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Angels and Mortals- Chapter 1: Prelude to Pleasantries (3rd part of Traced in the Stars, Constellations)
I’ve hardly been outside my room in days
‘Cause I don’t feel that I deserve the sunshine’s rays
The darkness helped until the whisky wore away
And it was then I realized the conscience never fades
Alex was on her way to the alley behind the Planet, when she saw the thing she hated the most: John Carson and his boys. They each carried a bat.
When you’re young you have this image all of your life
That you’ll be scrupulous and one day even make a wife
And you may bound the rays you never dreamed to cross
And if you happen to, you wake completely lost
John: Look what we have here, a little, helpless faggot!
Alex scrunched her face and stopped walking as they approached her.
John: You know what time it is, fag bashing time! Instead of having a dick up your ass, it’ll be my bat.
Boy: John, that sounds wrong.
John: Shutup Brad.!
As they closed in, Alex anticipated the swing of the bat and the crack across her back. Her body doubled over, taking more hits. She took some to her stomach, arms, legs and back. She was careful to keep her head tucked in her hands. The first time this happened, she hadn’t and ended up unconscious. She woke up the next morning with amnesia. Luckily it wore off after about a week. She let the bats hit her until her body crumbled. Two guys held her up as the other let his bat hit her stomach a couple times, before dropping it and continuously punching her in the face. He finally stopped and she spat out the blood. Her head lollied from side to side, until they finally dropped her to the floor. She layed there, a heap on the ground as John bent down.
John: Silly faggot! Dicks are for chicks!
Then him and his boys walked away, laughing. Once out of earshot, she started to pick herself up. Her entire body ached, but she knew she had to get up. She didn’t want to miss Alice at the Planet. She dragged her body to the side of the building and looked in.
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BOUT TIME!!!
wow you really make Alex suffer! poor thing. I hope Dana Helps her soon and she sees that she can go back home where she belongs. Nice to see you back writing! Post soon.
Its good
I’ll admit it’s ‘fun’ to relive Shane’s past through Alex, but the logic behind Alex’s reasoning is a bit screwed. You probably intended it that way but I’m looking forward to the day it hits her like a ton of bricks that she needs to go home and give her parents a chance. But then again, why are Shane and Carmen not looking for her? Hell, they should have some word from somewhere that ‘Shane’ is out tricking on the streets. Okay, rant over, I liked this post…it’s ‘fun’ in a bad way. I almost feel guilty…almost. PPS :)
Dana needs to guide Alex back to Alice, and Alex back to Shane & Carmen. Love the story!!!
finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but this is so sad… i am think the same thing TMAJO why isnt Shane and Carmen still looking for her. And thast a good idea … That people start talking about The old Shane like shes back and stuff i dont know. but anyways i love this… but put a little happy on the next one, just a little lol
thank god your back.. lol, fantastic update.. please get the family back togeather they deserve to be happy for once… need more like right now pease update soon… :)
so i just realized that at the top into area it said A/N at the end and i don’t see one at the end. Is it jsut one of thos crazy me things or is there really not one?????
I hope that alex goes home soon can’t wait to see where you go with this story but I love it great update please post soon