just so perfectly apt for these two. ( I prbably have to watch some of these lez movies and chuck in my opinion of them…lol)
Great as always. Congratulations for the award, even I don’t understand the category (?), anyway you deserve it, as much as Sulkygeek deserve other (ok I don’t mind in wich one).
Now I’m officially confused, I always tought that the worst lez movie was Bar Girls (even scribegrrrl wrote something once), and I already watched it and it’s really bad. Now I’m curious and I have to get Claire of the Moon to see wich is worst, lol. Thanks.
Wonderful as usual. The visuals in this chapter were very clear and intriguing. The shouter in the next room will be greatly dissapointed with the amount of stamina that Dana and Alice have… very amusing. I had that last scene play out in my head very clearly complete with sexy noises and funny shouting.
Don’t be sad, maybe someday these movies become classics, you know like every bad movie that really deserve that title in this world, lol. I have to confess I have a weakness for those, haha, I’m a fan of series B movies (I don’t know how you call them in english, so sorry) and Ed Wood works, even I have his novels :P . Ok, better I left before I confess more odd things. Thanks for share your talent.
Claire of the Moon is only the worst lesbian movie in my opinion and the opinion of most of my friends. That subject is highly up for debate. Bar Girls is just as bad though. God… why are so many lesbian movies crappy? It makes me sad inside. lol.