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Soft Spoken (Episode 1)
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Episode 1
I took off my sunglasses and hung them from my shirt as I pushed the door to The Planet open. Letting out a yawn, I walked up to Shane who was collapsed at the counter. Her dark hair looked like it hadn’t been brushed (well, actually it always looks that way, it was just more than usual this morning) and her eyes were half closed.
“Morning sunshine.” I said to her. “Get a good fuck last night or what? You look horrible.” She just grunted in response. I felt someone ruffle my hair and I swatted the hand away. Dana leaned on the counter next to me and nudged me with her shoulder.
“Your hair doesn’t look to hot, either, Al.” I flipped her off, then noticed Marina walk by quickly.
“I am so ready!” I said to her as she passed.
“It’s coming.” She replied with a grin, and carried two foam green cups away. The waitress behind the counter set a cup down in front of me.
“Thank you! I praised her and dove into the caffeine sodden coffee.
“Hi, Shane!” A wavy haired brunette called across the counter at the sleepy girl. Shane raised her head at stared at her with a confused look.
“She doesn’t talk to anyone before her morning shot.” Marina half-joked, handing Shane a small espresso cup. “Here you go, Don Juan.” The hair dresser grinned, muttered a thanks, and took a sip. I eyed the young girl who had greeted Shane and leaned over to Dana. She smelled really good this morning. Like cinnamon and apples or something. It was new.
“She’s a kid. A kid!” I said quietly to her. Dana shook her head in warning to me.
“Whatever. It’s fine.” The waitress handed Dana her cup and we headed over to our usual table.
“I mean, don’t freak out.” I joked. She rolled her eyes.
“Okay!” Shane finished her small espresso and straightened up.
“Alright! Later guys.” She waved. Dana and I both called out bye to her. “Bye Lisa.” Shane said to the girl, and headed out the door, only to bump into Bette and Tina.
“Whoa, you’re not leaving already?” Tina asked, coming through the door.
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Another great start! Before I couldn’t really see the chemistry between Dana and Alice before Tonya came along, but now ~thinking~ I may have to re-watch some things:) Also, were you still going to continue your other story? Cuz I’m really waiting on an update on it, but either way, I can’t wait for whatever’s next!
Great start. I really like it, and can’t wait to see what you have in store.
A fresh input onto the first series – really showing a great promise of a great posting – keep up the great work along with your other story.
I enjoyed the ride down memory lane – with your additions. It is easy to see that they could have been attracted to each other as early as the beginning of season 1. The scene outside of the club showed something was up.
Hey, it’s a good start but it would be nice to see you moving away from the show’s path a little bit more, putting in a little more insight into Dana and Alice’s feelings.
so far so good :) keep it up. it’s interesting how closely your are following the show. Can’t wait to see whats next.
Funny, I just watched this episode. :) I really like that you let us see both sides of the story. In my opinion, Alice and Dana did have some little thing going on since the epilot-episode! I’m curious how you fill in all the blanks (we didn’t get to seec on the show unfortunately!) which will lead to the first kiss at 4 a.m.
This is more like it. Still enough left to our imaginations, but a clear direction for our beloved Danish. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Ok, so I totally loved it. Please keep on with this story (and your other one!), because I think that this is going to be an awesome story! :-)
WOot woot i like!! thanks for the post!
Oh yes..I like! Please continue!
i like it! please post more soon!