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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 47
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In no time at all they were both languishing in the warm, silky water. Bette was between Tina’s legs leaning back against her chest; Tina had her arms wrapped around Bette with her nose buried in her hair and breathing in the sweet scent.
Tina began lightly tracing a path with her fingertips down Bette’s arms, watching as the layer of silken water atop her skin parted as each finger traveled its corridor downward.
Bette pressed back feeling Tina’s already hardened nipples. Tina’s fingers moved from Bette’s arms to a feather light dance across her belly, then each hand sliding down on either side of her hips, gently applying pressure in a soft massage – both hands moving again to meet in their slow dance at the ridge of Bette’s dark curls.
Their breathing became staccato. As Tina slid her fingers through Bette’s lips, she only lightly grazed her erect *****. Bette let out a whimper of surrender and her hips rose to the pressure being placed on her now pulsing center.
“TpleaseI need you”
“Let’s get out of the water, baby.”
They both managed to get out of the tub and dry off. Tina took Bette’s hand and walked towards the bedthen stoppedchanged direction and walked towards the table. “I think we need this.” Tina picked up the bottle of champagne and one of the glasses.
Tina put the champagne and the glass on the side table to the bed.
“Lie down, babe.” Tina pulled down one of the pillows and put it under Bette’s hips. She positioned herself between Bette’s legs and leaned her body up and over so their eyes met directly on the horizontal plane of air between them. She gazed in muted adoration and devotion for several moments at the woman beneath her. She so wanted to speak but the words would not form.
Bette’s skin began to tingle from Tina’s stare as her eyes conveyed the feelings she so obviously was not able to utter. And Bette drew those unspoken words in. She reached up and placed her fingertips on Tina’s lips.
“I have no other words either, T. Take me, baby, please make love to me and take me herelet me know I’m safely hereplease” and Bette slid her hand to rest over Tina’s heart. Tina read the pleading in this request. She knew Bette so well. There were tendrils of remaining fears within Bette that so desperately wanted their freedom. She recognized there was only one force that would finally extricate them. That would be Bette’s unequivocal acceptance that Tina’s heart would forever be her safety net.
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WoW! I’m speechless. That was one of the best posts I’ve ever read. I wish I could convey how wonderful you put all the love into words but words will not do it justice. I’m looking forward to more!
You are truly talented.
wow
BEAUTIFULL………..
amazing beautiful..post soon please
Just f*cking amazing is all I have to say, Arc
Woweee!! Now THAT”S what I call fantabulous writing!! Absolutely marvellous chapter!
dont know if you heard that where ever you live. but i did. jaws dropping all over the place. that was awesome.
OMG…WOW. That was truly amazing. You put Destined LOVE into words…I cannot do justice to your post, but simply and humbly say OMG…WOW. You are very gifted. Thank you soo much for sharing.
Arce,
That was earth shattering!
Thank you for writing and sharing that momentous moment as Bette and Tina reunited their souls, hearts, spirits, mind and entire beings.
The imagery was perfectly drawn to entice and beguile your audience. The total commitment and submission shown between Bette and Tina illustrates the true meaning of love. To completely surrender and willing hand over all sense of yourself to another human being is a wondrous gift. It is something most of us will only realise through the magnificence of your masterpiece.
I applaud your talent, genius and effort in creating this superb story.
Know that this entertains and affects your readers as I savour every, word, phrase and sentence.
Thank you for making my day brighter.
Your Loyal Fan.
omfg……that was….perfect….you are really gifted
wow!!
Wow, such symbolism. Thanks, arc!
Nothing is as sweet as complete trust that is wrapped in the warm embrace of safety. Well done.
beautiful just beautiful you said it best
Excellent chpater. That was so beautiful, I have no other words to descibe that besides, beautiful.
Nice job, enjoyed it very much.
You know, there was something incredibly powerful in the way you linked these two last chapters through the symbolic walls’ theme…
At first, last time, the room’s walls that “captured” mutual love’s expression, becoming “partners with the flickering shadows of golden light that danced across the walls”.
And here, now, more intimate but more than ever symbolic walls, “the last standing walls containing her fears”…
Yes, these two brilliant and touching NC-17 chapters told much more about love’s deepest connection and shared trust than simply about sex. “Final freedom (…) more than sexual release”, the “powerful hammering of all her remaining fears wanting freedom”.
Tina as Bette’s “gatekeeper” of her soul, that was a magical idea.
You made a truly amazing work here, really. I congratulate you – and I thank you for such a reading’s pleasure. There were chapters to be remembered. Bravo !
OMG,OMG,OMFG!!!! IC, where the hell are you woman? You had better be taking notes!!!! this is what we want to see next season and none of that Jenny crap!!!!
Great job arcextl, and more really, really soon.
Uh, umm, arcee? This is just a head’s up–Yep, you’ve succeeded in showing the intensity of their connection…in fact, you’ve gone way past just showing–I think I even felt it myself! It was powerful and yet, tender at the same time….just what love should feel like! Thanks!
K
Beautiful chapter, can’t wait for more. Just love this.
WHOA! Amazing Beautiful as Always Thanks.
arceextl, WOW! Your entire story was incredible. And such a powerful ending; you leave me at a lose for words. All I can say to you is Thnak You for the pleasure and the honor of reading your work.
Excuse me, but are you TRYING to kill me??? Your storyline has pulled me through the off season, but this one just about did me in. Jeez, we’re all out here thinking, why can’t it be ME, instead of just fiction???
Keep it up, please! – It’s certainly keeping me UP!