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Soft Spoken (Episode 1)
“Liar. We do not! It’s… friendly bickering. Besides, she’s bi. I can’t go down on someone knowing that something else has been up in there, ya know?” She laughed at me, shaking her head.
“See? You’re already thinking about fucking her!”
“No, I’m not! You were the one who- ah, forget it. We’re just friends, Tee. Not that she would like me anyways. Last night she practically crucified me for not coming out. I think she’s mad at me.”
“Fairbanks! Focus!” The instructor yelled, standing right in front of me now.
“Sorry!” I said sheepishly.
Later that night…
I was standing at the bar with Harrison at The Planet, checking out this one really cute girl with short hair and a red shirt. It was radar night, so of course the whole gang was here, save for Bette and Tina, who were fighting about the humor behind the latest turn down donor, Sean Paul. Apparently he had wanted to conceive the ‘old fashion way.’ Everyone had thought it was hilarious, except for Tina. I guess she really wanted that baby.
I nodded to the cute girl and turned to Harrison.
“That’s what I’m talking about. What do you think?” He glanced over at her.
“Hot. So hot. Actually, she kind of reminds me of Alice.” I shot him a look and he shrunk back. “I’m just saying…” We walked over to the table just as Marina did, pulling that girl Jenny along with her. I wondered what she was doing here, she obviously was with Tim. Maybe she didn’t know what radar really was. That was just like Marina, not to tell her. Wonderful girl.
“Um, where’s Bette?” Jenny asked after all the greetings. Tina and Alice answered at the same time.
“They’re still fighting.”
“She’s at work.” Tina crinkled her brow at Alice.
“Oh, my god, there’s so many hot girls here.” I said, taking a seat next to Alice and Shane. I heard Harrison whistle and I turned to see the cute girl standing behind me. “Hi!” I said a bit too enthusiastically.
“Hi.” She replied smoothly.
“How are you?” God, could I get any stupider? The girl smiled, but then to my horror leaned down to hug and kiss Shane! Shane got up, oblivious to me, and slung an arm around the girl.
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(31 votes, average: 3.48 out of 5)
Another great start! Before I couldn’t really see the chemistry between Dana and Alice before Tonya came along, but now ~thinking~ I may have to re-watch some things:) Also, were you still going to continue your other story? Cuz I’m really waiting on an update on it, but either way, I can’t wait for whatever’s next!
Great start. I really like it, and can’t wait to see what you have in store.
A fresh input onto the first series – really showing a great promise of a great posting – keep up the great work along with your other story.
I enjoyed the ride down memory lane – with your additions. It is easy to see that they could have been attracted to each other as early as the beginning of season 1. The scene outside of the club showed something was up.
Hey, it’s a good start but it would be nice to see you moving away from the show’s path a little bit more, putting in a little more insight into Dana and Alice’s feelings.
so far so good :) keep it up. it’s interesting how closely your are following the show. Can’t wait to see whats next.
Funny, I just watched this episode. :) I really like that you let us see both sides of the story. In my opinion, Alice and Dana did have some little thing going on since the epilot-episode! I’m curious how you fill in all the blanks (we didn’t get to seec on the show unfortunately!) which will lead to the first kiss at 4 a.m.
This is more like it. Still enough left to our imaginations, but a clear direction for our beloved Danish. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Ok, so I totally loved it. Please keep on with this story (and your other one!), because I think that this is going to be an awesome story! :-)
WOot woot i like!! thanks for the post!
Oh yes..I like! Please continue!
i like it! please post more soon!