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My One Special One – Chapter 25
“Hey, Baby. I just got in. You busy tonight?”
“Hold for just a second, T.” Bette covered the phone and told the two young women that she’d be right with them. “Sorry, honey, can only talk for a minute. I’ll probably be here for at least another forty-five minutes. I may not get to you for another hour and a half. Will that be too late? You must be exhausted.”
“You get here whenever you can. I may be in the shower so use your key and give a yell that it’s you coming in. I love you, Baby. Be careful on your way home.”
“Love you, too. See you soon.” Bette ended the call and headed back to the two young women eagerly admiring several pieces. She smiled as she walked remembering Tina’s last few words, “on your way home.” Yep, Baby, home is where I’m going whenever the destination is you.
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The remnants of Tina’s long court day lay amid her scattered clothes. She stood naked in her room. She eyed the bed dreamily. Remembering the beginning of her day brought a smile to her face. She couldn’t help and didn’t fight the feeling of longing growing within her – the longing to go to bed each night and wake up each morning with Bette by her side. How very different your world becomes when the person who becomes the witness to your life takes up residence in your heart.
…a nice, long, hot shower to finish shedding this work day was going to feel terrific. Tina padded into her bathroom, turned on the water and stepped in. One of the things she really liked about this apartment building was the water pressure. It was good and strong. She smiled as the water beat upon her body and cascaded down her form…yes, just like her Bette, good and strong.
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Rick found himself dozing when his forehead hit the comic book resting on the edge of the desk. “Whoa…damn it.” He looked at his watch and hoped no one had come in and passed the desk when he fell asleep. “Man, I got to cut back a bit. I can’t afford to lose this job….and speaking of that, I think I’ll just make this call…fuck it.”
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This story is so good, it makes my skin crawl! Hurry Bette, hurry!!!!!!!
This story is great look forward to the next chapter, dont open the door Tina
Bruno Magli shoes? He borrowed shoes from OJ? This guy can’t be Tina’s brother if he’s wearing OJ shoes. Let Bette get there early, please. Please post again soon.
OH NO MR.BILL! its not her brother folks,and please let bette be really close to home….please post soon
This is such a fantastic read. Carry on as you are able! :-)
Greg? or OJ? I hope Bette gets there soon…this dosen’t sound good.
Now I don’t want to see tina get hurt by any creepy creep or slimeball, though I would think that since she knows they have been trying to get to her, she would be a tad less naive about letting people up…BUT Bette is not the cavalry!! Why does everyone want her to walk in to a mess and get hurt herself???
That guy is not Tina’s brother is he? He is going to harm her unless someone gets to her and saves her. I could be wrong but the description of the penetrating eyes is the same way that the guy stalking Bette was described.
OMG Bette hurry home to save Tina, she in danger right now and this is gonna be bad. Please don’t let any bad thing happen to Tina and hope Bette get home in time to save Tina. This guy is not Tina’s brother or is he, maybe or maybe not oh I don’t know but let find out on the next chapter post soon please, thanks!
1st brb
Bruno Magli shoes–nice touch!
That random moment on the first page sounds like Tina’s mom remembering something from her past. Hmm…Either Greg is just weird, or that’s not really Greg. =O I wish you could post more often. This story is like a book you can’t put down.
I’m guessing its not really Greg too! Let’s hope Bette isn’t too far behind.
it’s not greg…oh, tina, why didn’t she even checked it was him? anyone can say anything…keep them safe please
You’re killing me! Some great drama coming up? Bette should hurry up. So post soon and don”t leave me biting my nails.
What a cliffy, you’ve to post soon….very soon :o)) This is great.
OH MY GOD, WHAT A PLACE TO STOP!!!! … Just kidding, I love your cliffies, and that’s what makes your writing so great! Makes me want more, oh so much more, of this amazing, thrilling, hot, sweet story! Just hope that you’ll post soon, and that you’ll keep Tina safe. But I trust you, cause the drama you insert in your stories usually makes them so fascinating, romantic and endearing! So lkg fwd to the next chapter, and for now, THANKS A BUNCH!!!
i’m with the others… i don’t think its her brother… but i do hope it is… and i hope bette is almost there… please post soon…
Great Update!!!!! I hope Bette gets home before something happens to Tina. Thank you PPS