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    Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Eighteen (Based loosely on HYD: Returns)

    Story written on September 13, 2009 by Alchemy10.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=74253
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    Match maid in heaven..

     

    “Why? Are you scared of her, Miss Bette?” Sonja baited coyly, noticing the anxious flicker in those expressive chocolate brown eyes.

     

    “As if.” Bette scoffed arrogantly, lifting her chin in all her cocky glory. “Please. If there’s anyone who should be afraid, it should be her. Not me.”

     

    “Really? Then w.. hey.. oh! W-why hello there Miss Tina! Nice of you to join us..” Sonja looked behind the brunette’s shoulder and waved awkwardly.

     

    “Shit shit shit shit!” Bette cursed whisperingly in chains, looking frantically around her for someplace to hide. Sonja’s humongous ass would probably give nice cover, she thought before diving right behind the stocky woman. Hey, who knows how long Tina had been standing there? If Kennard heard what she had said, then she was very much dead. Like the big pussy she really was, Bette took a tentative peek around a pudgy butt cheek and looked at the door. There was no one there. “Where’d she go?” She asked in puzzlement.

     

    Sonja grinned impishly, playfully bumping her ward’s body with her ass. “I was kidding..”

     

    “You biiitch!” Bette scowled, angrily nudging the giggling woman away. “I should choke you to death for doing that!” She snarled, dishing out a threat for the scare she received; her heart was still beating out of her chest.

     

    “Be my guest..” Sonja offered graciously, motioning to her neck.

     

    Bette chewed on her lip and considered the tempting offer for a moment before waving a hand dismissively. “Nah, your neck’s too fat. I’d probably just break my hands trying to wrap my fingers around it.”

     

    Sonja’s jovial expression soured, not knowing whether to be grateful or insulted. “Saved by my flabs, then.” She batted her lashes in mockery, surprising herself with the high levels of bravery she’d been exhibiting all morning. Maybe it was the excitement of her impending trip that was giving her the confidence boost. A trip, that because of Bette’s stubbornness, may or may not even happen. She looked sadly at the luggages she had excitedly spent the whole night putting together. “If you’re going to fire Miss Tina, I should probably start unpacking my bags now, hm?”

     

    “Sonja,” Bette took a deep breath, her face growing somber. “I really can’t do it, you know she’ll throw a fit and make my life a living hell if I tell her to leave. So will you do me a big favor and fire her for me? I’ll still allow you to take your vacation if you do it..”

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    2. this installment had me literally wheezing with laughter! so many one-liners i had to read again, they were just so good. so funny and sweet, our two stubborn soulmates – the maid scenario was a tricky proposition and you pulled it off brilliantly :-) this story is one of a kind. belated birthday wishes alchemy – i hope it was a great one – and i can’t wait for the next post

    3. You did it again alch. I wish I can do what you do. Hilarious! Need to get rid of shawty and red, something tells me they’ll be showing in the Hamptons. Awesom are you. I’m not worth, I’m not worthy! Happy B-day!

    4. This was the first I have read of your story. I read this whole post in one sitting. I will have to go back and read all the other post. Nothing else is going to being getting done around here until I’m caught up. :)This was crazy fun in places. Bette is so mean and sarcastic but this has been a fun read. Thanks for the post.

    6. I’ m very happy that you didn’ t write for a while for good things. Happy birthday Alchemy (although I’ m belated)! I hope you had a great time and a lot of drinks! As for the story, another perfect chapter as always. Thank you very much for that story. I have said it before and I will say it again: It’ s my favourite. Thank you girl. I can’ t wait for the next one. Many kisses.

    8. Happy B’day Alchy!!! May you have a wonderful upcoming year – and thank you for your gift of writing for us. First…LOL!Secondly…ROFL!Thirdly…ROFLMAO!!!!!I love fun-Alchy! (yes…I know…you had to do the drama…but you are the Mt. Everest-of-fanfic humor!” I laughed so hard…my dog started to bark with all the excitement and joy! You are simply C-O-N-T-A-G-I-O-U-S-L-Y F-U-N!!!!!! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! *btw…what a tease with the ‘almost kiss.’ :)I love Tina when she’s all “weed-like.” Brings out the flirt in Bette. So sweet! PPS!

    9. Happy Birthday Alchemy, wishing you all the best my friend. OMG that was so freaking funny and sweet, B&T are killing us here with their stbborn and crazy way there lol. Please post more, thanks!

    10. Oh I haven’t laughed that hard in quite a while. Alchemy that was just an amazing chapter, all of it. There are so many examples of your unique humor from Bette’s admission of her love for Tina to Tina’s drooling conversation with Bette concerning her breath. Awesome. Thanks for posting I loved the read.

    16. It took me 6 days to have the courage to read this Alch, I couldn’t bear to see them hurting each other that much. Then I wanted to see at what level you were so I finally read it. I am so glad I’ve done it BECAUSE I love it almost back to what I love about your story: LOVE and CARE. Thank you, thank you, thank you and a late HAPPY BIRTHDAY

    17. And funny funny funny. It just like I like it woowoo. It was funny even if they are not back back together yet thy=ey are togethr right??? It was great.

    18. Happy Belated Birthday, Alch! I feel like I’m the one getting the present with this chapter. Your humor is exceptional…had me laughing like a loon the whole way through. Too many good parts to mention starting with Bette’s horrific morning breath to Tina’s asphyxiatingly tight new uniform. Just brilliant!!

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