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Angels and Mortals:Chapter 2- Bruised and Bleeding(part 3 in Traced in the Stars Trilogy)
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Chapter 2- Bruised and Bleeding
Alex woke to a foot in her stomach. She groaned in pain and held the violated area. It had been a month already that this group had been beating on her every second they could. Next she knew, a knife had cut her back.
Boy: Get up queer!
She tried, but couldn’t move. She was feeling the beatings from the previous couple days.
Boy: I said GET UP!
He kicked her face. She toppled over again. Then two of the boys grabbed her and held her up, as the lead one let out his anger on her. She was hit with fists, feet, bags, metal, balls, food: anything they could, they would throw at her. Then she was backed up into the side wall of the alley she found shelter to sleep in, by the boy’s hand around her throat. He squeezed commandingly as his partners searched her for possessions. They took what little money she had made last night. This was the tenth time they had taken money form her. They continued on, all the while, Alex taking the beatings.
Shane and Carmen sat in the doctor’s office, waiting for the doctor to come back in. Shane groaned.
Carmen: What?
Shane: I need a Twinkie.
Carmen: Oh God.
Carmen rubbed her face. This was getting ridiculous.
Shane: Carmen!
Carmen hated it when she whined. She had only started during this flipping pregnancy. And she had started to eat junk food a lot more.
Carmen: We’ll get one for you right after this babe, okay?
Shane pouted. The doctor walked in. Both became attentive.
Doctor: Well, we seem to have an incredibly healthy, developed youngster here. Everything seems to be doing great. How about you two? How are the two of you?
Carmen: Good.
Doctor: I don’t mean in general, I mean as a couple.
Carmen: Fine, why?
Doctor: This is the point where couples tend to break under the pressure. What about your sex life?
Shane: Don’t worry doctor, we have MORE than a sex life.
Doctor: Good, because it’s important at this stage. Even in later stages. It is said that sex can induce labor.
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girl with all that beating she has to have an internal bleeding..poor thing..i dont know why she has to suffer like that..its sad!. That shop ownner have no heart..stupid man. And hey where is Dana??..Alex sure needs a angel by her side right now. Waiting for next chapter and i hope Alex will have better days after this!.
greatpost i feel so bad for alex and it so needless shane and carmen love her and want her back why cant she see it, could the car that screeched to a halt at the end of this chapter be theres, hmmmmmmmmm hope things get better for poor alex and thanx for the update cant wait for more.
You updated but didn’t tell me ack! Fan written would be cool. I’d do it but i stink at writing that and youd just mock me.it was a goo d update it was a little short compared to last update so i was disappointed. I have even more ideas about what may be to come.
i loke this fic and i would love to right i sceen!!!!!! i liked this update i dont care that it was short. BuT HOW CAN PEOPLE BE SOOOO BADDDDDD!!!
but i dont have IM so i dont know how to reach you or what ever so email me lol
that was one bad beating I hope that alex will be ok and I hope that she will go home soon as eveyone misses her a lot please post soon great update I love it but it is so sad at the moment
i so fucken love this storry!!! i didnt think i´d like shane pregnant, but it´s soooo cute poor alex though… if she always gets beaten up like that she should be dead by now… hope they get her to a hospital and contact shane an carm… post soon pleaeaeaease
… It’s midnight and I get to a really good part and find out this is the end for now until the next chapter… UGH!!! CONTINUE BEFORE I LOSE MY FUCKING MIND!