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My One Special One – Chapter 4
Did I just say ‘us’? Tina thought.
Did she just say ‘us’? the question immediately flashing in Bette’s mind.
“I’d like to take you to a club that is just a couple of blocks from here. Friday night is Ladies’ Night and they do a really nice mix of good old 70s classic disco dance and also 80sunless you wouldn’t feel comfortable goingit being a ***** clubI don’t want to push”
“I’d love to go, Bette.”
“Great. Well, come on then, pretty lady, I’m taking you dancing.”
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Walking to the club they continued talking, both trying to take in all the info being passed between them. The conversation was gap filling about their individual lives up to this point. They touched on family, where they grew up, school, their careersit was easy, flowed smoothly. Just two people getting the initial and basic 4-1-1.
.and there were the brief moments when they just stopped and stared into one another’s eyes. Yes, something definitely was happening here.
They reached 11th and Walnut in front of this very ornate but old building. Bette opened the door for Tina.
Tina looked up at the building, then at Bette. “This is a ***** club?”
“Why, yes, it is. We cover them all up to look like ordinary old buildings to fool all the common folk. Wouldn’t want them to know where all the Lesbians are on a Friday night.”
Tina raised an eyebrow and then playfully smacked Bette on the arm.
“Don’t be a smartass, Bette Porter.”
“I’ll try not to, Tina Kennard.”
Up the stairs they went. When they reached the top of the stairs Tina’s eyes adjusted to the low bar light. Then they got just a bit wider and Bette could swear she saw her mouth, “Oh my God.”
“Welcome to ***** Ladies’ Night, T. This is not your mother’s Ladies’ Night.”
“No *****, Sherlock.Look at all these womenI’m sorry, I just never knewI couldn’t imagineIThey’re all *****?”
“Well, if any of them are not, they’re in for one ***** of a surprise. There’s not a single ‘Mister’ here.”
Tina thought back to what she had read or heard stated that ***** people are only about ten percent of the population. There were at least several hundred women in this club – “They haven’t got a clue,” she murmured.
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(36 votes, average: 4.47 out of 5)
Damn…no sex and it can still be hot! It was beautiful and sexy and I can’t wait for the next chapter. Albeez…where are you foof head?
Agreeing with Marti….I like the approach also; being set in Philly…I happen to know the area very well…. ;)
YAAAAY! love this story. . .please post again soon!
Loving this ,WOW just keep on thanks
WOW… and i’m with you,,, IC and co can go to hell… you see in my fan fic they will also be always together… love this…please continue
I can’t help being drawn into your world…the world of B&T’s Forever Place and I love that. This is so beautifully written and I’m really really looking forward to see this story unfold in yours skilled hands :o))
oh babe that was excellent — as another member of the B/T forever club shall we have teeshirts made ? secret handshake ? i love how they are both so in awe of what is happening between them
That was excellent, Love this story
So lovin this story. Great update, hah, Tina can go one on one with Alice. Can’t wait for the next update.
That was…amazeing so beautifully written…really im in awe! nothing more to say except wow,oh sooo hot and thanks…lol
What a marvelous job you are doing with this. I hanging unto every post, please keep writing.
That was really sweet. And what a smart ass Alice can be, but i think Tina is up to the challenge. The visual of Bette and Tina slow dancing on the dance floor of a low lit club is mesmerizing. Please post another chapter soon.
I like this story.
Beautiful! Your words for the way they feel while dancing are amazing, the visual is so clear and really erotic. I can’t wait to read more!
Good chapter. That was beautiful and hot. Alice is crazy and funny. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Definitely love the lovin’ rc. I know I can always count on you for good and happy B&T. :) Glad Tina survived her first meeting with Alice! Hehe
Love it, love it, love it!!
I love this story, it seems to progress lovely, looking forward to your next chapter.
Loving this story. Looking forward to more.
grt!!!!!!!!!!!
amen to that and especially to thet Forever Place, because this is where B&T should be..thanks rs for this wonderful update
This story is so cute and just makes me say “awwwwwwww!” Yet at the same time it’s so hot that I’m really wishing I wasn’t at work right now. Four hours to go…
MORE, MORE, MORE!!! This is great.
That was just so beautiful. Beautifully thought out nd written. To add that final spark of romanticism to this story, do yourself a favor and read it while listening to Kenny G’s, fong “Falling In the Moonlight” no. 8 on his Paradise cd. The music and the story go hand in hand. Right now it is killing me not to be with someone I care about. Please try this you will not regret it. Listen to the music while reading this story. You will love it. Thanks for the post.
I don’t understand what IC is thinking sometimes. B&T can be together and we’ll still understand that life isn’t a fairy tale. Let them have each other to go thru the hard times together. ‘Foever Place’ is right. Great story. I’m counting on it to get me thru the sad times in season 3.
thanks for that great chapter! I’ll be making sure that you keep to your promise about bette and tina being together in your story! keep writing. I’ll be reading.
always love your story…do post soon!
Very nice. Thank you.
I just started reading from chapter 1 and needless to say, I am enjoying the slow arousal you have once again created. I followed your last story and I will be with this one to the very end…
Really do love this story. It’s beautiful, sensual, funny, and full of discovery…please continue. Also like that it’s set in Philly.