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    The Greatest Love Story Ever Told

    Story written on April 14, 2010 by skimmer.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=75449
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    Chapter 19

    “Shoes” Tina whispered “You forgot my shoes”

    “You remember”

    Tina smiled “How could I forget, my feet were freezing” Tina dropped the smile and her tone as she continued “ How could I forget you telling me you’d always cherish the gift of my heart and placed it deep inside of your own and the only way you could break my heart was if you broke yours too”

    The collective sighs of relief and the softly spoken awes did not deter Tina from recounting their wedding day.

    “How could I forget the second we were pronounced wife and wife the heavens opened and while everyone scarpered for cover, you and I stood there in the pouring rain whispering promises of lifetimes, of always, of forever”

    “Did it rain? If it did I didn’t notice it, I assumed my clothes were soaked due to the tears of pure bliss I cried that day” Bette added while wiping the current tears that were drenching her cheeks.

    “Rain?” Shane countered “Al and I were thinking we would have to send a lifeboat to come rescue you both if you stayed out there much longer, who knew a beach could flood it was coming down that hard and fast and these two morons stood there like it was the most natural thing in the world”

    “It was”

    Everyone laughed at Bette and Tina saying that at exactly the same time. Once quiet fell Shane looked questioningly at her patient

    “Tina?”

    “Get that damn thing out of my head Shane I have a boat load of promises to keep”

    Bette felt fresh tears stinging her eyes “Yes you do and you know I will love you whatever”

    “Whatever’s not happening is it Shane?” Tina said more of a statement than a question.

    “Not today” Shane replied “but I have to say it’s times like this I really wish my childhood dream was to be a hairdresser”

    An hour or so later Shane made her way towards the family area where she knew everyone would be still waiting even though it had been over 6 hours. She felt exhausted both physically and emotionally, removing her surgical cap she opened the closed door expecting a barrage of questions. As soon as she walked in everyone immediately stood up excluding the sleeping twins, but all remained silent

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    1. Im i seeing things Skimmy posted a chptr.well the chptr was sad i almost cried during the operation and afterwards excellent post, now please dont take soo long posting again.

    3. Fantastic chapter. Their remembrances of their life together was really sweet and loving. Did I miss the heart attack part or did you just not write it for us. That was a huge surprise when I read it. Hopefully Tina and Bette will be fine. Thanks for coming back and posting. Really missed this story. PPS

    4. Skimmer, you had me really, really worried there. Then it was alright when Tina remembered Bette forgetting the shoes and Shane poking fun at them standing in the middle of a monsoon after their wedding vows. And now… Now I’m worried again. Tina’s just got to be okay. And you have got to post again soon. Thank you for this chapter, skimmer, I loved it! :)

    6. Wow – “I’ll ask you to marry me every day”. You made me cry and I don’t cry very often while reading these stories. I too have missed this one. You are an excellent writer.

    8. hey there – you have me crying here and thats not good. You are going to make it right aren’t you ? thats not a suggestion – thats an order. You want to be locked in a room with emazon ? it can be arranged. That was really good mate – now what about the OTHER story ? ya remember ??

    9. I cried like….I loss someone i loved…especially in the operating room? god?……..I can’t think i can do it?..if someone I love is lying in there….And making a decision whether to continue or not……Hey finally caught you!…We’ve been trying to make to update this story in the other site?..would you still post it there?….MANY OF YOUR READERS ARE DYING FOR AN UPDATE!

    11. No you won’t let that happen, will you?Welcomeback with the story but please don’t let anything happen to Tina. Without her Bette is a wreck. PPVS

    12. Welcome back Skimmer! I have so missed this story. Was so sad and just absolutely amazing at the same time. Please post soon. thank you again for posting. Brilliant!

    16. Skimmer, this is such a good story, it deserves a happy ending.

      I hope that you will finish it. It doesn’t matter that it that has been a few years that you posted. Please come back.

      I hope that life treats you well!

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