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Masked Feelings CH 40 Three is One too Many
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Alice – What are you doing? Can’t you see I’m trying to work.
Roxy – Doesn’t look like you are doing anything.
Alice – Can’t you do your job from over there?
Roxy – Do you hate me that much?
Alice – I don’t hate you. I just want you to keep your distance from me.
Roxy – I’d do anything for you, Alice…. just don’t ask me to do that. I love you.
Alice – You want to hold it down… I work here.
Roxy – Are you afraid your co-workers are going to hear? Maybe it’s you thats afraid to hear those words coming from me. Wonder what Dana would say if I told her how I really felt about you.
Alice – Don’t you dare tell her.
Roxy – Yeah, I guess that would be a bad idea. She might haul off and slug me, then you’d have to wait even longer for her. That is if you still want her… Are you going to let Dana keep the clock?
Alice – It’s not my decision whether she keeps it or not.
Roxy – If it were me, we would’ve never had a fight about that stupid clock. I’m not that insensitive.
Alice – Why do you always get yourself involved in our personal matters? You think that scores points with me?
Roxy – You really don’t understand me, do you?
Alice – Oh, I think I do… you want me to dump Dana and jump into your arms.
Roxy – Thats a nice scenerio, but not exactly what I was going to say.
Alice – What then…
Roxy – I think you’re making a big mistake. At first I thought you two were meant to be together. I convinced Dana that she needed to get you back. Hell, I was even the one to make sure the marriage wasn’t legal. Lara was wrong for her and now I see you are too. There is so much baggage where Dana and you are concerned. Why would you want to screw up a perfectly good friendship? If you’re fighting about a clock… and that is small stuff, by the way…. what are you going to do when you really need to talk about the important stuff? Dana is a dead end as far I’m concerned.
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Great Update! Roxy was right about them stopping because of her hesitation. How long can Alice hold her off?
So yes, as you said, this chapter had allot of drama and crap in it but I appreciate the bit of hope you give us in the last paragraph. I know that once the truth comes out Dana will be upset with Alice but in the end they’ll be together. I just hate that Roxy keeps toying with Alice- especially when she’s vulnerable. I’m glad Alice is determined to show Dana how much she means to her but Alice needs to tell Dana the truth soon. You have me curious as to what the hell’s up with Lara’s body (or missing body as the case may be)…I’m still waiting for Dana to get better and for the scorching hot sex to be had ;) Great job as usual and thanks for the comment! Can’t wait till the update…
Wow I grovel at your feet, this will be the third time I’ve read this chapter and I can’t not love it. I tried and failed miserably, Alice needs to get her ass in gear and tell Dana, things are only going to get worse and when the shit hits the fan, they better have a good cleaning lady. I loved the shopping scene, and all the bickering, man Alice you have it hard you’ve got Dana Tony Gina and Roxy all dying to be with you the stress must be otherwordly. Meanwhile I can’t get a glance but that’s ok…whatever. Anyway great chapter again (but you don’t need me to tell you that for you to know it’s amazing). Update soon (but I’ll keep on you and make sure it happens) :)
Whoa…brteyes…how lucky am I? I get to comment right under one of my other fav. FF writers in one of my other fav fic…ClosetDana **bowing to both** whew! That floor was dirty, but worth it….you guys are great…Cheers!!!
Thank you for your sweet comment. :D You got me worried there… When I didn’t find an update of this story in the last couple of days, I thought you left me! :P As long as you keep writing this wonderful story (I can’t believe it’s the 40th chapter either!), I’ll keep commenting. :D I’m really curious what’s in that clock. Time will tell, I will try to wait patiently… :S A lot of fighting this chapter. The tension (in all of its meaning) is still building up, nice. :)Poor Dana tough (actually poor all of them), I wonder how she will react when she hears the whole truth. Roxy’s plans to win Alice over always seem to backfire on her in the end, don’t they? :D As you probably can guess, Roxy’s plans are working for me, because they get Alice more drawn to Dana. When did Sharon Fairbanks become so nice and supportive? I think it’s sweet that Alice called her out of concern for Dana. And I justed wanted to say that – in my opinion – the doctor can give Dana an OK (on Dana being healed) in the near future. If the doctor doesn’t want to, they can come to me. I mean if that’s the only thing that’s standing in the way of hot Danish love making, I can pretend to have a medical background and give Dana an OK. :P
Here’s my happy ending…The mob starts gunning for Roxy, The FBI kicks her out for misconduct, she now must fend for herself. Shane catches wind of all this Roxy crap and has some of her old street pals rough her up. Soon the mob catches up to Roxy and she is sleepin’ with the fishes. Dana and Alice confess all of their sins and live happily ever after.
there is going to be so much more drama to come from all of this please post soon can’t wait to see what will happen next great update
Drama, drama, drama…I loved every bit of it. Roxy is a piece of work but she doesn’t seem te be getting closer to Alice as she wants. That’s a good thing though. I think that Dana hates Roxy as much as I do. Loved Kirstens part in it and cannot wait to find out what happened to Lara’s body!! And Sharon to the rescue, who knew! Go Sharon, make your daughter see the light. Hope Alice tells Dana the truth about her and Roxy just to get that over with. Brteyes you had me for 13 pages and I’m counting the days for the next update. Thanks your great!