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    Cool of the Afternoon (Time of Day 8)

    Story written on March 24, 2007 by pseud.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=65076
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    (Alludes to happenings through S4, E11.) She was sitting there, wearing jeans. She looks good in jeans.

     

    Dammit.

     

    Tina’s arm was over my shoulder. If I’d just turned my head, I could have kissed her.

     

    Would she let me?

     

    So many times I’d initiated our sex. But I’d initiated after getting some sign, some signal from Tina that she wanted us to make love. That she wanted me to take over.

     

    If I’d have kissed her once, would she let me continue? For how long?

     

    Would we have stayed poolside? We used to make love by poolside. Never during the day, but there were enough evenings when we made use of that pool. Swam naked. Teased each other. Taunted each other.

     

    She’d get me so worked up that I couldn’t stand it. I needed her. Desired her.

     

    I could have desired her as we talked, had I looked outside myself.

     

    No wonder she always runs. No wonder she’d wait for me to initiate. I can be hideous to her, still.

     

    She was sitting there, wearing jeans. Damn, she looks good in jeans.

     

    I can remember our first date when she finally dressed down. Actually, she hadn’t specifically dressed down for the date. I’d surprised her, dropped in on a Saturday morning when Tina hadn’t been expecting me.

     

    Before that we’d been to dinner. Planned events. Some fumbling in the car afterwards. I’d tried some more serious moves at my place, on the couch, but I was pushing things a little too fast, too far.

     

    This time I showed up at Tina’s early on a Saturday morning. She was up, doing laundry. She had on a pair of jeans with a button fly and an old t-shirt. No bra, I noticed that part immediately.

     

    I suppose I was a bit more composed, but then again, it was my plan.

     

    When she opened the door, I thought she was going to close it again just as quickly. She kept apologizing for her look, and for the state of things.

     

    I saw nothing but her.

     

    She blushed as I gave her the rose that I’d bought that morning. But it wasn’t the rose that had her blushing. It was me, I’m certain.

     

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    Comments

    1. There were so many possibilities in that scene, missed opportunities. But you captured the moment right in this chapter. Thank you for travelling the road of hope with us, very nice and enjoyable chapter.

    7. “I can be hideous, still.” Bette’s self-loathing is heartbreaking. An exquisitely written chapter. The rhythms and simplicity of the prose . . . just wonderful.

    8. And it didn’t have to be overly-descriptive to drive the point home which is that this was hot and just plain erotic. Sadly, Bette’s in her head overthinking stuff like funnyone said.

    9. Yes! Of course she can do right! See, it’s all very simple: Right=Tina; Right=/=Jodi. Do right, Bette. Glad to be of service. Thanks for the post, pseud.

    10. That was a great post and thanks so much for writing what we are all thinking and feeling and hoping for. Funnyone is right, Bette is overthinking this. Jodie needs to leave and let Bette and Tina get on with their lives and family. Great post.

    13. Keep hope alive! Keep hope alive! Thank you for keeping the B&T hope alive! Seeing your work here is like a return to the old days, when B&T love and TLW were new. May S4 inspire many of the previous authors to return and the newer authors to flourish!

    17. Well now Ms Pseud, there ‘s not a lot of cool left in this afternoon! How hot it is! Wow! enjoyed it as I enjoy all your stories, please keep posting, …I will surely keep rading!!!

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