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My One Special One – Chapter 11
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It was a little after seven when Tina put her key into her apartment door. Tired as she was, she wanted to call Bette. First, take off these damn lawyer clothes and into my favorite pj’s.
Changed and a bit more relaxed, she took out a bowl and then dumped the huge salad she picked up on the way home into it. She hadn’t had anything to eat since the twisted, salted loaf of bread that Philly is famous for besides their cheesesteaks.
After several mouthfuls she started to feel a bit more human. She settled into a comfortable spot on the couch, put her feet up and let the week so far slide away.
“And now for the best part of my day.” Tina punched in Bette’s number.
“Hey, you. I just got home a few minutes ago. I’m changed and fed and wanted to spend some time with you. Are you busy?” Tina asked.
“Nothing that can’t wait, T. Been a bear of a week for you, hasn’t it?”
“Yes, but it’s almost over. Will I get to see you Friday night?” Tina hoped she didn’t sound too pleading, but she couldn’t help it – she needed to be with this woman.
“Of course, T. This Friday and all Fridays, if you’d like.” Bette was also trying not to sound like she was begging. “How about Saturdayand Sunday? Dodo youare you busy?”
“I’m sorry, Bette, I am.”
“Oh. Okay. Well, maybe another weekend”
“I did put aside the time to see this person…” Tina thought she shouldn’t have said anything to Bette. She didn’t like hearing her feel so hurt.
“No – no, Tina. Please don’t explain. It’s – it’s okay, really.” Bette couldn’t believe she was fighting back tears.
“Please let me explain, Bette. This person is very important to me”
“Tina, please, don’t say anymore. I don’t own your time.” Besides I really don’t want to know that you’ll be spending time with anyone else, Bette thought. “Maybe it would be better if we cancel Friday night. This way you could have a full weekend to spend with this important person.”
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your metaphors are incredible, this is a very beautiful chapter and i hope they will overcome their fear and express their love….should we be scared about the person following Tina? i hope not…….don’t give up on B&T, i hope Ilene will find the way to finally bring them back together as well
That was a great chapter, rc. Please let them overcome the fear and say it, “I love you.” Now who is following Tina and what for? Please don’t let anything happen to her it would kill Bette for sure. Can we just have a beautiful love story and not too much drama, please. lol. Thanks for the post.
WOW!!!! Is all I can SAY!!!
Oh good God! That was phenomenal…bloody phenomenal. I hope you’ll post soon, arceextl.
loved this… and just what we needed.. and now we need to for them to say those little words… so please continue
Awesome update, and so HOT!!! Please post soon.
Like Van said….that was so intense – WOW. I absolutely love your writing and can’t get enough – I’m addicted :o))….more please and have a great weekend…
wow that was worth waiting for-damm that was a great chapter
Damn that was hot and awesome. Ok who the hell is following Tina and I think the drama is coming. Ok post soon please, thanks!
what a wonderful chapter! i enjoy the way that you put this 2 together, i hope that they soon be available to said the magical words! post soon
Love your writing and your story!!!!Hope you will continue and ignore the misery of season 3!!
Great story. Just caught up. An award icon is in the future I think. Thanks!
I know how fear can paralize a person to do nothing. I am struggling with the need to take a cold shower, watching Charmed and needing to put new batteries in my toys. Keep writing.
Arceextl,Another piece of heaven.I adore the way that Bette and Tina are falling head over heels in love with their hearts as their heads put barriers in the way. Hope and trust are the emotions that overcome these obstacles. This is a highly emotive story, wonderfully written and crafted. The care and attention to detail are splendid as your supreme storytelling fills every reader will a little sliver of your imagination. I can’t wait until these gals admit their true feelings to each other. The tenderness and adoration is evident in their lovemaking and constant thoughts of one another. Much gratitude for continuing this marvellous melodrama and making my day magical. Your Loyal Fan.
words don’t fail me, that was a fantastic piece of writing. Post soon
Glad to see another chapter from you! I’ve been in there shoes before, where you want to say it but are afraid it’s too soon or whatever. But your eyes give it away anyway. I guess saying it actually makes it more real, and reality can be scary as hell.
Goodness that was sooo….. intense!! Beautifully written. Now I know that drama is around the corner, who is following Tina???? And Y ??? I know you won’t let anything happen to her (at least I hope not). Looking forward to another update….VERY VERY SOON!!!! LOL!!!
Who is following Tina? The love semse was so intense,Love how Tina was the one at the door,Post soon.thanks
This whole chapter was beautifully written. I loved the descriptives with shaping the steel, and how “its molecular makeup remains the same, but its form is forever changed in those blistering, blazing moments.”That was fabulous, along with these two thoughts which will stay with me for a long time. 1. “I just cannot live my life through the eyes and minds of other people.” 2. The core of her being was the center of an enormous rippling circle in a steamy river as it meets the giant sea.” Incredible writing. Thank you very much for this chapter.
B & T love one another to intensely, totally, and completely that the fear of saying it out loud keeps them silent. They know how they feel, but to hear those words spoken with true intent is what will make the seal unbreakable. Who was following Tina? Does it have to do with a case she’s working on? Drama and mystery…