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    Pretty Women, episode 11

    Story written on January 24, 2007 by justloveB+T.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=64179
    Author Notes:

    Why did the galleryowner ask? And why does the pretty woman stay? A Bette and Tina Beginning, based on the movie ‘Pretty woman’

     

    * * * * * * * * *Music starts playing, Roy Orbison’s ‘Pretty woman’* * * * * * * * * *

     

    Words start rolling on the screen, letter by letter, and they form the following:

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * * * *   TINA KENNARD * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *& * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

      * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * BETTE PORTER * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * *Star in the JLBT production * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * *PRETTY WOMEN * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

    **************Last time on the JLBT production PRETTY WOMEN: ****************

     

    We see a reshot Tina letting herself slide under the water in enthousiasm over the amount of money Bette has offered her, and the brunette tenderly drying the blondes face, before a lingering unshared kiss makes their gazes lock…

     

     

     

    # the scene  fades away and we see the HOLLYWOOD sign, before

    the camera turns and we see Tina, laying in the foamy bath, looking up at Bette, ashtonished #

     

    The song: ‘You give me something’ by James Morrison starts playing.

      

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      Pretty Women, episode 11

     

     

    Tina Kennard felt her heart beat rapidly against her chest…

    There was so much about this woman in front of her that touched pieces of her soul she had decided to keep hidden many years ago. The memory of the pain a simple act of opening up had caused her made the blonde woman wince and she tore her gaze from the intense darkbrown eyes before her. The warmth she had seen there, the longing, the –could it be- care had made her feel so incredibly vulnurable, in a way that went far beyond her nakedness. She avoided Bette’s stare, closing her eyes briefly, very aware of the fact that her lips ached to be kissed…

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    1. The wait was worthy! OMG I missed your stories so much. I would have stayed for free, more Bettesexual, blondies are not my type. Doesn’t look like you had a block, seems like you were busy, awesome update!

    4. hey hey girl! finally you did it! now that you have some time i think that we can enjoy of your wonderful talent don’t you think? when i read the first part i think this will be a very good chapter and it was as always, the answer tho the questions the why Bette answer and why Tina stay it’s simple they fallen in love since the first time they saw eacht other but maybe someone should tell them that. take care!

    5. So glad that you are continuing this story–it’s terrific. Just saw the movie on cable for the first time in years–I had forgotten how good it was–but I like it so much better with our girls!

    7. Oh yes, it is those those all seeing eyes that are the window to Bette’s soul. Between Tina’s laugh and smile and Bette’s eyes a person can get lost in their own little Tibette heaven. The kiss that wants to take place will remain at the back of their minds.

    11. Trying to catch up on my reading. Got about a week and hoping to get rid of the shoulder cast and sling. after 6 mi=os I,m tired. of it Everything is fine in Texas Love this Bette and Tina. they are great to gether but real great in this. I would have stayed with Bette for nothing. Heck I would have paid her. Hope things are great with you thanks

    12. Hey! U know I am loving this story so much :)The way u write it leaves me feeling all giddy and excited and with a huge grin on my face ! U r doing a good job and it was all my pleasure to do the detective work for the lost words hehee . Please post soon m’kay?? pretty please? I cant wait to read more. I’ll catch u soon yeah :)

    13. Astonishing. If you write chapters like this after recovering from a severe writersblock, girl I wish you would have them all the time….sorry for you but oh boy not for us ;-). The tension between the two is palpable and put in words so real that it almost hurt when I read it. I also like the playful banter between them. I really think Tina will come up with with something classy but yet very sexy to wear for that business meeting. Je hoeft me echt niet te bedanken voor mijn vriendelijke woorden in mijn commentaren, ik heb alle bewondering voor de fanfic schrijvers en ik bedoel voor alle fanfic schrijvers tibetter’s & belena’rs. Als een story goed is dan maakt het mij niet uit wie de hoofdpersonages zijn en ook niet wat anderen in hun commentaren schrjven, ik lees die trouwens nooit voordat ik de mijne neerpen om zo objectief mogelijk te zijn. Vind ik iets niet goed dan lees ik het verder maar geen er ook geen negatieve commentaar op. Naar jouw posts kijk ik halsreikend uit omdat ze niet alleen heel erg goed zijn maar me ook altijd beroeren en een beetje uit evenwicht brengen. Ze zinderen nog altijd een dagje na. Bedankt daarvoor.

    14. “… it had much more to do with longing warm chocolatbrowneyes, that were a window to the other half of her soul.”… Aaaaawwww, it’s because of lines like this one that I love your writing so much and that you’re forever in my top 3, sweet JLBT! My god, this is such a wonderful journey you’ve taken us on! If I was rich, I would hire you to only write your amazing stories! But I know life gets too often in the way, unfortunately. Anyhow, I’ll stick with you no matter how long it takes you to take this story to its resolution, cause again, with a writing like yours, it is the journey that matters! Thank you, thank you, thank you…

    16. “with a sudden swift of heart and gesture, turned around and let her arm slide around Tina’s waist, kissing her softly on the cheek” that is very very very smooth ;) Arrgghh… I can’t have enough of your story and have missed you terribly… let’s kill the W-word together-gether ;)

    18. Great, I’m happy, you’ve updated this story! But unfortunately these two ladies are making slow progress – will keep us waiting for twenty chapters until they kiss? Bette needs to realise that she has found something that she can’t buy with money, and Tina has found something that is worth more than money. So let them go for it! Please post soon and longer, thank you!

    19. LMAO Don’t worry about formatting. The site likes to take stories people have worked hard to make look pretty and make them look like poopie-shit. xD I can’t believe Bette just gave Tina cash and told her to buy something to wear to dinner. When I watch the movie I always feel so bad for the girl. =/ I hope Tina has common sense though and picks out some street clothes (no not THOSE kind of street clothes LMFAO) and wears those when she goes to get an outfit for tonight instead of her, um, “work” clothes. PPS!

    23. Yeah… Bette wouldn’t have had to pay for me to stay… Not a cent. :D Love it, and this is the perfect bedtime story for me! Love how in depth you go with that they’re thinking and feeling… just… all around love it. Hug right back at you!

    24. Good chapter. They are cute and funny and they kiss on each other cheek is sweet (but hope on the lips next time lol) and can’t wait to see what Tina is wearing to surprise Bette. OK post soon please, thanks!

    27. Since you mention my name (laughing) I would have thought you knew me :O)…..one never knows. But as I mentioned earlier..I love this story and you write it so well – so do post soon

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