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Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Fifteen (based loosely on HYD: Returns)
That was a problem. Forgiveness, which was her ultimate goal, wasn’t evil; and it really wasn’t selfish.
To forgive was an act of love, she said to herself. As if hit by a bolt of lightning, she froze and stared at the spiral notebook for a minute. Love.
And there it was – the missing link.
Tina let her lips curve up into a small, sad smile. It wasn’t too late to add another number, right? She scrunched her forehead in deep thought. Seeing no harm in the deed, she wiped her chocolate-laden fingers clean with a napkin, grabbed a firm hold of her pen, poised it below the second line and scribbled down another word.
Things I Should Do To Forgive Porter In Three Weeks:
Number three, in bold and all caps, BELIEVE <3
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Precisely Fifteen Minutes Later..
“Weeeell, look at what we’ve got here..” A muscular woman with chiseled and well-defined features marveled as she stood by the steps of a newly landed Gulfstream jet. She had one of the most intimidating faces ever, yet ironically, also one of the most gentlest smiles in the world. “I think its been a long time since I last saw you in here. Welcome back to sunny LA!”
Taking the offered hand for balance as she went down the last step, Tina couldn’t help but giggle like a bashful schoolgirl. After so many years, she still felt a tinge of embarrassment whenever she saw this particular woman. Their first encounter was one for the history books. “Thanks, its nice to be back. So you’re assigned here now? I thought you said you loved your station at the gate too much to ever leave its side?”
“Ah well,” The older woman chuckled, seemingly resigned to her fate. “The higher ups insist on rotating us every other week. Some of us need the exercise, they say.”
“Of course,” Tina smiled and playfully poked the security guard’s flat tummy. Thankfully, the woman didn’t mind the contact. “Can’t have you guys moving sluggish now, can we? What if another reckless teen bursts through your defenses and starts running amok through the tarmac – chasing after planes and stuff?”
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My eyes bulge out of their sockets…WOW…54 pages. Wow, I can only bow in admiration. Thank you. On the story, both are having a hellion on the break time, man I am having a hellion on the break time and not even part of the story. I guess we havnet seen the last of the wannabe musician back. What happens next? ;)
thanks alch…another brilliant update and i actually took a bathroom break just like you said lol. i’m just afraid that since this is a long update it might take you longer to write the next? hope not, looking forward to it.
You made me so happy on a Monday morning! That was a hard feat for anybody else but you’vr done it! :) Onto the next chapter… Thanks!
Close to 15 and 3/4 LOL. That was a beauty of a car. I love toblerone! Now I must move on to the next post. Thanks alch.
wow..that was epic! But well worth the read…thank you for that ray of sunlight by way of Bette’s memory…and of course for the multitude of “..” this was a good one..
I did a little happy dance when I saw your post! I have to say the chapters were a little short…LMAO! Such a gut wrenching time for B & T. Beautifully written!
Great chapter!Now I think I’ll start loving Mondays:)Thank you for a fabulous update.:D
Thank you Alchy for such a wonderful and long read! You did a great job of weaving the scenes together. I love the Tina-Ken teasing, Bette – Sonja “recovery/addiction” moment, 3-step recovery for Tina, Sam/Bette’s conversation and the Tibette car. So very, very, very clever!!!! Ok…I sense that “Keith Arden” is somehow connected to a certain “Kate Arden.” Hm…looks like a black cloud on the Tibette reunion horizon. But…I cling to the hope that Ken’s almost secret sharing of perhaps an engagement is in the future. You know that small ray of hope is what is bringing your readers back!!!!! Get some rest Alchy…get your creative juices a break but come back real soon…we need our Alchy fix!
Wow that was great! Excuse me while I read the next part. I will say your bette is soooooo sweet
Your story always satisfies, Alchemy. You get some of everything in here, and it’s all fab. I loved this chapter. Here’s hoping that Tina can stick to #3 on her list, and I hope Bette can do the same. Great, great update, Alchemy. Thank you! :)
Brilliant chapter Alchemy – you always take such care with detail, emotion, characterization – amazing ;-) As someone said abt the previous chapter – one thing Bette still needs to learn is how to take Tina off that pedestal and treat her like an equal. Relationships mean sharing – both good things and bad – IMO that’s the biggest repair they need, the only truly important one. I loved seeing Tina & Ken again – what a great father daughter dynamic they have. I see Tina is still eating her pain, haha! The flashback was great and so was the bittersweet ending.
That was awesome, love seeing Ken and Tina together again.