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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 47
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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 47
Previously
and repeatedly throughout this night the walls captured these lovers’ words of love – and trust – and forever; once captured, they became partners with the flickering shadows of golden light that danced across the walls
Well, Bette had planned ahead correctly. She had a feeling she and Tina would not be having dinner right away. That’s why she ordered cold salads and fruit kept on ice in the room.
Sometime after god knows what number ***** they each had, stomach growls began mingling with afterglow kissing.
“Do you think we can manage to walk over there to feed ourselves, T?”
“I know, we better, huh?”
“Uh-huh. T?”
“Yeah, babe.”
“Tonight has been really special. As special as our first time and when we made love after the sonogram.”
“New memories, babe. But guess what?”
“What?”
“It’s not over yet.”
Bette smiled . “Well, I guess we better get some food for energy, um?”
“Oh, yeah.”
They put on the luxurious hotel robes and headed out on the balcony. It was a beautiful starlit night.
Tina went to the railing and just gazed out at the sky. Bette came up behind her and wrapped her arms around her waist and nuzzled her neck.
“I don’t know what it is about you, Tina Kennard, but I just can’t get my fill of you.”
“That’s nice to know, Bette Porter, because after we eat I plan on doing a lot more filling of you.”
“Okay, in that case, dinner is served!”
***
They lazily ate their dinner under a canopy of stars. The distant gems glistening in the night sky nearly matched the rays of love light burning in their eyes.
Tina reached across and covered Bette’s hand with hers.
“Babe?”
“Yeah, T.”
“Thank you for loving me.”
Bette lifted Tina’s hand and softly kissed it.
“I don’t know how I could ever not love you, T.”
“Now, that’s music to my ears, baby. Why don’t we take a nice bath together? Would you like that?”
“Oh, yeah.”
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WoW! I’m speechless. That was one of the best posts I’ve ever read. I wish I could convey how wonderful you put all the love into words but words will not do it justice. I’m looking forward to more!
You are truly talented.
wow
BEAUTIFULL………..
amazing beautiful..post soon please
Just f*cking amazing is all I have to say, Arc
Woweee!! Now THAT”S what I call fantabulous writing!! Absolutely marvellous chapter!
dont know if you heard that where ever you live. but i did. jaws dropping all over the place. that was awesome.
OMG…WOW. That was truly amazing. You put Destined LOVE into words…I cannot do justice to your post, but simply and humbly say OMG…WOW. You are very gifted. Thank you soo much for sharing.
Arce,
That was earth shattering!
Thank you for writing and sharing that momentous moment as Bette and Tina reunited their souls, hearts, spirits, mind and entire beings.
The imagery was perfectly drawn to entice and beguile your audience. The total commitment and submission shown between Bette and Tina illustrates the true meaning of love. To completely surrender and willing hand over all sense of yourself to another human being is a wondrous gift. It is something most of us will only realise through the magnificence of your masterpiece.
I applaud your talent, genius and effort in creating this superb story.
Know that this entertains and affects your readers as I savour every, word, phrase and sentence.
Thank you for making my day brighter.
Your Loyal Fan.
omfg……that was….perfect….you are really gifted
wow!!
Wow, such symbolism. Thanks, arc!
Nothing is as sweet as complete trust that is wrapped in the warm embrace of safety. Well done.
beautiful just beautiful you said it best
Excellent chpater. That was so beautiful, I have no other words to descibe that besides, beautiful.
Nice job, enjoyed it very much.
You know, there was something incredibly powerful in the way you linked these two last chapters through the symbolic walls’ theme…
At first, last time, the room’s walls that “captured” mutual love’s expression, becoming “partners with the flickering shadows of golden light that danced across the walls”.
And here, now, more intimate but more than ever symbolic walls, “the last standing walls containing her fears”…
Yes, these two brilliant and touching NC-17 chapters told much more about love’s deepest connection and shared trust than simply about sex. “Final freedom (…) more than sexual release”, the “powerful hammering of all her remaining fears wanting freedom”.
Tina as Bette’s “gatekeeper” of her soul, that was a magical idea.
You made a truly amazing work here, really. I congratulate you – and I thank you for such a reading’s pleasure. There were chapters to be remembered. Bravo !
OMG,OMG,OMFG!!!! IC, where the hell are you woman? You had better be taking notes!!!! this is what we want to see next season and none of that Jenny crap!!!!
Great job arcextl, and more really, really soon.
Uh, umm, arcee? This is just a head’s up–Yep, you’ve succeeded in showing the intensity of their connection…in fact, you’ve gone way past just showing–I think I even felt it myself! It was powerful and yet, tender at the same time….just what love should feel like! Thanks!
K
Beautiful chapter, can’t wait for more. Just love this.
WHOA! Amazing Beautiful as Always Thanks.
arceextl, WOW! Your entire story was incredible. And such a powerful ending; you leave me at a lose for words. All I can say to you is Thnak You for the pleasure and the honor of reading your work.
Excuse me, but are you TRYING to kill me??? Your storyline has pulled me through the off season, but this one just about did me in. Jeez, we’re all out here thinking, why can’t it be ME, instead of just fiction???
Keep it up, please! – It’s certainly keeping me UP!