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Soft Spoken (Episode 1)
“Well for your information, Dana, I’m looking for the same qualities in a man as I am in a woman.” Dana grinned and gestured to Tina.
“Big tits.” I rolled my eyes at her and nodded my head sarcastically.
“Well, anyways, it explains why I haven’t gotten pregnant in six months.” Tina continued.
“Oh, sorry, Tee. He was the perfect donor.” I said, feeling bad for getting of topic.
“Hold on now, what’s the matter?” Marina said as she sat down with us. Dana and I both sighed.
“Sean’s jism is no good.” Dana told her. Marina patted Tina’s arm sympathetically.
“Don’t worry. We’ll find someone else.” She assured the blonde.
“Who? I’ve got 2 days before my cycle ends.”
“Well, between the four of us, we’ll come up with someone. What, he has to be healthy, strong, creative, handsome, artistic?”
“There’s always Shane.” Dana said dryly as the other girl walked up to our table. I nudged her.
“And you ridiculed me earlier!” I said shocked.
“Hey guys.” Shane said, taking off her sunglasses.
“Ya know, do you have to dress like that all the time?” Dana asked her. I kicked her under the table and she made a face at me.
“Like what?” Shane asked confused, looking down at her ripped jeans and cutoff sleeved tee shirt.
“Well I wouldn’t be seen on the street with you.” She went on. Tina and I both kicked her this time, and I felt Dana kick me back. I held in a yelp and bit my lip.
“Yeah?” Shane asked a bit defensively. I didn’t blame her.
“I mean, every single thing about the way you’re dresses, like, screams dyke.” I looked at Dana pointedly.
“God, Dana.” I said.
“Sorry, man.” Shane said, raising her eyebrows and shaking her head.
“What, look, if I’m outed, I’m screwed, Alice, alright? Sponsors aren’t exactly clamoring to have their stuff repped by big ol’ lezzie tennis players…” I rolled my eyes and lolled my head back in a ‘so boring, already heard it’ fashion. “What?”
“No, no, no, look, it’s cool, I totally dig you need to make a living.” Shane said, picking up her drink. “I’m meeting a client anyway.” She said with a much needed attitude, and left. I turned to look at Dana, shaking my head once again.
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(31 votes, average: 3.48 out of 5)
Another great start! Before I couldn’t really see the chemistry between Dana and Alice before Tonya came along, but now ~thinking~ I may have to re-watch some things:) Also, were you still going to continue your other story? Cuz I’m really waiting on an update on it, but either way, I can’t wait for whatever’s next!
Great start. I really like it, and can’t wait to see what you have in store.
A fresh input onto the first series – really showing a great promise of a great posting – keep up the great work along with your other story.
I enjoyed the ride down memory lane – with your additions. It is easy to see that they could have been attracted to each other as early as the beginning of season 1. The scene outside of the club showed something was up.
Hey, it’s a good start but it would be nice to see you moving away from the show’s path a little bit more, putting in a little more insight into Dana and Alice’s feelings.
so far so good :) keep it up. it’s interesting how closely your are following the show. Can’t wait to see whats next.
Funny, I just watched this episode. :) I really like that you let us see both sides of the story. In my opinion, Alice and Dana did have some little thing going on since the epilot-episode! I’m curious how you fill in all the blanks (we didn’t get to seec on the show unfortunately!) which will lead to the first kiss at 4 a.m.
This is more like it. Still enough left to our imaginations, but a clear direction for our beloved Danish. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Ok, so I totally loved it. Please keep on with this story (and your other one!), because I think that this is going to be an awesome story! :-)
WOot woot i like!! thanks for the post!
Oh yes..I like! Please continue!
i like it! please post more soon!