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Brief Encounter Chapter 28
I don’t know how I got here. I had a good thing going on and I let it slip just like that. What is wrong with me? I watched as Mel got her stuff packed in her small suitcase. Maybe I should let her stay? Maybe we can talk and try to work it out. Shit!! Talk about what? And work what out? I know in the beginning that there would never be any other woman who can fill my heart like Tina had. Never. But my therapist, haha yes therapist, I did go see one as I began rebuilding my career in New York, she said if Tina is all I want then I’d probably die slowly and painfully. She suggested I take whatever comes my way that is closer to what Tina and I had. After going on dates a few times in the first second years I was here, I thought I should just give up; thinking I wouldn’t be able to find happiness again.
Then along came Mel, the woman from my past. The person who let me show the world who and what I really am. The woman who taught me what I needed to know about being gay in a straight world. She was the person to tell me it’s ok to let myself go, to show my true self. She stood by me every step of the way, and for that I am greatly indebted. And now here she is, after all those long years of being away, we are reunited once again. Of course we’ve always had that soft spot for one another, but I never have thought we’d end up being a couple again.
Mel: Ok I’m gonna go now
I stood up wondering if I had made the right choice. I walked over to the door where she has been standing with her suitcase by her side.
As if controlled by a remote device, I started
Bette: Mel, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean for this to happen you have to believe me. I wanted us to be able to work this out, I do. But for now this isn’t possible at all. Not when I’m not sure of what I’m feeling right now. You have to believe me that this is not about you.
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(44 votes, average: 3.84 out of 5)
Thumbs, it is always great to see your post! What a cliffhanger, will Tina find out how Bette really feels? Tragic hospital scene full of emotion are always excellent! Post soon, and as always, thanks for your time and talent!
What happened???????????????
OMG!! … dont leave us here waiting too long …
Hope Bette be ok!
Please dont leave us hanger for 30days Thats 720 minutes.thats a long time. Did Shane and Alice set Bette and Tina up? thanks
Was that Mel or Candace driving that car! lol
omg …. don’t leave us hanging toooo long…..
i can’t believe you just left us again with a cliffhanger like this…i don’t want to wait another month for the next chapter, please post soon
hope we don’t have to wait a month for your next post……. please
man what did i do to you you want me dead!!!!!!!!!! 30 days i will be on my death bed and no pizza for you!!!!!!!!!!!!
What will happen next? I’m as frightened as the girl. Will Bette hit by something or beated by someone? Or let’s be more optimistic: Tina saw Bette running out of the Planet. She thought Bette’s running away from her. So she rushed out to catch her like a rhinoceros? I’m not kidding. I really want the last thing to happen. ;)
you love playing with our nerves, don’t you ?! Please post soon, thank you
Oh Shit!! Don’t leave us hanging like that!!!! Post soon you tease…lol
Oh My you are definately trying to see if I can hold my breath that long aren’t you. Bette finally in thinking along the right track and she’s going to get hit with a bus right. The proverbial bus in the head. Please say it’s not so Joe.
DAMN WHAT A CLIFFHANGER!!!! Now if Bette was hurt…I AM HOPING YOU DON’T GIVE HER AMNESIA, CAUSE THAT WOULD REALLY SUCK, unless she has no recollection of any separation from Tina, that she thinks they’re still together and all..but then again that would still suck, especially for Tina. MAN POST A LONG CHAPTER SOON AND LET ME FIND OUT..OHHHHHH THE POSSIBILITIES!!!!!!!
Shit this is sad and please don’t let anything bad happen to her. Ok post soon please, thanks!
i was reading your story what a cliff hanger, omg i want chapter. like some of the other girls said please don’t leave us hanging too long
After a whole month and we are left with the same cliffhanger? Seems a little unfair.
Once a Month and you leave the story like that..OUCH THAT HURTS>>PLEASE POST SOON
please, please post again soon..
come on, don’t make us wait too long, please, post an update. only one page, or half one, please, it’s not too much for you, you’ve already write 28 chapters !! Thank you, merci !