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…..New Story…no title…….chapter 11
Sonny looked at his wife with pride in his eyes. Bette looked down. This was new for her.
“Can I see him? And Sonny, where’s Tina?”
“Marina, showed her your room and I just went by, she’s asleep. You want to go to her?”
“No, I want to see my father first and then I’ll go to her.”
“Okey, follow me.” Kit said.
Both Sonny and Bette followed Kit to the part of the clinic where their father stayed. They entered the quarters when Marina came out of their father’s room. Looking a bit concerned.
Kit sensed that something wasn’t right.
“Marina, what’s wrong?”
“You’re father is restless, he keeps asking if Bette arrived. He wants to see her.”
“That stubborn old man, I told him to go to sleep. The day was emotional as it was. And I promised him that when he’d wake up, Bette would be there. Well we don’t have a choice do we?”
“No, I don’t think so. Maybe Bette should go and see her father.”
Marina told Kit that they could go inside that their father was awake. So Kit and Bette started to walk towards the door. Sonny didn’t move.
“Babe, aren’t you coming?”
“No, you girls go have your quality time with your father.”
Now it was Bette’s turn to say: “he’s your father too, Sonny.”
Kit looked at her sister, yes Maxine raised her well. Sonny took Bette’s hand and followed the women into the room.
When Melvin heard the door opened he turned his head and saw Kit.
“Where’s my girl, Kit?”
“She’s right here with the tall gentleman.” Kit said smiling to her father.
Melvin eyes lighted up when he saw Bette and Sonny. He beckoned them to come closer. Bette walked up to the bed. It has been years that she saw her father. He was an old man now but still there was something that hasn’t changed. Some of the Porter beauty was still there. Sonny saw his father-in-law for the first time. He’d seen pictures of him and he knew were the girls had the beauty from. Because although they had gorgeous mothers, Melvin himself was an attractive man eventhough he was ill and the illness took it’s toll.
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Thanks for the update – enjoyed it. More please!
Girl, you are on a roll! Several updates, yeah!
I like that you wrote about what happend in the past, explained Melvin’s behaviour to his wifes and daughters. But i think he has a lot to make up and that he welcomes Tina in the family like he did with Sonny.
Enjoyed this chapter, thank you!
Love it and thanks! Off to work now! PPS
Great job! Enjoyed it, thanks
Sometimes our head hampers everything. Other times it’s the heart that does not help. And others are due to the fact that precipitation is inherent in humans. Melvin was wrong with her daughters. Wrong with himself. And he’s apologizing for being so cruel. I think Bette and Kit would be the last people who wanted to hurt, but it’s always like that. We ended up hurting those we love most .And is now asking forgiveness of their daughters.
The human being lives full of imperfections, full of flaws in their system, full of black skills, but the human being is also synonymous with learning and improvement.
Entire universe.
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