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The Journey to You – Chapter 16
“That was good; I am going to enjoy doing that over and over and over again.” Bette smiled up at the blonde.
“Uh huh… you certainly did not disappoint Ms Porter” Tina giggled as she snuggled next to Bette, idly tracing her hand over the brunette’s body.
“You are beautiful” she murmured, almost more to herself.
“You, Ms Kennard, are breathtaking” Bette asserted as she flipped Tina onto her back and took in the view. Tina enjoyed being looked at by Bette, but she preferred being touched by her, and even more, being fucked by her.
“Don’t look at me like that unless you’re going to follow through”
“You know, I haven’t shown you around the suite yet” Bette pulled Tina off the bed.
“You’ve seen the lounge” Bette gestured vaguely
“Not really”
“Not important, I want to show you something else” Bette opened the door that led to the balcony and pulled Tina outside.
“Wow, that’s an amazing view”
“Yeah” Bette grinned, eyes only on Tina’s body
Bette lay on one of the sun beds and pulled Tina down on top of her until she was straddling her. She sucked on Tina’s nipples then pushed Tina up on her knees and slid further down the chair until she was right under Tina’s centre. Putting her hand on Tina’s hips, she pulled her down until she could reach to kiss and lick Tina’s lips. She parted them with her fingers and ran her tongue around Tina’s entrance, savouring the taste. Tina was holding her breath with anticipation, trying to lower herself onto Bette’s mouth but the brunette held her up, teasing her by lazily licking the moist folds, evading Tina’s swollen clit. Slowly, Bette licked closer and closer to Tina’s centre and dipped her tongue into the blonde’s core. Tina exhaled with desire as Bette allowed her to grind onto the brunette’s mouth. She slowly worked her way to Tina’s clit, sucking it into her mouth, gently biting with her teeth before releasing and licking it with long, firm strokes. Bette could feel Tina’s body begin to shake and tense, she knew her orgasm was coming and she pulled Tina firmly down onto her face to increase the pressure of her tongue on the blonde’s clit. Tina’s moans were getting louder and deeper, her hands firmly gripping the back of the sun bed as she came into Bette’s mouth.
Bette licked up all of the nectar that Tina released, gently, slowly. She lifted the blonde up and slid back up the sun bed, in the same moment she thrust three fingers into Tina’s moist core.
“Fuck!”
Bette fucked Tina hard and fast as she moved her way back up Tina’s body, wanting to watch her face as she came. Tina wrapped her arms around Bette’s back, delirious with arousal; she ground her hips firmly onto Bette’s hand. The brunette looked up to watch Tina’s face as her orgasm hit her hard, Tina’s nails dragged across Bette’s back, as she felt her release.
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(56 votes, average: 4.16 out of 5)
WOW!!! FUCK THAT WAS HOT!!!! I so can not wait for more. Thanks
Forget the cold shower. It’s raining here, I walked outside and stood in the rain to cool off. Very hot chapter! jinjur
I feel cold and dry, wow that was worth the wait, you wrote it amazingly, thank you so much, I hope you did well on the school paper and I hope you got good grades as you made us all happy “wink”.Thank you so much, post soon.Love
That was only the first hour. We have 47 to go.
WOW! Absolutely amazing!
The temperature just rose a little hotter.Making us wait is going to be torture.
It was a 100 degrees here today and you just added 50 more. that was hot thanks
THUD!!! OMG, that was sooo HOT!!! Can’t wait for the rest of the weekend.
So YOU’RE the one who is responsible for all this sudden blistering heat across parts of the U.S.!
Smoking HOT! Wow. This is my first comment on this story, so I wanted to say that I’ve enjoyed all the chapters so far. Thank you. I so enjoy how you’ve explored the difficulties of their circumstances, and not shied away from the consequences of their falling in love, showing us the nuance without villainizing either of them, or their exes. Very well done. Can’t wait to read what happens next.
wow I wish my gf was here, super writing keep it going thnx
Now that’s HOT!!! Bette didn’t even let Tina get in the room good before she got some and then some!!!! And that was just hour one! They still have 47 left to go. PPS
*thud*
Not sure a cold shower is gonna do the trick…that was awesome…PPS:)~
Well, that was intense. Someone needs to put out the fire that Bette and Tina started.
OMFG…I just got out of the shower..and apparently I need to get back in. Geez…now you are going to make us wait a few days. I’ll just sit here and wait..after my shower, of course.
good golly. And now we have to wait a few days for another chapter… I”ll just have to re-read this from the start then, won’t I? ;) Thanks for the post, tbp.
damn…how could I go to bed without a cold shower…..good job…
i should not be reading this while working. OMG
dayuuuuuuuuuum…that was tooooo hot.
Tina whispered in Bette’s ear, “Don’t wear yourself out just yet. I’m planning on coming all weekend, and I’m planning on you being the one who makes it happen, you think you can do that for me?” Well…I think Tina got her answer! LOL! That was SMOKIN’ HOT, tibetteporter! I can’t wait to read how Tina is going to top that performance by Alpha Bette Porter. PS.
Hot damn!!!! They didn’t waste anytime.
dam girl… its already a hot morning… you just make it HOTTER… keep it going.. its a big room… PPS
OMG! OMG! OMG! I don’t think you could have made this any HOTTER! I hope the story fully explores the upcoming weekend and uhhmmm….their time together is well spent. Whew! I’d need a few days off after I wrote that chapter too! Looking forward to the next one…
Fantastically HOT chapter. However, I thought Bette should have given Tina the grand tour of the suite first before jumping her bones. Show some respect, I’m really disappointed in Bette for that. Otherwise, the chapter was smoking hot.
WOW HOT!!!…. :)
DAMN…now I need to go take another shower…a cold one!!! SMOKIN’ HOT!!!!