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The Beginning of a Friendship, chapter 56 Part B
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Her sounds let me know I was doing right, as was my instinct, and as I dropped myself a little further, leaving a wet trail to the valley between her breasts, the arcing and the outcry would have taken away the slightest doubt…
Oh… Tina…
Bette:
Feeling her thrust herself against me, the amazing sensation of our bodies melting together in one whole… As if I had finally found the other half, the half that had been missing all my life, of my heart, of my soul, of me… The swept up feeling of the fire only she could evoke in me, roared in my abdomen… Spreading its flames to all the bodyparts she so gently grazed, I felt how the warmth took me over, allowing me to drift away yet again in a delighted blurr…
I felt her hands find their way down, conquering every part they touched with amazing ease… I was nowhere near able to put up a fight, nor was I willing to… The tickling sense of her fingertips, teasing my breasts, my shoulders, my arms, intill they met their match, in mine… Remembering, somewhere in the back of my head, an old TVshow in which a girl would make the ends of her indexfingers meet to let the world stand still, I felt how her fingertips met mine… It was as if all the nerves in them exploded into a sensation of heavenly bliss… A constricting feeling that went through my hands, my wrists, shooting upto my heart and into my veins… I arced myself up as I tred to graps all the feelings that surrounded me, her longing kisses, the softness of her breasts quite contradictive to the hardness of her nipples as she brushed them against mine, the fingers that now entwined with mine, evoking even more shiverring sensations… My brain seemed to get an overload of information, and unable to set apart all the feelings it all just blurred together into one giant pounding sense of love and desire… A feeling I didnt think could grow anymore even as I felt it built in my stomach, causing a quickly throbbing ache between my legs, where I felt her lower abdomen graze the place I longed for her to touch…
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ohhh i have so misssssed u…omfg u just blow my mind away with your writing.. bella how do u do it?? these chapters were just so amazing and delicate, tender, compassionate, and loving…u are just simply divine my bella….i wish u would continue with your other stories b/c ive missed them so much too..will u please continue??its been so long since u have written on the others also…well this was just simply marvelous…i hope u are doing well with school.. i think about u always and wish u well.. i dont ever see u on msn anymore b/c im sure your probably very busy with your life and school as am I…well all i can say is your simply breathtaking!! :) i hope u come back soon with more.. :) :)di ciao bella(take care beautiful) sogni dolci(sweet dreams)..buona notte(good nite) francamente,(sincerely)Christina :) :)mwwwahhhhhhh….xoxoxoxoxoxox
Oh my friend, get out of the corner and stay out that was so beautiful and sexy. been reading your stories since the beginning and I must say this was the most amazing chapter your have written. This was so amazing and I forgot to breathe.This was hard on this old heart. Shot didnt hurt and not sore today. Keep doing good in school and write when you have time thanks
wow.. wow… wow!!! I just got back from college and I found you posted the 5782 words, 595 lines, aka part B. (;)) jeje Oh my God, I’m still speechless from yesterday and now I can’t explain the feelings inside my heart. I think it’s going to crumple after all that love.. wow, isn’t hot in here? Ok congratulate you for being a wonderful writer and I hope we can chat again, soon. I’m off to study (or the big bad bacteria will catch me!) PPS!!!!!!!
Holy hell!! When you come back with a story, you come back. These two chapters were just amazing. I think I’m love drunk just from reading them.
Oh dear God woman…you can write! FIrst you made me blush when ya called me Gumbs cause it’s so damn cute, but then this NC….VERY well written! You do make writing look easy, it’s the true talent you have shining through! Man…I need to finish that e-mail to ya…but I’ll be re-reading this a few times first! LOL
how can you manage it? i can barely write 2 paragraphs of sex scene LOL amazing
ohhhhhhh what are you trying to do to me?Kill me? I am speechless you are something that i can’t describe, your words are so sacred and precious. reading this chapter made me feel like I was the one there at that moment. MY GOD I really wish that you some day will realize who you are? and how much you have got power over people’s emotions. Thank you
You SO need to put some sort of health warning on your stories! :) Y’know something like don’t read while trying to work, communicate or do anything else what-so-ever :D Another great chapter!! Can’t wait for Bette to completely wake up! Looking forward, as usual, to more :)
Your ability to portray the vast love and desire between these two women just blows me away! Wow! Pure perfection! Thank you so much!
A very, very visual chapter of Bette’s body parts. What a wonderous journey that Tina took. It was like a map for a road trip that was going to last for days. I think that I will just step out in the rain and allow the water to traverse down my body to cool off the perspiration that has shown itself.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, love it!
God I missed your story. But 2 NC17s in one morning I think everyone around me thinks I’ve got a cold of something, I’m beyond red!
I read this at work. I fail. XD
No no no… you’re never a perv… hehe… I was just saying that coz… hmm… in case you’re thinking of something that you’re not suppose to :P But writing this will never make or qualified you as a perv :D Ok, hmm… dream vs reality… I find this chappy really… amusing… in a relaxing state, the body will show its own… reaction… and hopefully bringing… pure ecstasy? I’m really impressed with your Tina ;) *blushing* I don’t think I’ve done my part in ‘supporting’ you… instead I’ve done great part in disturbing you while u’re writing :P And sorry, I was wrong… I’m at the east part of the world, so I should be at 6 hours ahead of your place… hehe.. my mistake :P
waooooo, firs thing let me go and open the window i need some fresh air, LOL! thanks so much for this lovely post, is just amazing how u can write 10 intense page and its never enough cause i don’t mind read 15 or 20 or more…its just amazing ;) and please don’t hide there is not reason for…EIFEUNA….hugs hugs
Grinning again!!!!!!! ok now that was hotttttt tina you go girl. Damn bette you sleep like a log you should have been up you have the girl of your dreams in your bed and your sleep!!!!! you rock pms
If we could describe this chapter, with one word, it will be: erotic and sensual. Wow! You really tricked us, about not knowing how to do an NC 17 part??? Marsha & I didn’t buy it, at all! No way! Jesus! U made us feel so many warm and fuzzy feelings that… Lord have mercy on us! (Cold showers) If this was an attempt… We wonder, how is the real deal? Whooo! (sighing deep). Your scenes description were gorgeous and absolutely breathtaking. Just keep on writing. This is really goood!
Please please don’t go back into hiding. I think you have tortured us enough by making us wait 7 months. That was wonderful. PPS
dear god woman on a scale of one to ten, that was a 100, i think my computer is literally on fire, or that could just be me. great, great job, lord do you know how to write a love scene!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!