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The Journey to You – Chapter 16
Chapter 16
Day 13. Somewhere in San Francisco.
Bette was in the elevator heading going to the top floor to the honeymoon suite; the doors slid open and she swiped the card to enter the room. Stepping in, a wide grin spread across her face at the sight before her. The room was massive; a small hallway led to a lounge area with a large flat screen TV, a fireplace and 2 oversized worn leather lounges. Off to one side was a dining table for four, on the other side was the bedroom; which is where Bette headed. She dropped her small overnight bag on a chair, kicked of her heels and took in the king size bed that she was planning on living in for the next 48 hours. There was a balcony off the bedroom, with 2 sun beds, overlooking the beach. She inhaled the fresh air and changed her mind about living in the bed; taking Tina on the balcony was going to be fun too. She stepped back inside and opened the door to the bathroom. Warm tiles greeted her feet and she looked over at the temperature dial controlling them. There was a double sink set in marble, a huge claw foot tub that they were going to have a lot of fun in, and a wall to wall shower that she hoped they would try out as well. Dirty fantasies were taking over Bette’s mind; this was going to be an amazing weekend. She glanced at her watch; Tina would be here in 20 minutes, time enough for a quick shower.
As Bette emerged from the shower her mind was deep in thought: should she get dressed or be naked when Tina got here? She compromised to putting on a robe – she wanted to be undressed by the blonde. She surveyed the room to make sure everything was in place, checked her reflection and walked back into the lounge to wait for Tina. She did not have to wait long, within 5 minutes there was a knock. Bette opened the door and found she was unable to complete the greeting she had started.
Tina wore ass hugging black Levi’s and a black strapless leather corset that clung to every curve. Her blonde hair hung gently over her shoulders. Bette let her eyes drag over every inch of the blonde beauty, starting at her feet and slowly climbing up her body, pausing in all the right places. Tina smiled at the reaction she was getting. Bette pulled Tina into the room, closing the door behind her and pushing Tina up against it. Their mouths found each other, hungry and moist, their tongues exploring, tasting and battling. Bette dragged a hand up Tina’s thigh, squeezing her ass before taking a firm grip of her hips. The other hand was running down the length of Tina’s neck to her breast. Tina’s hands flew straight to Bette’s curls, she loved running her fingers through the brunette’s hair. The intensity of their kiss continued to escalate, both women out of breath but not wanting to lose contact. Tina allowed her hands to travel down Bette’s neck, dipping under the fabric of the robe, sliding into the space between Bette’s breasts. Both women moaned at this first skin on skin touch. Tina broke the kiss, gently pushing Bette backwards.
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(56 votes, average: 4.16 out of 5)
WOW!!! FUCK THAT WAS HOT!!!! I so can not wait for more. Thanks
Forget the cold shower. It’s raining here, I walked outside and stood in the rain to cool off. Very hot chapter! jinjur
I feel cold and dry, wow that was worth the wait, you wrote it amazingly, thank you so much, I hope you did well on the school paper and I hope you got good grades as you made us all happy “wink”.Thank you so much, post soon.Love
That was only the first hour. We have 47 to go.
WOW! Absolutely amazing!
The temperature just rose a little hotter.Making us wait is going to be torture.
It was a 100 degrees here today and you just added 50 more. that was hot thanks
THUD!!! OMG, that was sooo HOT!!! Can’t wait for the rest of the weekend.
So YOU’RE the one who is responsible for all this sudden blistering heat across parts of the U.S.!
Smoking HOT! Wow. This is my first comment on this story, so I wanted to say that I’ve enjoyed all the chapters so far. Thank you. I so enjoy how you’ve explored the difficulties of their circumstances, and not shied away from the consequences of their falling in love, showing us the nuance without villainizing either of them, or their exes. Very well done. Can’t wait to read what happens next.
wow I wish my gf was here, super writing keep it going thnx
Now that’s HOT!!! Bette didn’t even let Tina get in the room good before she got some and then some!!!! And that was just hour one! They still have 47 left to go. PPS
*thud*
Not sure a cold shower is gonna do the trick…that was awesome…PPS:)~
Well, that was intense. Someone needs to put out the fire that Bette and Tina started.
OMFG…I just got out of the shower..and apparently I need to get back in. Geez…now you are going to make us wait a few days. I’ll just sit here and wait..after my shower, of course.
good golly. And now we have to wait a few days for another chapter… I”ll just have to re-read this from the start then, won’t I? ;) Thanks for the post, tbp.
damn…how could I go to bed without a cold shower…..good job…
i should not be reading this while working. OMG
dayuuuuuuuuuum…that was tooooo hot.
Tina whispered in Bette’s ear, “Don’t wear yourself out just yet. I’m planning on coming all weekend, and I’m planning on you being the one who makes it happen, you think you can do that for me?” Well…I think Tina got her answer! LOL! That was SMOKIN’ HOT, tibetteporter! I can’t wait to read how Tina is going to top that performance by Alpha Bette Porter. PS.
Hot damn!!!! They didn’t waste anytime.
dam girl… its already a hot morning… you just make it HOTTER… keep it going.. its a big room… PPS
OMG! OMG! OMG! I don’t think you could have made this any HOTTER! I hope the story fully explores the upcoming weekend and uhhmmm….their time together is well spent. Whew! I’d need a few days off after I wrote that chapter too! Looking forward to the next one…
Fantastically HOT chapter. However, I thought Bette should have given Tina the grand tour of the suite first before jumping her bones. Show some respect, I’m really disappointed in Bette for that. Otherwise, the chapter was smoking hot.
WOW HOT!!!…. :)
DAMN…now I need to go take another shower…a cold one!!! SMOKIN’ HOT!!!!