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The Beginning of a Friendship, chapter 56 Part B
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I couldn’t help myself… I sensed how my breathing altered as the tips of my fingers lingered over that sweet hardness, and with sudden determination, my passion took over…
I pressed myself against her, carefully placing one hand next to her on the soft rug, allowing me the slight support I needed for my anticipated action… I wanted her, and somewhere in my hesitating, insecure self I had found the courage to take what I wanted… Knowing, by her moaning and protesting noises as I had reluctantly let go of her breast, it was what she wanted to… I didnt know if I had only found the braveness just because she was sleeping, but somehow it felt as if the whole world was upside down, and that her slumbering condition made this action of mine require even more bravery… Because now I could not ask for permission, I would merely have to take it, deducing from her bodily reactions and the slight moans she gave me whether what I was doing pleased her…
Allowing my leg, shortly, to linger above hers, I smiled as I saw the dissapointment in her facial features… She was such an open book, not only in her sleep but also out of it, and, what was the sweetest, so fully unaware of that fact… That her weaknesses were just those things that made her strong, that it was the vulnurability that I saw shine through her assumed toughness that had made me fall for her so deep and hard.
Her pouting expression changed as I let my knee find its way inbetween hers, leading the way my lower body would soon follow…
My breathing momentarily stopped, as did my heartbeat, when I felt her instantly give in, allowing me, without an inch of doubt, the leadership I had so doubtfully taken. Her knees falling to the side, seductively, and I bit my bottom lip as I carefully located myself between them… Hovering now, as my raising temperature was unwilling to let me forget, above the core that was my ultimate goal.
I watched her wrenching face, the desire clearly visible in all her features, her lips slightly parted, her eyelids squeezing tightly shut and without futher ado pressed my lips upon hers, kissing her with all I had inside of me.
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ohhh i have so misssssed u…omfg u just blow my mind away with your writing.. bella how do u do it?? these chapters were just so amazing and delicate, tender, compassionate, and loving…u are just simply divine my bella….i wish u would continue with your other stories b/c ive missed them so much too..will u please continue??its been so long since u have written on the others also…well this was just simply marvelous…i hope u are doing well with school.. i think about u always and wish u well.. i dont ever see u on msn anymore b/c im sure your probably very busy with your life and school as am I…well all i can say is your simply breathtaking!! :) i hope u come back soon with more.. :) :)di ciao bella(take care beautiful) sogni dolci(sweet dreams)..buona notte(good nite) francamente,(sincerely)Christina :) :)mwwwahhhhhhh….xoxoxoxoxoxox
Oh my friend, get out of the corner and stay out that was so beautiful and sexy. been reading your stories since the beginning and I must say this was the most amazing chapter your have written. This was so amazing and I forgot to breathe.This was hard on this old heart. Shot didnt hurt and not sore today. Keep doing good in school and write when you have time thanks
wow.. wow… wow!!! I just got back from college and I found you posted the 5782 words, 595 lines, aka part B. (;)) jeje Oh my God, I’m still speechless from yesterday and now I can’t explain the feelings inside my heart. I think it’s going to crumple after all that love.. wow, isn’t hot in here? Ok congratulate you for being a wonderful writer and I hope we can chat again, soon. I’m off to study (or the big bad bacteria will catch me!) PPS!!!!!!!
Holy hell!! When you come back with a story, you come back. These two chapters were just amazing. I think I’m love drunk just from reading them.
Oh dear God woman…you can write! FIrst you made me blush when ya called me Gumbs cause it’s so damn cute, but then this NC….VERY well written! You do make writing look easy, it’s the true talent you have shining through! Man…I need to finish that e-mail to ya…but I’ll be re-reading this a few times first! LOL
how can you manage it? i can barely write 2 paragraphs of sex scene LOL amazing
ohhhhhhh what are you trying to do to me?Kill me? I am speechless you are something that i can’t describe, your words are so sacred and precious. reading this chapter made me feel like I was the one there at that moment. MY GOD I really wish that you some day will realize who you are? and how much you have got power over people’s emotions. Thank you
You SO need to put some sort of health warning on your stories! :) Y’know something like don’t read while trying to work, communicate or do anything else what-so-ever :D Another great chapter!! Can’t wait for Bette to completely wake up! Looking forward, as usual, to more :)
Your ability to portray the vast love and desire between these two women just blows me away! Wow! Pure perfection! Thank you so much!
A very, very visual chapter of Bette’s body parts. What a wonderous journey that Tina took. It was like a map for a road trip that was going to last for days. I think that I will just step out in the rain and allow the water to traverse down my body to cool off the perspiration that has shown itself.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, love it!
God I missed your story. But 2 NC17s in one morning I think everyone around me thinks I’ve got a cold of something, I’m beyond red!
I read this at work. I fail. XD
No no no… you’re never a perv… hehe… I was just saying that coz… hmm… in case you’re thinking of something that you’re not suppose to :P But writing this will never make or qualified you as a perv :D Ok, hmm… dream vs reality… I find this chappy really… amusing… in a relaxing state, the body will show its own… reaction… and hopefully bringing… pure ecstasy? I’m really impressed with your Tina ;) *blushing* I don’t think I’ve done my part in ‘supporting’ you… instead I’ve done great part in disturbing you while u’re writing :P And sorry, I was wrong… I’m at the east part of the world, so I should be at 6 hours ahead of your place… hehe.. my mistake :P
waooooo, firs thing let me go and open the window i need some fresh air, LOL! thanks so much for this lovely post, is just amazing how u can write 10 intense page and its never enough cause i don’t mind read 15 or 20 or more…its just amazing ;) and please don’t hide there is not reason for…EIFEUNA….hugs hugs
Grinning again!!!!!!! ok now that was hotttttt tina you go girl. Damn bette you sleep like a log you should have been up you have the girl of your dreams in your bed and your sleep!!!!! you rock pms
If we could describe this chapter, with one word, it will be: erotic and sensual. Wow! You really tricked us, about not knowing how to do an NC 17 part??? Marsha & I didn’t buy it, at all! No way! Jesus! U made us feel so many warm and fuzzy feelings that… Lord have mercy on us! (Cold showers) If this was an attempt… We wonder, how is the real deal? Whooo! (sighing deep). Your scenes description were gorgeous and absolutely breathtaking. Just keep on writing. This is really goood!
Please please don’t go back into hiding. I think you have tortured us enough by making us wait 7 months. That was wonderful. PPS
dear god woman on a scale of one to ten, that was a 100, i think my computer is literally on fire, or that could just be me. great, great job, lord do you know how to write a love scene!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!