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Soft Spoken (Episode 1)
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“I don’t get it. How do they keep such a good relationship?”
“It’s probably all the sex.” I replied. Dana choked down her coffee and stared at me.
“Alice!”
“What?! I mean, if you and I had sex we’d probably have the best friendship anyone’s ever had.” She blinked at me, raising an eyebrow. “I don’t know why I said that. What I meant was that there’s something about sex that…brings people closer together.” She smirked.
“Yeah, like the whole being inside them thing.” It was my turn to roll me eyes.
“I meant spiritually, doofus.”
Okay, I know what you all are thinking, but I don’t like Dana. She’s my buddy! She’s my best friend. I don’t like her like that. Even though she looks amazing in those tight jeans she was wearing today… but that’s strictly a friend’s opinion! Anyways, on with my story!
It was a few hours later, and Dana and I were at the Planet again. We stay there all day because we have no lives. I mean, I have a life, but Dana doesn’t, so I stay there with her to keep her company. Because she’s my FRIEND, you see? So Tina walks in, and we stop our oh so important conversation on my Winnie the pooh pajamas.
“There she is! There she is!” I whispered to Dana, hitting her excitedly on the arm. She moved away from me, shooting me an irritated look.
“I know, Al. I can see her.”
“Ah, your ladyship!” I jumped up to guide her to the table. “Please! Don’t jar anything!” Dana gave me a dull stare.
“It’s not like it’s gonna dislodge if she sits down too hard, Alice.” Tina laughed.
“There’s nothing to dislodge. Sean’s sperm is lackluster.” I let out a gasp. “He’s low motility. No motility, actually.”
“Oh my god, you would never know it by the way he fucks.” I said, shaking my head. Dana shot me an unreadable look.
“Oh Christ, Alice! When are you going to make up your mind between dick and pussy, and spare us the gory bisexual details, please.” That stung a little coming from her, but I shook it off.
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Another great start! Before I couldn’t really see the chemistry between Dana and Alice before Tonya came along, but now ~thinking~ I may have to re-watch some things:) Also, were you still going to continue your other story? Cuz I’m really waiting on an update on it, but either way, I can’t wait for whatever’s next!
Great start. I really like it, and can’t wait to see what you have in store.
A fresh input onto the first series – really showing a great promise of a great posting – keep up the great work along with your other story.
I enjoyed the ride down memory lane – with your additions. It is easy to see that they could have been attracted to each other as early as the beginning of season 1. The scene outside of the club showed something was up.
Hey, it’s a good start but it would be nice to see you moving away from the show’s path a little bit more, putting in a little more insight into Dana and Alice’s feelings.
so far so good :) keep it up. it’s interesting how closely your are following the show. Can’t wait to see whats next.
Funny, I just watched this episode. :) I really like that you let us see both sides of the story. In my opinion, Alice and Dana did have some little thing going on since the epilot-episode! I’m curious how you fill in all the blanks (we didn’t get to seec on the show unfortunately!) which will lead to the first kiss at 4 a.m.
This is more like it. Still enough left to our imaginations, but a clear direction for our beloved Danish. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Ok, so I totally loved it. Please keep on with this story (and your other one!), because I think that this is going to be an awesome story! :-)
WOot woot i like!! thanks for the post!
Oh yes..I like! Please continue!
i like it! please post more soon!