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    Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 82 THE FINALE

    Story written on October 27, 2005 by arceextl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=57311
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    The Finale…it will never really be the end.

     

    At twenty-five Angelica had experienced falling in love a few times, but she knew she had never experienced the intensity and bond of love that her mothers shared.   And for that reason she couldn’t grasp the depth of what her one Mom was feeling right now as she kissed her lover of thirty-three years goodbye.

     

    She would miss her Mom tremendously.  Angelica felt a piece of her own self die as she watched her Mother’s chest rise and fall for the last time.  The three of them had been family, along with all the gal pals who watched her grow up.   The bigots and hate mongers could say what they will, but never was there a love and a connection between two human beings as there was – and still is – between her two Moms.

     

    Across her mind fleeted thoughts of the good times, the not so good times, the fights, the disagreements, the tears, the laughter – but most of all, the love.  A slight grin graced her face at how shocked she was when she brought a friend home from college, unannounced, and they walked right in on her Moms making love in the living room.  God, they’re so old she thought at the time – but her friend said later, how ***** cool is that, after all these years your Moms are still so in love, that they get it on in any room of the house.   Yeah, she was right.

     

    She remembered when they finally legalized marriage between same ***** couples.  Her Moms had a wedding that would have rivaled any Hollywood big wig.  It was the best.  The photo album they have and the DVD they have of that are going to be viewed quite often in the coming months.

     

    They reached the door of the hospital room, Angelica with her arm holding her mother closely to her. Her Mom broke the embrace and walked back to the bed for the last time.  She put her hand on her lover’s and bent down and whispered into her ear:

     

    “I will kiss your lips and make love with you again when I meet you on the next journey of our life together.  Wait for me, because it will always be you and me, Bette and Tina – Forever.”

     

     

    The End

     

     

     

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    1. Great story and I CAN NOT BELIEVE YOUO ENDED IT THIS WAY. FICTIONAL CHARACTERS DON’T HAVE TO DIE, AT LEAST WE DO NOT HAVE TO ACKNOWLEDGE IT. Which one died anyway, Angelica usually called Tina Mommy and Bette Mom, now which was it?

    3. ehia ieg eisupfiso. sorry can’t see what im writing through the tears. *sigh* it was supposed to say,

      that was beautiful. please more from you. it wont be the same without you.

    4. RC. I don’t comment often on this site, but you inspire me. This has been an incredible journey to be a silent voyeur in. You have moved me to tears in laughter and in the pain your muses had to undergo. You have depicted the truest love imaginable, and one we all hope to achieve in our lives. And as for no names in the finale, well, when you love that much, you both die when one heart stops beating. I hope to continue reading your inspirations, peace to you.

    5. wow what a ending to a beautiful story and i’ve read it from begining to the end sorry my heart is just stunned and it;s hard ti=o tpye for the tears just wowed us please think of another story soon- you and your story has got me thro many days when i feel i need my friends-the writers good job girl!!

    6. i look really stupid seating home alone and crying over this final chapter…this is really beautiful and you right it would be devistating no matter what, B&T love is so great and i hope we’ll hear another wonderful story from you soon…i wish it wasn’t the end though because i hate to see either of them hurt or dead, but it was written beautifully, thanks

    7. RC…what a beautiful and sad ending to this amazing story. Bette & Tina forever. That is what we wish and hope for and that is what we got. The ending may be sad, because of the death of one of our ladies;however, the journey continues. Thank you for creating and sharing such a wonderful story that captured our hearts, minds, and souls. I’m quite sure there will be another story coming from your creative mind..and I’ll be here waiting to enjoy that journey also. Thank you RC…thank you. ;-)

    11. OK..I am tired of crying and I want to say “That is what we all want” Thank you for the ride and I can’t wait for the next one. Please don’t leave us for long

    12. My God. This has always been a great story, so much drama and intrigue, but in no way was I expecting this ending. There only characters in a story, but are they really. The diffence is that we’ve all seen Tina and Bette, we know that look that exists between them, the love that generates any time those two get near each other. To have that or to have experienced it, OMG is more than any one person could ask for. Thus, this is why we all, well most of us feel so sad, its like we lost a part of us. And it not only takes words but a fantastic writer to put those words together to make that happen. And that would be you. Awesome, can’t wait for your next story, but please set out with the goal of keeping them both alive, in love, and together.

    13. My computer’s up and running and I’m finally able to finish your story! I’m glad that Helena got her just desserts, but what a way to go. Diane Buckley definitely came out of nowhere. I hope that Susan ended up being alright. Ahh this is so sad, rc, but quite a fitting ending to your story. I’m glad that B&T had 33 years together. I hope that you get a story idea soon. I am anxiously looking forward to it! Thanks so much for taking us on this journey with you.

    15. Im probably late!butOHMYGOD!I just discovered this story, a couple days ago, and finally got to the end. AMAZING! This story has been an amazin from start to finish, so many twists, and I loved how u just brought helena, candace, and other back in. I sooo did not see the susan plot!, that was amazin, so all this time, she was actually helpin out tibette, amazing! this is definatly one of the best!

    16. OH GOD NO!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOT THE WAY I ENVISIONED STARTING MY DAY OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!! IS THIS REALLY HOW U ENDED IT OR IS THIS A DREAM!!!!!!!!!!!!! LET IT BE A DREAM…….PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

    17. okay…you really need to warn a gal before you go and do something like this…i know that these are only fictional characters, but you broke my heart!

    18. I can hardly see my keyboard for crying but that really was so UTTERLY beautiful that i have to try and thank you for ending it like that. God i hope that love like that really exists.
      thank you

    21. That was beautiful. How lucky Bette and Tina were to have found such great love, and have been able to share their lives together for thirty-three years. May all of us be so lucky. Thank you for all the time and thought you put into telling this story.

    22. OMG!!! I never expected this type of ending to your story. I’m sitting here reading your story with my mouth open, with goose bumps all over and my heart breaking, just thinking how could either one of them be dead. In my mind they will live forever. I can’t or won’t even believe this would happen. Bette & Tina forever!!! Their love lives on 4ever!!!!!!!!!!

    23. i say again…….please write more, the next story that you can dream up will probally dwarf this in maginitude, thanks for the ride, it really was a trip.

    24. RC, as always, you are one hell of a writer and a great storyteller; so if I must be the first to say this, then here it goes….this finale depressed the hell out of me and I am so sorry I didnt stop reading at the end of chapter 81. If I had thought for 1 moment that you would have 86’d either one of them, I wouldnt have clicked “next post!”

    26. RC,

      Word fail me in this, my own, moment of grief and loss.

      I feel like I have lost a good friend and confidante. I did feel slighted by the lack of a name but understand and admire your decision.

      I do hope that this bereavement won’t be for long as I am sure that the intervening 24 yours will have multitudes of tales to be told.

      After some rest and recuperated the voices will start again and direct you to a story desperate to be shared.

      You are a talented writer with a real flair for mystery and intrigue. I have often scratched my head in frustration while trying to work out the next puzzle.

      Thank you so much for all the time, effort and hard work that has created this fabulous Fan fiction.

      I applaud you and will wait patiently for your next masterpiece.

      Your Loyal Fan.

    27. Such a sad but beautiful chapter. I will definetly be missing your post and hope that you don’t leave us for to long…your a great story teller and it was a pleasur reading your story…thanks a bunch and take care.

    29. i just finished this story i was a great journey…i am sad and crying now but not because one of them passed. that is a fact of life. i am crying because all of us girls dream of having a love like bette and tina in this story and so few of us find it. im crying because of my lost love the greatest love i have ever known its been a year since we were together and i am hoping for a reunion like the one in this story. i am crying because i know deep in my heart that it is not to be….great story i loved it…thanks for sharing

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