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Chapter VI – Empire State of Mind – Three letters
Liz whistled again, commenting as Tina twirled that the dress looked like it had been sewn into Tina’s long, slim length, and, matched with Tina’s blonde layered hair, it made the blonde’s overall look today sexy and suggestive, but luxurious. To cap it off, the blonde also wore blue nail polish!
”Damn, Tina,” Liz exclaimed, as Tina stopped twirling around, and posed for her, with one arm cocked and sporting a naughty smile, ”you look like the most expensive courtesan of the richest men in New York!”
Bette was shaking her head, smiling as she observed the two play the game out.
”Yeah, it was a job getting her here,” the brunette agreed, wiping her brow, pretending to be tired. ”I had to fight off every man almost, and more than a few women, between Canal and Houston. I think she turned a few gay men straight as we walked past them, in fact. Finally had to flag a cab down to make it here!”
Liz smiled, thinking Bette looked like some mover-shaker’s eye-candy herself. ”Maybe the two of you should open a billionaire’s-only escort service. Make serious money. Where’d you walk?”
”Up West Broadway,” Tina responded, smiling fondly at their doctor friend.
”Phew!” Liz exclaimed, throwing up both arms dramatically, ”well, no wonder!”
”You walk down the backbone of SoHo in that thing, well then every hipster, rich-guy dude living there will jump out of their windows to crash at your feet, basically! Or die trying. Of course!”
Tina laughed, and then drew an arm around Liz, to walk with her down the hall, Bette following behind, chuckling also. Liz led them to one of the examination rooms, still teasing Tina, and throwing off-hand comments over her shoulder to Bette, ”I’m serious! I’ll do the medical screening of your clients … you give me a small cut of the biz….”
They were all still laughing lightly, as Bette and Tina pretended to make gagging noises, and Liz continued ribbing them, as they entered the room. Tina moved to sit on one corner of the exam bed, while Bette stood next to her, after depositing their bags on a chair set against the far wall of the room. ”Ok, Tina, why don’t you change out from your pretty outfit, and put this on?” Liz asked, as she held out a robe to Tina.
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Ahhhh, just ask Marcus then the kids are really siblings! I like this story very much only wish you posted more often, I have no right to talk I have been pondering a new story for quite some time so you take all the time you need to keep up the quality. My story will be centered around the horse world which is the world I lived in before I had the stroke. I spent many years showing and breeding Appaloosa’s first and then paint horses I miss being able to ride and having horses the most. I have been thinking about doing this story for a long time. I will start it soon. In the meantime I will read whatever you write.,
Allons-y! Jackiee1. Hope you do return to the “horse world.” They’re magnificent animals. About what you’re writing: If it helps, just start with a barebones outline, so that you have a “straw man” you can play with. It’s also something that doesn’t need to be perfect. At times, you could be tempted to be your own worst critic. Don’t be. (Hmmm… I posted 2 chapters this weekend: not good enough? just kidding). Hang in there.
Thank you for the update.PPS. And Jacky please come back soon.
Love this story and the addition of Diane and Jules. Glad to see they are working on a second child and Bette can experience Tina during pregnancy. They will need to be careful who they choose as donor. Hope this upcoming trip is safe and uneventful. Of course that wouldn’t be fun then, would it? Thanks so much for your time in writing this wonderful story and sharing with us.
I also love this story! Why not just ask Marcus to deposit again. That’s the right thing to do if he’s still in their lives. I’m not feeling Tom for some reason. Please let Bette find out the truth in Luxembourg but not to much drama. PPS
So happy you posted again, thanks. Love the story but have a feeling a lot of drama is ahead.
Two posts in one week and both wonderful additions to this exceptional creativity. makes me wish it was a three day holiday weekend so that I could have all the time to read each word, digest and contemplate the creative imagery you have put forth. Thank you, keep up the wonderful work. The imagery between Bette creating life with Tina alone will set all screens on fire.
Thanks for the double post. Bette and Tina don’t know Tom well or his history. Maybe Tina can surprise Bette by searching for Marcus and getting him to be their donor again. They should not mess with perfection, Angie is a gorgeous child.
I love this story, and in my opinion marcus is the best choice.
Lovely story! And like the rest, get Marcus back in the picture, please. Thanks for sharing your great talent with us!
Thank you for both updates.
I agree with the others, they need to find Marcus and ask for another deposit.
Hi Skydancer
I think with Toms sperm and Bettes eggs with Tina as the birth mother would make the perfect match.
I admire your creativity with each chapter, keep up the good work.