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City Of Angels Chapter 5: Reflections on a tortured soul.
“I don’t think I loved anyone like the way I loved Alice. She had this constant uplifting personality that always cheered you up. Even after you had the shittiest day in your life, she would make you smile with just a simple joke. She was the most caring person I ever knew. I don’t think there was a mean bone in her body.”
A small smile spread it’s self across Dana’s lips as the memories of her lover soothed her aching soul. She was reminded of why she was fighting in the first place and why she was going to finish this once and for all.
Her mind drifted back to the day that she and Alice watched V for Vendetta in their apartment together. V’s comment entered her mind.
”Violence can be used for good.” She whispered to her self.
Camilla smiled after Dana finished up her description of Alice. She always wondered if some one out there would feel the same way about her as Dana and Alice felt about each other. She studied the sad yet stunningly beautiful features on Dana’s face. Then Dana’s smile slowly dissolved from her lips as it was replaced by a sullen frown.
“Then it was all taken away from you.” Dana closed her eyes again but this time to fight the tears that were building up.
“Like some one dangling a beautiful flower right in front of you, only to snatch it away.”
“At least you had some one to love.” Camilla said as she placed a gentle hand on the ghost lady’s shoulder. “You found your soul mate, some one who could share all the ups and downs with you. Most people never find their significant other.”
Dana looked at Camilla deep in her brow eyes. She smiled gently at the Hispanic lady in front of her. The touch of human contact felt good. Then again anything would feel good right now. She just needed something to take her mind of emotional pain that was plaguing her.
“Alice was really lucky.” Camilla said. Dana shook her head.
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(8 votes, average: 4.50 out of 5)
Fear is a powerful weapon…Poor, sweet Camilla..ooh those goons are going after her to get to Dana. I’d rather skipped c2,c3,c4 and wait for your version instead :)Thanks!
hooray u rock Eleck u really dont like to keep your readers waiting for 2 long huh do i really gotta say it? this chap was awesome and like e1 else im glad Dana didnt hook up with Camilla! aw man they figured it out… fly bird fly away! lol update soon! :)
I hope thatnothing bad hapens to camilla is a great young woman please post soon can’t wait to see what will happen next great update I love it
the plot thickens. i am so glad that you didn’t have dana hook up with camilla, that just would’ve been wrong on so many levels!! great update.
Awsome chapter!!! You are doing a gr8 job with this story,please post soon!!!!
This chapter is great and the story is getting better and better…Just keep it going!!