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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 73
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“All right. I’ll let you go. Just wanted you to know my nose is still sniffing.”
“It wouldn’t be you if it weren’t, Al. Thanks for the sniffer. I’m sorry, but I’ve got to get back to this. You, of all people, know what it’s like this close to an opening.”
“Yes, I remember it well. Talk later, Bette.”
* * *
She got out of her truck and walked over to the Saab SUV. How cute, she traded in her convertible. Christ, they’ll be giving them the Cleaver award soon.
Rolling the paper up diploma style she stuck it through the door handle. That ought to spice up your ride home, Bette.
She got back into her truck, turned the ignition and listened as the fifteen year old engine sprang to life. Well, you’ve been well-cared for and I love ya but when this works out, there’s going to be one big, red Dodge Ram Charger with Hemi engine taking your place.
* * *
Things were actually falling neatly into place and then a resounding crash nearly jolted Bette out of her seat.
Even in his hurry, James still knocked on Bette’s door, but didn’t wait for an answer
“Bette”
“What the ***** happened, James?” She was up and around her desk headed to the main gallery before James could answer.
“What – the – ***** – happened here?” She was looking at one of the main structures toppled over and crushing one of the smaller platforms to its side.
If she didn’t count to ten, there were going to be limbs ripped from the bodies of men before her that would join the tangled mess of one bys of wood on the floor.
“Ms. Porter, it was an accident – we’ll get it fixed”
As if on cue,
“Oh, my, Bette, you certainly continue to have your woes with carpenters”
The group of carpenters dare not look expectant for a cat fight – Bette Porter would tear them to shreds. This was a great job to do and if they ever wanted to be back again, they all knew the look of contrition better remain on their faces.
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great.
“thanks for the sniffer.”
“oh, my bette, you certainly continue to have your woes with carpenters…” stuff her in the toilet, someone, please.
“oh, but the way, your wifey has a copy also.” the big red ram charger with hemi needs to run her sorry ass over.
“id like nothing more than the pleasure of bitch-slapping her…” “yes me. surprised i could be a bit alpha, babe?” im next in line behind tina. and what a place to be. ahahaha
thanks rc. them together fills my heart with joy.
Sweet. Tina is really navigating them through some rough waters. Bette needs to hold on tight, trust Tina’s direction and never let go. Anything less will lead to doubt and that’s not what the little tot needs from her moms.
Don’t think the pictures will convince her, Bette? Perhaps your cries of coming as you writhed beneath me will do the trick…
So let me get this straight the fuck took all those pictures and taped them having sex? Shit like this really makes me fear women sometimes…..*briefly though*:-)
And ya would think Helena would learn to back off now and again. I swear she really wants Bette to beat her within an inch of her life, doesn’t she?
wow a very powerful and lovin chapter. post soon
now that was beautiful… tina handled it perfectly… see if they don’t say a word… candyass will be really pissed off… oh and please please let tina BITCH-SLAP-THE-BITCH…and bette BITCH-SLAP-THE-OTHER-BITCH…
love this story…please continue soon
Nice, very nice, I loved the way Tina handled this situation. By taking the Winnie approcah to Candace she was able to both calm Bette and draw them closer together. It is very important that they consentrate more on themselves and thier family, than thier distractors. The stronger thier bond, the harder it is going to be to break them apart. Good job, please continue.
That’s all Candace is, hot air. Thank you for making Tina so strong. Bette’s really lucky to have such an understanding and loving wife. I just wish that these people will get their own lives already and leave B&T alone!! Although it is more fun this way Hehe
Ihey didn’t fall for the bait Helene didn’ get Bette to angry and Candace didn’t make Tina packand grap Angie and run for the hills. thanks
rc,
From rd, hee hee.
Just liked that.
Another wonderful instalment.
It was refreshing to see Bette as the harried party and Tina the pillar of strength and quiet determination.
Looks like Tina has Candyass down pat. She know exactly what CA is trying to do and is preventing Bette rising to the bait.
Thank you for this marvellous melodrama.
Will be here waiting for your next post. Make it real soon, please.
Much thanks,
Your Loyal Fan.
That was so perfectly done. You had them react to the photos but not react to the message and taunt that wqs hurled at them. You let them talk themselves thru the memory and stand to face it and ignore it. Wonderfully done. Thank you.