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The beginning of a friendship, chapter 53
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Lightheadedness caused me to shut my eyes, tightly, as I felt another moan come up. I cupped her face, my hands shivering, longing for her to be closer… The tip of her tongue grazed my upper lip, begging for acces, evoking tantalizing desire which rushed through my veins. She pressed her body against mine, as she let her hands slide under my jacket, smoothly letting it slide of my shoulders. Our kiss deepened, as I granted her the acces she had asked for, and I felt her tongue, passionatly look for mine…
A similtanious moan rose when I felt the tip of her tongue stroke mine, and a fierce embrace of mouths and lips was the only logical consequence… Entwining, entangling, warm love and sweet desire… So many tastes, that merged together in one, the delightfull one that was just her… At once the jittering of my heart, calmed, as if the organ had found its home. And with a small smile, my lips still attached to hers, I realized it had.
I let my hands, my fingertips, dazzle around her face, exploring the softness of her cheek, only letting go temporarily to allow her to remove the garment she had so smoothly freed me from… Pushing escaped locks behind her ears, I found myself gasping at the sensation of the velvetly skin right behind her earlobe. She cupped my face, pulling me closer, deeper into the kiss of life she offered me. Letting her hands slide down, I could feel her playing with the collar of my blouse, again that determination, in her kiss, her touch.
Her fingers lingered shortly, before reaching the first button, slightly trembling, she pulled back from or kiss. Her eyes, containing smothering heat, locked with mine, as she slowly let the round object slide through her fingers before, with one smooth motion, she opened it.
I caught her wrist, wanting her to continue, but also knowing, controll was something I lacked at this instant… A far away thought, about telling her the house was mine, floated in the back of my head. But, her eyes, those eyes that could hold so many emotions… I had never seen a woman say so much with just a glance, and allthough maybe I havent been looking, maybe I haven’t been open of it, I knew that even if I had seen it, it wouldn’t have been the same… Because she and I spoke the same wordless language, that no-one else could ever grasp, and as I tried to find words… Something very hard to do when you mind is fogged by desire and love, she let her hand slide around my waist, pulling me closer with that amazing determence. Her lips on mine felt as if they belonged there, and at once an overwhelming gratitude washed over me… For this feeling, for this moment, but especially for her… For me being capable of loving her… Our tongues met again in a wonderfull explosion of passion, as she, quivering, tried to unbutton my blouse fully… My hand around her wrist had lost its strenght, and as she let her tongue swift softly against the inside of my lips, exploring me, finding me, freeing me, it fell, loosely on her hip.
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wow, wow, woooooow my friend you are such a big teaser! this chapter was so hot,sensual and you was rigth with a lot of thing to said before the next step! now i should go to the windows open them and take some fresh air!!!!! you are bad so bad! i told you you are killing softly but i like it so much, i know that it wasn’t easy for you to post this but the wait was more than worthy and you did an great job! i can feel the goosebumps just reading this! i can’t imagine the NC17 ! take care!
You are soooo soooo talented that was amazing I Feel like the hairs on the back of my neck and arms were standing up the whole time Awesome cant wait for the next chapter PPS
Pfjew….you know what, I’m a painter/sculptor, almost all of my life I’ll try to touch people with what I create and yet compared to you I’m nothing. The way you express yourself is beyond words, I’m not saying that to please you, no you just pleased me with this wonderful update. Jij hebt de gave meid, elke keer weer weet je mij te ontroeren en elke keer weer ben ik effe van de wereld terwijl ik jou lees. Bedankt daarvoor.
man that was sweet hottttttttttttttttttttttt plus it needs to be longer
That was so hot…this is painfully slow (in a good way) We got 5 pages but we are aching for more.
this is a very slow burn LOL…and i thought in my first story it took forever for them to meet, you set a record…those 2 belong together
Ooooo fucking come on…..damn slow burn!!!!! LMAO. This was great in a very painful way :o)) Really looking forward to the next one….
Geezus, you’re killing me here! And I love it! You slowburn and blue ball us ’til kingdom come, and I’ll still find it just as sweet. And don’t worry; even if the show continues to destroy them, I will ALWAYS be a Tibetter. I can’t help it, I’m hooked.
We are getting there. I can feel that finish line drawing closer and closer. Of course if they race like I do they will never make it to the finish line.
Ohhhh you are bad girl – leave us hanging like this….with the best part comming along very nicely I might add….shit girl – you are a tease :O) we want more of this amazing story. Post soon
Damn this is hot and you kill us slowly here my friend and hope you will let us have some more hot of B&T coming next, thanks!!!!!!!
So, dear Id give anything to see your face right after you post next chapter. Yeah yeah yeah! Mom, you are sooo in trouble now. :P Love your writing and its an honor to know I can count on ya when it comes to my own story. Thanks sweetie! This story is very very cool.
Okie,dokie then. I don’t know if we can handle what happens next.
WOW!!!!! That was HOT!!!! I can not wait to see what happens next. Thanks PPVS
1st?
Yay! I got so excited when I saw you’d posted this then i read ‘slowburn’ and was like … aw … no! but the slowburn is good, you’re killing me, but it’s good!
I shall tell you exactly why ppl are having problems with comps recently.. murphys law; if something bad can happen it will at the worst time possiable. Anywoooo damn that was a good chapter!! I’m thinking the term slow burn was a bit of an understatement! Gotta remember for the future not to read your chapters while im in a lecturer tho… was rather distracting :) Per usual, I can’t wait for more :D
Okay my friend… I got it! I know what happened here… After all these chapters, and looong after that first kiss, still you just couldn’t take them there… *shaking head*… So what you did is you decided to handle the reponsibility to Bette! So there we go… chapter 51… yes?…. and… no!… Bette chickened out as well!!! Errr, the tension, the intensity, the expectations… can really put up the pressure, can’t they?… So that’s when you saw that there was only one solution left, especially after you made that promise… And that is to let Tina take charge!… And what a wise decision indeed! Doesn’t seem to me that she’s anywhere near failing the mission you entrusted her with! On the contrary… *Is it hot in here or what?*… Go Tina!!! The whole JLBT’s fanclub is counting on you! Don’t let us down!… LOL, just teasing, Captain, this is awesome, and definitely worth the wait! And for me, it totally makes sense that Tina is the one to initiate things… Can’t wait for the next post (as you probably figured)… Hugs!
JLBT is “blue-balling” us again. So uh, next chapter is the BIG one, right? I mean, you promised and all.
OMG, that was so heart stopping, I didn’t realize I was holding my breath until I started choking….I hope to god that you are sitting at your computer right this minute finishing another chapter, because it would be an utter crime to make us wait this long again. Not to mention that I’d have to hunt you down.
I live in a tropical country… and my small fan in my room is not helping at all with the heat from my PC, the weather… and the story ;) Yep, I’ve got my full Internet access back :D YEY!! Next chapter soon :D
wow…wow…i mean wow…okay, sentences now…breathe…okay so, i was told you posted an update. and though i was running late for my class i wanted to check it. so i thought i print your chapter and read it on the bus. well, on one hand it was a good idea because it’s soooooooo good. but on the other hand i probably should’ve waited until i got home. you shouldn’t really read something like this when you have a 10 hour day ahead of you…so what i’m saying is that this was awesome. and i don’t ever want to hear you saying anything about not being content with your writing. because you prove every time that you’re a genius at that…amazing update. thank you so much. pps