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    Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 47

    Story written on July 27, 2005 by arceextl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=55665
    Author Notes:

    Bette & Tina’s special night comes to a close…Bette surrenders her soul.

     

    Every sensation of pleasure she had ever known through Tina’s touch was passing over and through her body.  One was indiscernible from the other.  Her mind was simply lost, she felt her eyes begin to roll backNO!, let me feel thislet me feel this final freedom.In the recesses of her mind Bette knew this ***** was more than sexual release.

     

     

    ***** it all, if this is my last conscious thought, let it be the memory of my  handing over my soul through an orgasmic stream to Tina Kennard

     

     

    Bette did not even feel Tina turn her towards the edge of the bed and place her legs on her shoulders.  She did, however, feel the gentle curling of Tina’s fingers applying pressure which caused the interior walls of her body to shiver on their foundations. Then within seconds Tina’s tongue was deep inside her, then began licking and lapping her way to her throbbing *****.   As Tina wrapped her lips around and began sucking on her ***** while continuing the now almost ferocious thrusting, Bette suddenly felt those quaking walls began to rumble and fracture.  They could not hold back nor withstand for much longer the powerful hammering of all her remaining fears wanting freedom.

     

    As this powerful climax reached detonation, the last standing walls containing her fears were splitting and crumbling.  There was no going back now – Tina just handed them their ticket to ride.

     

    The key in the ignition turned and the internal combustion flared with such force up her chest that it pushed Bette up.  Tina was holding tightbut Bette held her tighter.  Bette was releasing these fears to one destination only and she wasn’t letting go until she knew they arrived

     

    Bette’s screams of Tina’s name were a heart wrenching mix of submission, release, connection and love so powerful and intense that Tina felt it through her own body.   It was also a cry and a plea for protection. 

     

    This night she allowed Tina to unlock the remaining shackles on that hidden box of ‘don’t go near feelings.’

     

     

    you are now the gatekeeper and guardian of my soul, Tina Kennard.

     

    Tina took a shaking and crying Bette in her arms and held her as close as she could.  She then looked once again into those dark chocolate eyes that so many years ago took her breath away. She kissed the tears away and then reached for Bette’s hand and placed it over her heart.

     

     

    “It’s okay, baby, you arrived safely.  My heart  will never let you go.  As long as we stand strong beside one another, no one or nothing will break usever again.” 

     

     

    The cool night air blew in on a soft breeze through the open balcony door.  Thousands of stars were background lighting to the end of tonight.

     

    As Bette and Tina held one other in the safety of each others’ embrace, the breeze drifting in first closed the eyes of this special night; then floated over and draped invisible protective arms around these lovers to ensure their safe passage into all their tomorrows.

     

     

    TBC

     

     

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    1. WoW! I’m speechless. That was one of the best posts I’ve ever read. I wish I could convey how wonderful you put all the love into words but words will not do it justice. I’m looking forward to more!
      You are truly talented.

    8. OMG…WOW. That was truly amazing. You put Destined LOVE into words…I cannot do justice to your post, but simply and humbly say OMG…WOW. You are very gifted. Thank you soo much for sharing.

    9. Arce,
      That was earth shattering!
      Thank you for writing and sharing that momentous moment as Bette and Tina reunited their souls, hearts, spirits, mind and entire beings.
      The imagery was perfectly drawn to entice and beguile your audience. The total commitment and submission shown between Bette and Tina illustrates the true meaning of love. To completely surrender and willing hand over all sense of yourself to another human being is a wondrous gift. It is something most of us will only realise through the magnificence of your masterpiece.
      I applaud your talent, genius and effort in creating this superb story.
      Know that this entertains and affects your readers as I savour every, word, phrase and sentence.
      Thank you for making my day brighter.
      Your Loyal Fan.

    17. You know, there was something incredibly powerful in the way you linked these two last chapters through the symbolic walls’ theme…
      At first, last time, the room’s walls that “captured” mutual love’s expression, becoming “partners with the flickering shadows of golden light that danced across the walls”.
      And here, now, more intimate but more than ever symbolic walls, “the last standing walls containing her fears”…

      Yes, these two brilliant and touching NC-17 chapters told much more about love’s deepest connection and shared trust than simply about sex. “Final freedom (…) more than sexual release”, the “powerful hammering of all her remaining fears wanting freedom”.

      Tina as Bette’s “gatekeeper” of her soul, that was a magical idea.
      You made a truly amazing work here, really. I congratulate you – and I thank you for such a reading’s pleasure. There were chapters to be remembered. Bravo !

    18. OMG,OMG,OMFG!!!! IC, where the hell are you woman? You had better be taking notes!!!! this is what we want to see next season and none of that Jenny crap!!!!

      Great job arcextl, and more really, really soon.

    19. Uh, umm, arcee? This is just a head’s up–Yep, you’ve succeeded in showing the intensity of their connection…in fact, you’ve gone way past just showing–I think I even felt it myself! It was powerful and yet, tender at the same time….just what love should feel like! Thanks!

    22. arceextl, WOW! Your entire story was incredible. And such a powerful ending; you leave me at a lose for words. All I can say to you is Thnak You for the pleasure and the honor of reading your work.

    23. Excuse me, but are you TRYING to kill me??? Your storyline has pulled me through the off season, but this one just about did me in. Jeez, we’re all out here thinking, why can’t it be ME, instead of just fiction???
      Keep it up, please! – It’s certainly keeping me UP!

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