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The Journey to You – Chapter 16
"Fuck, god, yes Bette"
Bette continued to move her tongue in and out of Tina, the blonde hands were firmly pushing on her head, urging her deeper. Bette withdrew her tongue and replaced it with two fingers, causing Tina to cry out once more. The brunette moved her tongue to Tina’s swollen clit, gently licking until the pressure Tina was putting on her head increased – the blonde wanted more. Bette moved her fingers faster, increasing the pressure of her tongue. Tina was a mess of incoherent words, her climax building, her knees threatening to give out on her.
Bette knew she had the blonde on the edge; she curled her fingers inside and used her thumb to stroke Tina’s clit – she was rewarded with a scream as Tina came in waves around her fingers before collapsing into her arms.
"Hi beautiful"
“Fuck… Bette… hi… baby… that was… intense”
Bette smiled and slowly pulled her fingers out of Tina, looking her in the eye as she slowly licked them clean. Tina felt her arousal grow once more, she pushed Bette onto her back and lay on top of her, kissing her deeply, moving her hand until it rested lightly between Bette’s thighs. She gently stroked the flesh, keeping her touch light, escaping the thrust of Bette’s hips. She slid a finger through the moist folds, dragging out Bette’s wetness. She broke the kiss to lick her finger – Bette watched with her eyes heavy with lust, still grinding her hips for more contact.
"Tee… please, fuck me, I need you to… Bette’s voice trailed away in a moan as three fingers slid inside her. Tina did not start gentle or slow; she thrust hard and fast in and out of Bette’s core, getting more and more aroused by the look of pure pleasure on the brunette’s face. She watched as Bette’s climax built, her face contorted and her body stiffened. She felt Bette’s walls tighten around her fingers and, as the brunette’s orgasm hit, heard her scream her name.
Tina kissed Bette’s brow and held her close as her body calmed down, she gingerly pulled her fingers out of Bette while the brunette whimpered. She held her hand between them and they both licked the fingers clean before their mouths met in another passionate kiss.
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(56 votes, average: 4.16 out of 5)
WOW!!! FUCK THAT WAS HOT!!!! I so can not wait for more. Thanks
Forget the cold shower. It’s raining here, I walked outside and stood in the rain to cool off. Very hot chapter! jinjur
I feel cold and dry, wow that was worth the wait, you wrote it amazingly, thank you so much, I hope you did well on the school paper and I hope you got good grades as you made us all happy “wink”.Thank you so much, post soon.Love
That was only the first hour. We have 47 to go.
WOW! Absolutely amazing!
The temperature just rose a little hotter.Making us wait is going to be torture.
It was a 100 degrees here today and you just added 50 more. that was hot thanks
THUD!!! OMG, that was sooo HOT!!! Can’t wait for the rest of the weekend.
So YOU’RE the one who is responsible for all this sudden blistering heat across parts of the U.S.!
Smoking HOT! Wow. This is my first comment on this story, so I wanted to say that I’ve enjoyed all the chapters so far. Thank you. I so enjoy how you’ve explored the difficulties of their circumstances, and not shied away from the consequences of their falling in love, showing us the nuance without villainizing either of them, or their exes. Very well done. Can’t wait to read what happens next.
wow I wish my gf was here, super writing keep it going thnx
Now that’s HOT!!! Bette didn’t even let Tina get in the room good before she got some and then some!!!! And that was just hour one! They still have 47 left to go. PPS
*thud*
Not sure a cold shower is gonna do the trick…that was awesome…PPS:)~
Well, that was intense. Someone needs to put out the fire that Bette and Tina started.
OMFG…I just got out of the shower..and apparently I need to get back in. Geez…now you are going to make us wait a few days. I’ll just sit here and wait..after my shower, of course.
good golly. And now we have to wait a few days for another chapter… I”ll just have to re-read this from the start then, won’t I? ;) Thanks for the post, tbp.
damn…how could I go to bed without a cold shower…..good job…
i should not be reading this while working. OMG
dayuuuuuuuuuum…that was tooooo hot.
Tina whispered in Bette’s ear, “Don’t wear yourself out just yet. I’m planning on coming all weekend, and I’m planning on you being the one who makes it happen, you think you can do that for me?” Well…I think Tina got her answer! LOL! That was SMOKIN’ HOT, tibetteporter! I can’t wait to read how Tina is going to top that performance by Alpha Bette Porter. PS.
Hot damn!!!! They didn’t waste anytime.
dam girl… its already a hot morning… you just make it HOTTER… keep it going.. its a big room… PPS
OMG! OMG! OMG! I don’t think you could have made this any HOTTER! I hope the story fully explores the upcoming weekend and uhhmmm….their time together is well spent. Whew! I’d need a few days off after I wrote that chapter too! Looking forward to the next one…
Fantastically HOT chapter. However, I thought Bette should have given Tina the grand tour of the suite first before jumping her bones. Show some respect, I’m really disappointed in Bette for that. Otherwise, the chapter was smoking hot.
WOW HOT!!!…. :)
DAMN…now I need to go take another shower…a cold one!!! SMOKIN’ HOT!!!!