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Journeys – Ch 11 – “And remember the truth that once was spoken…”
Bette kissed her way down to Tina’s navel and her mouth playfully sucked the indented centershe prolonged this moment as the very thought of her downward descent was sure, she thought, to overcome her. Then, still not touching the now heated and moisture- ridden skin, Bette’s mouth kissed its way down to the hairline that was a boundary line before glory. And as she kissed to the left and she kissed to the right, Tina could muster no further discipline as her legs weakened and her hands grasped Bette’s head. Bette turned her left cheek onto Tina’s lower abdomen and, now on her knees, gently but quickly took hold of Tina’s legs and sighed in utter delight.)
TINA- “Bettepleaseplease BetteI need you”
(The voice heralded the passion to come, as Bette raised herself and took Tina in a full body embrace. She moved Tina gently backwards and then sat her on the edge of the bed. She placed her hands on Tina’s arms as her mouth took Tina lips in for a kiss. She motioned Tina to lay on the bed and under the covers and, as she continued her kiss, Bette joined her, ever so gently, ever so sensually. Continuing the kiss, Bette assumed a longed-for place above and along the fair-skinned body. And as she kissed her lovingly, and received the touches of her wandering hands welcomingly, Bette joined her palpitating core with Tina’s wet center, and hid Tina’s trembling mouth and passionate moans with her kisses. As she grasped, molded and kneaded Tina’s inviting thighs, Bette moved herself into Tina with a rhythm of unrelenting momentum, accompanied by her electrifying touches, kisses and caresses. The sounds of pleasured voices rang continuously, the rhythm intensified, the thrusting emboldened, the moments passed and passedand while looking into each other’s eyes Bette held Tina as she grasped onto the mocha beauty, lifted herself upward into Bette, and arched her body into waves of passionate release and submissiontaking Bette with her to ecstasy.
Sighing and moaning, and catching their respective breathes, they rode the wave of rapture down to a peaceful release and closeness of body and mind that only lovers can know and achieve. Bette dropped her head onto Tina’s chest, and with their legs intertwined and Tina’s hands holding her, Bette fell asleep in her lover’s bosom as Tina lost herself into a most satisfying unconsciousness.
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(26 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5)
wonderful, intense and beautiful…thanks…keep their love flowing
Well that was amazing it took my breath away. What a beautiful job of writing.. Please continue..
Ah, here is the dream again, wonderful! I have to say that this story has a very nice flow. As I read, I feel as though I am walking on a beach…swaying in a breeze…which I love to do, so this is like a welcome respite. It is moody, yet very sweet. Better still, it is lithe and melodic as if set to a very fluid, graceful tempo. I note that you use musical terms like cadence…rhythm…refrain…lyric. Are you a musician by any chance?
Wonderful you have such a way with words at least we can have some happiness in fanfic!!!
That was the most beautiful,awesome and amazing love scene I have read in a long,long time thanks you so much.
Speachless, awesome, breathtaking, sureal, Hot…. It is so amazing to read this story, Halfway thru I realized it’s PG13….it was hot like nc17….Thank you for not rushing this story, the detail is fun to read, your writing is captivating…pls continue…thankyou!!!!!
Beautiful….
Incredibly lovely….wow…I just…yeah… :)
OK, now you did it. You went a wrote the best, the slowest, the sexiest, most intense first time love scene this site has seen. Now you’ve set the standard. Others writers have written beautiful scenes as well, but what I really love about your story, the whole time, is that you took your time. Come on, you practically wrote a chapter on their first kiss! And it was great! Now another chapter on them simpling touch and finally making love. Very, Very well done. I don’t know if this is the end of the story, it almost sounded like it was, but I’d like to be selfish and say I’d love to read how you would describe what it feels like for Tina to make love to Bette for the first time-as only you can do.
beautiful…I love the way you write.
I’m almost speechless! That was amazing, intense, beautiful. A passion that is so lacking in S3.
Wow! That was an awesome chapter. Can’t wait for more.
I just got all caught up I ADORE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love the dynamic between bette, tina i love this story plase post soon!!!!!!!!!!!
This is so well written.What a window into B&T you’ve opened.
That was truly the most beautiful chapter I have ever read. I cannot begin to find the words to express the beauty of this chapter. Simply amazing. The passion, intensity, and love clearly stated in the words was breath taking. I’m in awe. “And remember the truth that once was spoken…to love another person is to see the face of God.” Never was a truth so honestly stated. Bette’s dream was so significant to where she is emotionally. It symbolizes her seeing her past and putting it behind her, for her future is with Tina. Love is truly the greatest gift we are blessed to have. It isn’t something we can create, own, or disregard…it simply is. It is a powerful source that can give and take, but when it’s true it is a blessing. I cannot begin to thank you for such an amazingly beautiful chapter. I was deeply touched by it’s beauty. Love experienced for the first time is so overwhelming…it envelops you totally and completely. You become connected to the other person and it’s amazing. It’s…ahhh. It just is. ;-)
that just left me fucking speechless…beautiful and so full of love…they way it should be
Wow, this is officially the most beautiful and intense love scene I have ever read. Thank you!
DAMN WOMAN THAT WAS INTENSE!!!!!!!!!! And I’m glad to say the “blueness” has subsided….LMAO!!!!!!! BEAUTIFUL, TRULY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!