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    The Greatest Love Story Ever Told

    Story written on April 14, 2010 by skimmer.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=75449
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    Chapter 19

    Shane moved from Tina’s line of sight, unable to move her head Tina dropped her eyes, shamefaced at accepting her fate, she didn’t want to look at Bette she knew what was coming, live a life where her long term memory was irrevocably damaged, a life where she could remember what she had for breakfast but no recollection of anything she did yesterday or any day before that. If this was her destiny she would go out with every detail of her life with Bette, her children, her grandchildren, her friends intact.

    The whole room held their breath, not a dry eye between them, Bette had no idea what the fuck was going on in Tina’s head, whatever it was it was down to her to get it out, she was well aware of the consequences of keeping the remnants of that damn tumour in there and a Tina with no memories was a bearable thought, no Tina at all was just not something that she could even begin to come to terms with.

    “Tee, remember what you said to me, even if your memories where wiped clean your heart would find it’s way home to me, do you remember that”

    Tina closed her eyes, that she did remember and she had meant every word, her foolish resolve wavering, did the details matter? The how they fell in love, the how they had cleared every hurdle that was thrown their way, what mattered was that they had, what mattered was that if everyday was a new day Bette would always be by her side, no matter what.

    “Tina I know your scared, fuck I’m petrified and if the worst happens and you do lose your long term memory everyday I will ask you to marry me and everyday you will say yes, everyday we will go the exact spot on the beach at exactly the same time, everyday I will promise you forever, we haven’t had our forever Tee, forever is not now, forever is until the end of time, until the cows come home, until Alice throws us a snowball from hell, Tee please don’t give up, 55 years is not enough, it could never be enough, I want more, I want a lot more, please do not even consider not giving us more” Bette sank to her knees oblivious to the fact that it was just not her own heart that was breaking but everyone else’s in the room. All tear filled eyes one by one dropped from the forlorn figure of Bette in the gallery and looked expectantly at Tina, silently begging her to allow Shane to finish the job she had started.

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    1. Im i seeing things Skimmy posted a chptr.well the chptr was sad i almost cried during the operation and afterwards excellent post, now please dont take soo long posting again.

    3. Fantastic chapter. Their remembrances of their life together was really sweet and loving. Did I miss the heart attack part or did you just not write it for us. That was a huge surprise when I read it. Hopefully Tina and Bette will be fine. Thanks for coming back and posting. Really missed this story. PPS

    4. Skimmer, you had me really, really worried there. Then it was alright when Tina remembered Bette forgetting the shoes and Shane poking fun at them standing in the middle of a monsoon after their wedding vows. And now… Now I’m worried again. Tina’s just got to be okay. And you have got to post again soon. Thank you for this chapter, skimmer, I loved it! :)

    6. Wow – “I’ll ask you to marry me every day”. You made me cry and I don’t cry very often while reading these stories. I too have missed this one. You are an excellent writer.

    8. hey there – you have me crying here and thats not good. You are going to make it right aren’t you ? thats not a suggestion – thats an order. You want to be locked in a room with emazon ? it can be arranged. That was really good mate – now what about the OTHER story ? ya remember ??

    9. I cried like….I loss someone i loved…especially in the operating room? god?……..I can’t think i can do it?..if someone I love is lying in there….And making a decision whether to continue or not……Hey finally caught you!…We’ve been trying to make to update this story in the other site?..would you still post it there?….MANY OF YOUR READERS ARE DYING FOR AN UPDATE!

    11. No you won’t let that happen, will you?Welcomeback with the story but please don’t let anything happen to Tina. Without her Bette is a wreck. PPVS

    12. Welcome back Skimmer! I have so missed this story. Was so sad and just absolutely amazing at the same time. Please post soon. thank you again for posting. Brilliant!

    16. Skimmer, this is such a good story, it deserves a happy ending.

      I hope that you will finish it. It doesn’t matter that it that has been a few years that you posted. Please come back.

      I hope that life treats you well!

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