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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 73
Bette whipped her head around and walked right up to
“I cannot tolerate your presence when I’m in a good mood,
Bette turned and walked back to the carpenters.
“Get this fixed and stable before you leave here TONIGHT. Understand?”
“It’s getting a little late” one of the younger carpenters said.
His boss scowled at him. “Shut up, Thompson. It will be fixed AND stable as it should be before we leave today.”
“Thank you.” Bette headed back to her office, shaking her head. At least the lighting and artwork wasn’t attached. A few more days – that’s all, Porter. Just breathe. Hopefully, that’s the end of my headaches for the day.
* * *
Looking out before her, the branches of the tree overhead, she spoke into the breeze.
I’m trying to be patient – it’s hard. You can understand that, right? No, you probably don’t. Of course not, I’m talking to the ***** empty air in front of me. I need to do this. Maybe once I’m done here you and I can be together – maybe then we can have our relationship, maybe then we can say I love youwhat do you think, huh?
The only answer she got was the sound from the rustling of the leaves.
* * *
“James, I’m heading out. I’m already fifteen minutes later than I want to be. Would you please see that everything in the main gallery is the way it should be before those guys leave here? And go out there and hang around.”
“No problem, boss. The electricians are on call. They have a couple people to send over as soon as I let them know.”
“Great, James. Please don’t call me at home unless it’s a dire emergency.”
“Got it. See you tomorrow.”
Bette walked through the main gallery and saw that the structure that had fallen was nearly complete. She couldn’t bear talking to them right now and knew James would take care of it, even if it meant hanging on the damn thing to make sure it wouldn’t topple. He deserved every penny of his raise.
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(26 votes, average: 4.27 out of 5)
great.
“thanks for the sniffer.”
“oh, my bette, you certainly continue to have your woes with carpenters…” stuff her in the toilet, someone, please.
“oh, but the way, your wifey has a copy also.” the big red ram charger with hemi needs to run her sorry ass over.
“id like nothing more than the pleasure of bitch-slapping her…” “yes me. surprised i could be a bit alpha, babe?” im next in line behind tina. and what a place to be. ahahaha
thanks rc. them together fills my heart with joy.
Sweet. Tina is really navigating them through some rough waters. Bette needs to hold on tight, trust Tina’s direction and never let go. Anything less will lead to doubt and that’s not what the little tot needs from her moms.
Don’t think the pictures will convince her, Bette? Perhaps your cries of coming as you writhed beneath me will do the trick…
So let me get this straight the fuck took all those pictures and taped them having sex? Shit like this really makes me fear women sometimes…..*briefly though*:-)
And ya would think Helena would learn to back off now and again. I swear she really wants Bette to beat her within an inch of her life, doesn’t she?
wow a very powerful and lovin chapter. post soon
now that was beautiful… tina handled it perfectly… see if they don’t say a word… candyass will be really pissed off… oh and please please let tina BITCH-SLAP-THE-BITCH…and bette BITCH-SLAP-THE-OTHER-BITCH…
love this story…please continue soon
Nice, very nice, I loved the way Tina handled this situation. By taking the Winnie approcah to Candace she was able to both calm Bette and draw them closer together. It is very important that they consentrate more on themselves and thier family, than thier distractors. The stronger thier bond, the harder it is going to be to break them apart. Good job, please continue.
That’s all Candace is, hot air. Thank you for making Tina so strong. Bette’s really lucky to have such an understanding and loving wife. I just wish that these people will get their own lives already and leave B&T alone!! Although it is more fun this way Hehe
Ihey didn’t fall for the bait Helene didn’ get Bette to angry and Candace didn’t make Tina packand grap Angie and run for the hills. thanks
rc,
From rd, hee hee.
Just liked that.
Another wonderful instalment.
It was refreshing to see Bette as the harried party and Tina the pillar of strength and quiet determination.
Looks like Tina has Candyass down pat. She know exactly what CA is trying to do and is preventing Bette rising to the bait.
Thank you for this marvellous melodrama.
Will be here waiting for your next post. Make it real soon, please.
Much thanks,
Your Loyal Fan.
That was so perfectly done. You had them react to the photos but not react to the message and taunt that wqs hurled at them. You let them talk themselves thru the memory and stand to face it and ignore it. Wonderfully done. Thank you.