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The Beginning of a Friendship, chapter 56 Part B
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The trembling transformed into strong, jerking convulsions, overwheling me with their power and their need… Waving through me, building up time and time again, I felt it as Ive never done before… The strenght of every constriction, mutliplied the power of my fiercest emotions, it was as if body and soul reinfirced eachother, making every wave of trembling desire, of shivering climax, rise above the other…
I rode the wave of my love for her, and with every movement, dizzyness overwhelmed me more, and yet the fuzz that surounded me now was by no means one of sleepiness…
I felt it all…
The pounding of my heart against my chest, so quickly it was impossible to discover a rhythm…
The throbbing of the waves that continued to free my body of the tension that had built and built untill incredible heights…
The release of the lips that still met my core, slowly moving, as if reluctant to withdraw…
The delicate structure of her hair, surrounding my hands…
I felt it all…
Not in a dream…
Not in a blur…
She was as true, as the feelings in my heart… The heart only she had been able to free… The heart that now skipped beats in the realisation that all of it had been true…
The heart that trembled, inable to believe it true, as she uttered the words it so desparately longed for…
I love you… I love you… I love you…
Tina:
Her legs had started trembling, as did her hands, and I felt how her hips rose several inches from the ground as her taste changed, subtely… My fingers moving faster and faster, deeper and deeper, smoother and smoother inside of her, my lips conquering the throbbing heat underneath them…
With every thrust of my fingers, I wanted her more, I felt the sensation in my mouth change as well as the pressure of her fingertips on my skull. Her abdomen was toned, her navel filled with the droplets of transpiration that travelled down her body, her legs, enduring great amounts of tension, quivering tremendously. The sweetness exploded in my mouth as I felt the first tug of her body… Like nectar, filling my oral cavity, coating it carefully so I could relish her taste wholly…
After a sharp sound of her drawing in air I heard her utter the scream I had hunted for, when I took her inside of my mouth with one last long swift… The walls that enveloped my fingers, jerking and constricting in the same rhythm as did her body, her hands pushing me against her in the dire need for contact. The powerfull tension that had built, releasing itself in an incountable number of successive abrupt movements.
With every jerk I felt her regain her consciousness more, with every constriction I felt her limbs grow more limp, with every spasm I felt how my lips sucked the climax out of her more… Determent to withdraw every little bit of the tension I had build up so carefully, I decreased my rhythm but continued my actions, envelopping her fully…
I sensed her waking as I smiled, my lips still touching her, I breathed the words against her still throbbing center…
I love you… I love you… I love you…
TBC
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ohhh i have so misssssed u…omfg u just blow my mind away with your writing.. bella how do u do it?? these chapters were just so amazing and delicate, tender, compassionate, and loving…u are just simply divine my bella….i wish u would continue with your other stories b/c ive missed them so much too..will u please continue??its been so long since u have written on the others also…well this was just simply marvelous…i hope u are doing well with school.. i think about u always and wish u well.. i dont ever see u on msn anymore b/c im sure your probably very busy with your life and school as am I…well all i can say is your simply breathtaking!! :) i hope u come back soon with more.. :) :)di ciao bella(take care beautiful) sogni dolci(sweet dreams)..buona notte(good nite) francamente,(sincerely)Christina :) :)mwwwahhhhhhh….xoxoxoxoxoxox
Oh my friend, get out of the corner and stay out that was so beautiful and sexy. been reading your stories since the beginning and I must say this was the most amazing chapter your have written. This was so amazing and I forgot to breathe.This was hard on this old heart. Shot didnt hurt and not sore today. Keep doing good in school and write when you have time thanks
wow.. wow… wow!!! I just got back from college and I found you posted the 5782 words, 595 lines, aka part B. (;)) jeje Oh my God, I’m still speechless from yesterday and now I can’t explain the feelings inside my heart. I think it’s going to crumple after all that love.. wow, isn’t hot in here? Ok congratulate you for being a wonderful writer and I hope we can chat again, soon. I’m off to study (or the big bad bacteria will catch me!) PPS!!!!!!!
Holy hell!! When you come back with a story, you come back. These two chapters were just amazing. I think I’m love drunk just from reading them.
Oh dear God woman…you can write! FIrst you made me blush when ya called me Gumbs cause it’s so damn cute, but then this NC….VERY well written! You do make writing look easy, it’s the true talent you have shining through! Man…I need to finish that e-mail to ya…but I’ll be re-reading this a few times first! LOL
how can you manage it? i can barely write 2 paragraphs of sex scene LOL amazing
ohhhhhhh what are you trying to do to me?Kill me? I am speechless you are something that i can’t describe, your words are so sacred and precious. reading this chapter made me feel like I was the one there at that moment. MY GOD I really wish that you some day will realize who you are? and how much you have got power over people’s emotions. Thank you
You SO need to put some sort of health warning on your stories! :) Y’know something like don’t read while trying to work, communicate or do anything else what-so-ever :D Another great chapter!! Can’t wait for Bette to completely wake up! Looking forward, as usual, to more :)
Your ability to portray the vast love and desire between these two women just blows me away! Wow! Pure perfection! Thank you so much!
A very, very visual chapter of Bette’s body parts. What a wonderous journey that Tina took. It was like a map for a road trip that was going to last for days. I think that I will just step out in the rain and allow the water to traverse down my body to cool off the perspiration that has shown itself.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, love it!
God I missed your story. But 2 NC17s in one morning I think everyone around me thinks I’ve got a cold of something, I’m beyond red!
I read this at work. I fail. XD
No no no… you’re never a perv… hehe… I was just saying that coz… hmm… in case you’re thinking of something that you’re not suppose to :P But writing this will never make or qualified you as a perv :D Ok, hmm… dream vs reality… I find this chappy really… amusing… in a relaxing state, the body will show its own… reaction… and hopefully bringing… pure ecstasy? I’m really impressed with your Tina ;) *blushing* I don’t think I’ve done my part in ‘supporting’ you… instead I’ve done great part in disturbing you while u’re writing :P And sorry, I was wrong… I’m at the east part of the world, so I should be at 6 hours ahead of your place… hehe.. my mistake :P
waooooo, firs thing let me go and open the window i need some fresh air, LOL! thanks so much for this lovely post, is just amazing how u can write 10 intense page and its never enough cause i don’t mind read 15 or 20 or more…its just amazing ;) and please don’t hide there is not reason for…EIFEUNA….hugs hugs
Grinning again!!!!!!! ok now that was hotttttt tina you go girl. Damn bette you sleep like a log you should have been up you have the girl of your dreams in your bed and your sleep!!!!! you rock pms
If we could describe this chapter, with one word, it will be: erotic and sensual. Wow! You really tricked us, about not knowing how to do an NC 17 part??? Marsha & I didn’t buy it, at all! No way! Jesus! U made us feel so many warm and fuzzy feelings that… Lord have mercy on us! (Cold showers) If this was an attempt… We wonder, how is the real deal? Whooo! (sighing deep). Your scenes description were gorgeous and absolutely breathtaking. Just keep on writing. This is really goood!
Please please don’t go back into hiding. I think you have tortured us enough by making us wait 7 months. That was wonderful. PPS
dear god woman on a scale of one to ten, that was a 100, i think my computer is literally on fire, or that could just be me. great, great job, lord do you know how to write a love scene!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!