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The beginning of a friendship, chapter 53
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My focus had been on her, only her, and as I lazily opened my eyes, they grew wide… Sonya had lit the torches I had placed there… The only place that was really mine… I had sat there, hours, before I had gone inside that house again, the boxes still unpacked, and I had called the company, requisting, with calm voice, if they could undo their earlier actions… They hadn’t asked any questions, neither had the woman who had so carefully taken care of the house, her eyes filled with deep understanding, when I tolded her, it was too much work for me. The small gesture, lighting those torches that were there, just proofed how well the young mother had seen through me… She knew I would come out at the rare occasions I visited the place… I never went through the house, I never even glanced at it, I would just walk around the back, and sit there, silently, listening to the sound of my breath, merged with the sound of the water.
I was drawn back to the presence by a mere graze of the tip of her indexfinger… Focussed as a child, her lips slightly parted, she followed the contours of my bra, she had revealed by unbuttoning my blouse…
Tina:
My mouth had gone dry when I had sensed her, giving in… She offered herself to me, giving me the lead, and that simple fact, was so arousing, I had to pull her in, crossing the invisible line, kissing her, with inevitable passion…
I loved as I had never loved… Suddenly aware what that small word meant, what it held, what it captured…
Her…
Our lips out tongues found eachother in a passionate meeting of that fierce emotion running through my veins. It was as if my heart pounded in a melody, a melody she completed, and as we drew closer to eachother, I could feel the quiver of her heart against my chest…
Perfect merging…
I couldn’t think full sentences anymore, overwhelmed by this amazingly strong emotion that had taken over my entire life… My life had started with her, her love had given birth to my heart… And the organ was now jumping, in a rapid quivery motion, through my chest, the trembling echoing through my veins.
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wow, wow, woooooow my friend you are such a big teaser! this chapter was so hot,sensual and you was rigth with a lot of thing to said before the next step! now i should go to the windows open them and take some fresh air!!!!! you are bad so bad! i told you you are killing softly but i like it so much, i know that it wasn’t easy for you to post this but the wait was more than worthy and you did an great job! i can feel the goosebumps just reading this! i can’t imagine the NC17 ! take care!
You are soooo soooo talented that was amazing I Feel like the hairs on the back of my neck and arms were standing up the whole time Awesome cant wait for the next chapter PPS
Pfjew….you know what, I’m a painter/sculptor, almost all of my life I’ll try to touch people with what I create and yet compared to you I’m nothing. The way you express yourself is beyond words, I’m not saying that to please you, no you just pleased me with this wonderful update. Jij hebt de gave meid, elke keer weer weet je mij te ontroeren en elke keer weer ben ik effe van de wereld terwijl ik jou lees. Bedankt daarvoor.
man that was sweet hottttttttttttttttttttttt plus it needs to be longer
That was so hot…this is painfully slow (in a good way) We got 5 pages but we are aching for more.
this is a very slow burn LOL…and i thought in my first story it took forever for them to meet, you set a record…those 2 belong together
Ooooo fucking come on…..damn slow burn!!!!! LMAO. This was great in a very painful way :o)) Really looking forward to the next one….
Geezus, you’re killing me here! And I love it! You slowburn and blue ball us ’til kingdom come, and I’ll still find it just as sweet. And don’t worry; even if the show continues to destroy them, I will ALWAYS be a Tibetter. I can’t help it, I’m hooked.
We are getting there. I can feel that finish line drawing closer and closer. Of course if they race like I do they will never make it to the finish line.
Ohhhh you are bad girl – leave us hanging like this….with the best part comming along very nicely I might add….shit girl – you are a tease :O) we want more of this amazing story. Post soon
Damn this is hot and you kill us slowly here my friend and hope you will let us have some more hot of B&T coming next, thanks!!!!!!!
So, dear Id give anything to see your face right after you post next chapter. Yeah yeah yeah! Mom, you are sooo in trouble now. :P Love your writing and its an honor to know I can count on ya when it comes to my own story. Thanks sweetie! This story is very very cool.
Okie,dokie then. I don’t know if we can handle what happens next.
WOW!!!!! That was HOT!!!! I can not wait to see what happens next. Thanks PPVS
1st?
Yay! I got so excited when I saw you’d posted this then i read ‘slowburn’ and was like … aw … no! but the slowburn is good, you’re killing me, but it’s good!
I shall tell you exactly why ppl are having problems with comps recently.. murphys law; if something bad can happen it will at the worst time possiable. Anywoooo damn that was a good chapter!! I’m thinking the term slow burn was a bit of an understatement! Gotta remember for the future not to read your chapters while im in a lecturer tho… was rather distracting :) Per usual, I can’t wait for more :D
Okay my friend… I got it! I know what happened here… After all these chapters, and looong after that first kiss, still you just couldn’t take them there… *shaking head*… So what you did is you decided to handle the reponsibility to Bette! So there we go… chapter 51… yes?…. and… no!… Bette chickened out as well!!! Errr, the tension, the intensity, the expectations… can really put up the pressure, can’t they?… So that’s when you saw that there was only one solution left, especially after you made that promise… And that is to let Tina take charge!… And what a wise decision indeed! Doesn’t seem to me that she’s anywhere near failing the mission you entrusted her with! On the contrary… *Is it hot in here or what?*… Go Tina!!! The whole JLBT’s fanclub is counting on you! Don’t let us down!… LOL, just teasing, Captain, this is awesome, and definitely worth the wait! And for me, it totally makes sense that Tina is the one to initiate things… Can’t wait for the next post (as you probably figured)… Hugs!
JLBT is “blue-balling” us again. So uh, next chapter is the BIG one, right? I mean, you promised and all.
OMG, that was so heart stopping, I didn’t realize I was holding my breath until I started choking….I hope to god that you are sitting at your computer right this minute finishing another chapter, because it would be an utter crime to make us wait this long again. Not to mention that I’d have to hunt you down.
I live in a tropical country… and my small fan in my room is not helping at all with the heat from my PC, the weather… and the story ;) Yep, I’ve got my full Internet access back :D YEY!! Next chapter soon :D
wow…wow…i mean wow…okay, sentences now…breathe…okay so, i was told you posted an update. and though i was running late for my class i wanted to check it. so i thought i print your chapter and read it on the bus. well, on one hand it was a good idea because it’s soooooooo good. but on the other hand i probably should’ve waited until i got home. you shouldn’t really read something like this when you have a 10 hour day ahead of you…so what i’m saying is that this was awesome. and i don’t ever want to hear you saying anything about not being content with your writing. because you prove every time that you’re a genius at that…amazing update. thank you so much. pps